34TH ENTRY - HOEFORJUNGKOOK

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entry no:34
date submitted:  24/11/16
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HOEFORJUNGKOOK

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There once was a boy called Jungkook,
who had really quite the good looks.
Along came Jimin,
who committed quite the sin
by stealing his heart; take a look.

Obsessed with Jungkook was Jimin,
in his heart, Jimin wanted to break in.
"But what if he rejects me?
Or thinks that I'm ugly?
And throws my heart in the bin?!"

A friendship between them began,
as they both tried to create a game plan
of how to confess,
without all the stress
but things did not go as they planned.

This new guy called Min Yoongi
really was a sight to see,
messed everything up
by trying to hook-up
with Jimin's chocolate-chip kookie.

Fury was all that Jimin could feel.
So he decided to take the wheel,
by pulling Jungkook close
and placing a light kiss on his nose
"I have something to reveal"

Kookie, smart right, was a nickname
for the boy driving Jimin insane.
Now the time had come
for them to become one
nothing to lose; only gain

"I don't know what you do
but the minute I saw you I knew
you're the one for me,
I'm the lock, you're the key
I really want us, do you?"

A bright red flush decorated Jungkook's face
as he sat there and stared into space.
Mulling it over,
Jimin's fingers crossed over
as he waited for rejection; worst case.

That never happened instead,
Jimin felt a pair of lips on his head.
His heartbeat quickened
and his breathing thickened
and unspoken feelings were said.

The story goes on and on,
but we seemed to have forgotten one;
that troublemaker Yoongi,
who did not foresee
that soon he'd be smitten; in love.

 


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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^