22ND ENTRY - LKCHOI

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entry no: 22
date submitted: 21/11/16
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LKCHOI

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SAVIOR

Your words were curses
Haunting the minds of those who heard them
And as they spilled from your lips

I read between the lines
Discovered their truth and beauty
And turned it into poetry

Those who dared to look upon you
Were met with Medusa's gaze
Never seeing your face in it's entirety

Until I peeled off the mask
Retraced your visage
And molded a sculpture of flawless jade

Your promises were ripe lies
Red as the forbidden apple
And like Eve the victims fell

But I saved the seeds
Extracting purity from the poison
And harvested a garden of possibility

I was your redeemer
The light that pierced your darkness
You testified before the pulpit
Why did you forsake me

The nails have rusted in my body
My blood dries upon the wood
Aw-struck stares mock my suffering
But even through the indescribable pain
I can't help but smile

My love for you remains
Even as I die for your sake
Can you see your soul as I do
Do you know that it still shines without me

I've risen from this
I can't save you anymore


Did you know
Forgiveness is in your hands
Until you realize it
You will suffer eternally

Still walking with your demons
Thinking I was your god
When I'm only a messenger

I'm singing a new hymn now
My soul has found redemption
I can march with the saints
Because I didn't ignore
The sacrifices of my savior

As you cry before my empty tomb
I watch you fester in regret
My heart still weeps for you
My love
Simply out of pity

I only pray that you can be saved
From yourself
Just like I was.

 

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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^