49TH ENTRY - MOO-LAWN1315

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entry no: 49
date submitted: 01/12/16
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MOO-LAWN1315

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Such beauty so rare and unique,
it makes me think.
How can a soul be so blue,
a heart filled with nothing but tears.
The pain that she suffers all alone
make one wonder if she was hurt.
How can someone be so delicate
be shattered at a single touch?
Surely some one will come 
and mend her heart.
This goddess close to perfection
yet falls so short.
My dear, never fear,
you are that of the moon in my heart.
Your beauty shines so bright, that it could blind my eyes.
It makes me want more of that warmth.
Never mind what others think,
you will be mine and
I'll make it quick.
Your presence is too holy
for the world to embrace
so I'll take and make sure
it won't break.
Just a little bit closer,
turn your head this way.
Soon enough you will realize
that hurt is just a word
and pain will fade away.
Come a little closer,
for I can't wait to see
the jewel that awaits me.
No need to fear as it won't hurt,
my love for you is as deep
as the hole in your heart.
You see, I'm in love with you.
From the tips of your baby hair
to the bottoms of your sole.
You are amazing in ways
you can not see.
It's so clear that you can't
see what I see.
Come here closer and
I'll call you mine.
Because I will be your knight
and fight through the night.
No need to fear for what is to come 
for I am here and all is calm.
Don't try to find love any where else
since you are too fair for those
men who call you a ho.
My lady, My queen, My god,
why is that you love those who don't care for thee?
It hurts my heart to see you like this,
having tears stream done your face
and you wrecked and left in disgrace.
Come closer to me and maybe you will see
that we were meant to be.
But I guess my love isn't enough
as you walk farther down the path
of the lost.
I run towards you, risking
everything that I own.
For the sake of my goddess,
who has to stay strong.
Surely I have won you over
but your love says otherwise.
You run away from me and 
run into the arms of others
who cause you harm.
Why do you play the chords I play for you?
Is fun to be that cruel?
Still, your beauty shines through
that it melts away the pain and hurt
caused by you.
However, day by day,
month by month,
and year by year
you walk away.
You are finally done
with your play.
You spit at my face
and tell me to run away
as you had enough of me
for the day.
The pain comes as if death were waves,
one after the other with nonstop heartache.
Fairest lady, please don't do this to me!
All I wanted was for you and me to be!
Must fate be so cruel as I can still you still move closer to me.
Your smile no longer for me
because you found another reason of being happy.
Another male who keeps you company
yet why does he seek a woman's love
when you are not with him?
Do you know that you are too precious for him?
Come back and run into my hands.
I'll forgive you,
I'll forget!
Just please come back to me in the end.
My heart hurts with all your actions
as your white rose has been tainted.
Slowly I lose my queen to a tyrant,
who then makes everyone women his dominion.
I try with all my might as a knight
to shield you from his evil deeds.
Yet you push me away
and tell me to go be dead.
If it's my queen's wish to be gone,
I shall comply and fly to another realm.
But before I go,
I have one last decree.
My queen, you and I were never mean to be.
My love for you was all in vain
as you never even once turned my way.
How could I be so blind?
I pushed away love for the sake of mine.
You are as cruel as the sky,
hiding away from my eyes.
You lied and played be like a fool,
my fault as I couldn't help but swoon.
Even though a disaster happened,
I wish you no harm and hope
for happiness to occur.
No longer are we close
as our bond has been severed.
So this this song as a good-bye from the heavens.
For this is the last of me you will hear
because I'm on a journey to find
someone who I can come near.
My love will not be wasted
on a girl like you who
likes to get hated.
So good-bye vile thing,
enjoy your life.
As I will live mine with happiness in mind.
Just know that you look in the wrong places,
as a queen as pure as you have been tainted.



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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^