47TH ENTRY - MOO-LAWN1315

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entry no: 47
date submitted: 01/12/16
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MOO-LAWN1315

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CRY FOR HELP
 

The urges of death beckons me
on as they call me in the midst of the dark.
I feel myself walking, with no control of my body.
"Do it", the voices say yet I can't bear the burden.
Surely enough someone will hear my cry of pain,
yet why are they starting to walk away?

Friends, do not flee!
Friends, why have you forsaken me?
Ahh, that's right!
You mocked and ridiculed me in a time where I was weak.
You shunned and ruined me in a time where I was in need.
I can't help but look at the object,
seeing the malicious glint in its eyes.
Perhaps if I confide to those I trust,
I can fight the dark side.
However, they have scattered across with
the wind as if petals of a flower
blown by the wind.

Again, I am stuck with no way out.
It's scares me to know that I am closer to a no way out.
But, I mustn't prevail to the inner demons I hide.
However, they are growing stronger with
the hunger that I must find.

I tell myself, "Stay strong and hide yourself."
Even so, my heart detests.
With my last resort, I try to flee from my enemy.
In the end, it was all in vain.
They have found me and forced me into captivity.

With no choice, I cry as I feel the cold, smooth yet jagged metal slide.
My skin no longer soft and smooth as they have scars to prove.
Soon enough, everyone judges me and I can't help but agree.
My mistake for trying to be fake.



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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^