12TH ENTRY - DAESUNGOPPA4EVER

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entry no:12
date submitted: 20/11/16
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 DAESUNGOPPA4EVER
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DARKNESS

 

"I like Darkness," You told me once.

"I find joy in Her company."

 

I used to wonder,

when you were asleep

after a night of whispered sweet nothings

and passionate kisses

I'd stare and study your mien

wondering how a lover of tenebrosity

could love someone at the other end of the spectrum

 

I chalked it up to the popular belief

a hymn sung by romance books and movies alike

that opposites attract

 

But a heartbreak and dozens of bottles later

I learnt and I understood

How and why you were so attracted

 

You weren't in love with what I was,

what was contained within

You were in love with what you could turn me into

Because I was full of Light

bright and illuminating

The perfect body for you to taint

Because you didn't just like Darkness and Her company

You craved it like vampires did blood

You wanted a world free for Her to roam

So you set off to kill every embodiment of Light

The enemy of what you loved so much

And you did it one body at a time

Trying to let Light fade out

 

And now here I am

A carcass of Darkness that you fed drop by drop 

(so that I suspected nothing)

That once contained Light and stood out

But now faded into the dark, dark world you love so much

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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^