48TH ENTRY - MOO-LAWN1315

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entry no: 48
date submitted: 01/12/16
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MOO-LAWN1315

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Soleil et Lune

My soul cries out for the one I once called mine.
The pain of not being able to see the sun no more.
Because together, we were broken pieces fit for each other.
He was the sun while I was the moon,
he found me in the time of my low
and shined his warmth on me.
The coldness and bitterness gone thanks to him.
However, there was always that bit of ray he kept away.
I was curious as to why but
didn't pressure as to why.
Despite the secrets kept from the other,
it seems liked there was no other.
We became queen and king,
forever together in a reign.
Even so, kingdoms have times of darkness
in which caused the storm.
Soon enough the pieces that fit,
the perfect harmony, 
the warmth,
or reign was no longer there.
Problems arose which led to hurt.
No one wanting to listen to other,
shouting and cursing at each other.
Everything was crumbling and I was scared,
I can't lose him for he is my will.
Making sure that everything was alright,
I took a step back and let him rest.
Surely he will be fine and we can finely be alright.
But soon lies and murmurs are blown in,
making him want to cave in.
Don't believe for they are not true,
have you not seen that I'm good to you?
Turning blind on what I say,
Turning blind to how I feel,
The kingdom built was gone.
It's okay, we will rebuild it 
yet I was the only one pulling that rumble.
Where are you my love, I scream.
No longer with you and your deceiving schemes.
My heart shatters on hearing such venom,
but he is the one who made me whole.
Why must it be this way,
surely it can be different.
But without looking back,
he left with loud footsteps.
It was over,
everything we had.
It hurts because the heat has gone cold
and the passion gone.
Maybe he will come back,
I want to stay.
But deep down in my brain,
I know what he'll say.
I guess that's why the coldness has returned,
the queen all alone,
the kingdom gone,
still there is hope because
a piece of him is still around.
But I know he will come back 
with open arms and an open heart.
It's just time has a part
yet it moves so slow.
In the end, everything is restored to what it was like in the beginning.
Only this time bit and pieces of us are missing.



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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^