44TH ENTRY - MOO-LAWN1315

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entry no: 44
date submitted: 01/12/16
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MOO-LAWN1315

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Crimson Tears

They tell me that red is a color not to be associated with.
It's a vile color as it symbolizes blood that has been shed or even death.
However, they are wrong.
Red is a color that is strong.
A color with so much beauty yet deadly flair.

Red and I have become friends.
We first became acquainted when I first scraped my knee.
Red flowed gently down my skin.
It was also scattered across the cold snow.

My mother scolds me for being careless and told me to take better care of myself.
She doesn't know that I've become good friends with Red.
Red always appeared when I was in pain.
It was sad and pitiful yet comforting.

Growing up, people despised me, letting me know of their inner feelings.
That's when Red stayed for a while.
Red told me that in order for me to see Red,
I must cut.

I listened to Red, longing to be reunited with my friend.
It was painful but Red appeared, keeping Red's promise.
I kept cutting and cutting to the point that Red was dripping everywhere.
Red created a deep hole around me.

Whispering into my ear, 'Let go.'
Red comforted me, telling me to rest.
Ending my struggles, the darkness engulfed me.
Slowly as the life drained out of me, I felt Red smile.
'No more Crimson tears.'


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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^