60TH ENTRY - NUNEEN

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entry no:60
date submitted: 12/12/16
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NUNEEN

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RISE

How high had had they stood. One part of an acclaimed trinity, of which only the other two parts remained acclaimed. Down. They descended once they were spread too thin. So much potential, so much of it expended in the longest and most unnecessary silences.

Robbed by that tyrant that had allowed it to happen.

Rise.

Rise.

Rise.

Is it too late to rise?

Many say yes, and the tyrant still sits on his throne. He still builds walls around them, ropes them, suffocates them. Do they even want to break those walls? Because I cannot break it for them not matter how hard I try. They say they want to rise, but they do not fight to dispossess the tyrant of his ability to dispossess them. They live on in conformity. Pressed down on all fours.

Please stand, please fight back. That world could have been yours.

It had slipped from their fingers, right in front of their eyes. And in obscurity they now live. Climb up that ladder to where you had once been. Though with every month you wait, it's harder to win. Over time that ladder decays in debris. As time passes, the hope withers, and as the hope withers, the darkness spreads inside of me.

Attempts at climbing the ladder are made- enthusiasts rejoice: this could be our day. A day that never came. A level never reached. Pushed off of the ladder, pressed down. All fours. Pressed down on the ground. Dig the ground from beneath them and further down they go. Shake the ladder. Break it. Make the steps further apart. Burn it. Have them carry it around the world, because maybe that desired pedestal is lower somewhere else, and such a broken ladder could help them get there.

I want to fix that ladder. I want to help them rise.

I want to smite the tears that fell from their eyes.


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writeofthevalkyries #1
Chapter 87: I didn't place anywhere, but thank you for hosting this contest! I'm just happy I got to see so much talent all together in one place. People like me who didn't win, take heart! There were so many wonderful and inspiring entries, I'm sure it was difficult for the judge to pick only a few winners. Know in your soul that one contest does not define who you are as a writer, and that in the end you are the only critic who truly matters; decide that your passion and imagination are a victory in themselves, and please, never stop writing. Also, congratulations to the winners! You accomplished something exciting. Find someone to brag to! Even if it's only an online contest between friends and fellow writers, this competition was held by a real person. There's a person out there who saw something special in your writing, and I think that's pretty amazing. And finally, to all of you who joined the contest like me, you have my respect. It takes courage to show your writing, to share a little piece of yourself with us and I admire that. Everyone here deserves to feel proud. ❤❤❤
Kai-chan
#2
thank you for the honorable mention! and thank you for hosting this lovely contest, congratz to the winners!
I'm curious though,will you be hosting more poem contests in the future?
OVERDOSE-JUNGDOK
#3
Chapter 87: wow an honorable mention for moi? I read everyone else's and I'm shook that I was picked at all :0 thank you hosting such an amazing contest were I was able to grow and learn<3
sleepingprince
#4
Chapter 87: Thank you for the honorable mentions :) I didn't expect that . I will continue to improve and work harder . Have a blessed day ^^
Exoright
#5
Chapter 87: I consider myself a poet now haha since I'm honorably mentioned, Thank you so much for holding this contest, I am eagerly waiting to read the poems I've not read yet...
I only have three stories in my bucket at the moment, so you can Upvote and subscribe those, and for remaining two, just Upvote and Subscribe to anybody in the contest who didn't won but have great poems in your opinion :)
Fluffoutprincess #6
Chapter 87: Congratulations to winner :) I'll come back to read poems, I even forgot what I wrote
ann1914
#7
Chapter 87: Congrats to the winners! I wasn't even sure I'd manage to snag a place in either of the categories but I'm glad that you liked an entry of mine. ^^ I haven't read everyone's entries (because dang, 79 entries total is a lot) but I'm sure they're all great! I'll definitely come back to read your explanations and maybe get to read a few more of the entries (I forgot where I left off though), haha.

Congrats to the winners again and thanks for hosting this cool contest!
Kai-chan
#8
Hi, sorry to disturbe but I want to know when will the results be out? No pressure though take your time ^^