I'm Sorry Eli

Always Loving You♥

{Author's POV}
The guests are applause their hands when the guests watching the wedding kiss and they are officially married.
Being couple of husband and wife..
Wow!
"I hope they will be happy together forever and ever! Like in the fairytale hahaha LOL xD"
Nana said and Kiseop nod and smilling at her.
Kiseop feel happy too with his old friend..
So,many guests lined up to congratulate to the bride.
"Congratulation bro!!"
Kiseop hug his old friend. His friend so cute and handsome,also friendly with Nana.
His name is Kim Jae Seop but,his nick name is AJ..
And his wife (now,she is his wife ^^)
her name is

Oh Ha Young






But now turn to be Kim Ha Young ^^


"Nee.. Gomawo for present to my wedding!"
He hit Kiseop's shoulder with slowly and a friendly tone from AJ's voice.
"Haha ^^ i'm so proud of you AJ-ah!"
Kiseop punch his shoulder with slowly.. Aish,this boys! -_- LOL
"Oh,ya! Ha Young,congratulation.. ^^ now you will be Umma.."
Ha Young blushing when Kiseop teasing her like that.
"Aish,Kiseop Oppa ><"
She hit Kiseop's arm.
"Aw! Ha Young-_-"
"Wleeeek" She show her tounge.
"AJ,congratulation.." Nana sheak his hand and he nod his head.
"Gamsahabnida Nana..^^"
"Ha Young,congratulation.. Be happy,ok? ^^"
Nana shows her thumbs and she giving big hugs for her.
"Nee,gamsahabnida Nana Onni^^"
She smilling at Nana.
"Wow,i'm older than you. But,you have to married. I'm so envy with you Ha Young^^"
Ha Young pinch her arms and she is so blushing.
"Onni.. Haha! I hope you will get married soon.. With him.."
She winked her left eye and toward Kiseop.
"W.. What?" She is being awkward when Ha Young's eyes toward of Kiseop.
"You guys are compatible ^^"
"But,Ha Young.. We are not dating."
Suddenly,Nana feel so awkward and she stuttering like mad.
"Ok.. So,please eat your dinner first my special guests ^^..
I'm sure you guys already feel hungry"
She shows her big smile and Nana just giggle.
"Nee.. Ok ^^ but,you guys don't forget to eat your dinner too ok?"
AJ and Ha Young nod.
And Kiseop want to pull Nana's hand but,suddenly AJ say..
"Don't forget to feed your yeojachingu,Kiseop."
Nana and Kiseop feel so surprise and they are look at AJ in the same time,
he still giggle like a stupid person.
"We are not dating AJ.." Nana and Kiseop said in the same time,again -_-
"Wow! Very compact.."
Ha Young said with a slightly sarcastic tone.
Nana keep her head down to closing her red face.
So,they are walking together to the served table with a many foods.
She took the plate and she fill with a rice,fillet fried fish,carrot and two Kimchi.
She took a cold water glass and she looking for Kiseop.
Where is he? And then... Nana found him!
How quickly he took the food and found empty chair and table.
Nana walking to his table and she sit beside of him..
"Jal mokettsubnida,Sunbei ^^"
She said while took her chopstick.
"Nado jal mokettsubnida,Nana.."
Nana and Kiseop eat their food without speaking.
Because,Kiseop doesn't like someone who ask him to talking when he eating his dinner,breakfast or lunch.
After dinner,the dance is held for the bride and also the guests who attended.
Nana,Kiseop and many guests watching AJ and Ha Young dancing while kissing..
Nana covering with her hands.
"Aw,so romantic that couple! (ʃ⌣ƪ)"
She said.
She can hear all of the guests screaming like their so hysteric when the guests watching that romantic scene.
Kiseop looking at her with surprise.
“What happend with her? Did he want AJ kiss her too?” He said in his mind.

"Do you like AJ?" He asked to Nana.
"M.. M.. Mwo?" Nana feel so surprise.
"What do you mean by that Sunbei?"
"So many girls will falling in love with him.
And they will falling in love with AJ since they met him for the first time..
Yes,he is so kind,handsome,although he is little nag,friendly,smart and loyal friend.
He is also cheerful."
Nana still watching AJ dancing with Ha Young.
They are looking and smilling each other. Nana nod her head and she smile at Kiseop.
"Nee. You're right Sunbei! Of course Ha Young will falling in love with that cute guy! I hope..
They will be happy together..
Yes,i like him. As a friend.
I was to known him,i'm not easy to falling in love with someone who new that i met.
Except,he is the one a special person for me."

Nana's eyes still notice her empty glass but,Kiseop still notice her.
"Me too.. I'm not easy to falling in love with someone who new that i met.
But,who's that someone who make you falling in love with him?
Are you in love Nana?"
Suddenly,Nana feel her heart beating so faster when Kiseop asked that question.
Nana become so awkward and blushing,she didn't dare to look at Kiseop...
“Oh,Nana!!! How great you are! Now,you make him asking you about that someone who make you falling in love.
What should i answer to him? Hmm.. Maybe i must make him curiosty.”

"Why? Do you want to know?"
He gaze me with his cold expression.
"Just asking. And,if you don't want to tell me,it's alright!"
Nana turn around and back to watching Ha Young and AJ dancing.
But,so many guests dancing with their couple..
“It was you Kiseop,someone who was made me falling in love. You almost make me drown in your love.. Not almost but.. Yes! I'm drown!” Nana hope that Kiseop want to invite her to dance because,
at the prom nite she didn't have a chance to dance with Kiseop. With this sweet mini dress.
"Nana.." Kiseop called her and she turn around.
"Nee?"
"You are so beautiful tonight.."
Nana's face become a red because she's so embarrassment.
Because,someone who make her falling in love praised her beauty.
"Gamsahabnida,Sunbei.."
She said with a shy expression then,Kiseop can look her expression.
"You don't have to shy Nana.."
“A.... What? He notice my expression when i'm blushing! >.<”
Nana said in her my mind.
Suddenly,Kiseop give her right hand to her.
"So many guests dancing with their couple.
Although,we are not dating.. Do you want to be my partner tonight?"
His expression still cold it looks like a cube ice.
But,his words not a cold like his expression..
That words making Nana melt already.
Nana give her left hand to him and slowly,Kiseop pull her.
"But,i don't understand how to dancing with a good looking like them?"
Nana show her finger towards many guests dancing with that couple and AJ dancing with Ha Young..
"Come here.."
He pull her waist and it makes her heart beat so faster again.
“Kiseop Sunbei.. I'm gonna get a heart attack if you do this to me >.<”
"Put your left hand on my shoulder.."
Nana's left hand touch his left shoulder.
"Clutch my left hand with your right hand.."
Kiseop's fingers touch her fingers with his finger and his left hand clutching Nana's right soft's and smooth's hand.
Nana can't control her self when her right hand clutching with Kiseop's big and warm left hand.
It feels like she didn't want to release Kiseop's hand.
Then,Nana and Kiseop dancing like AJ and Ha Young she can following Kiseop step foot with slowly.
Many guests watching them..
And their praise couple of Nana and Kiseop!
"Look! That girl.. She is so beautiful and elegant ^^"
The boy said to her Umma.
"Nee.. She is. Beautiful like a Princess ^^"
Her Umma agree with her son's opinion.
"Aw! That boy.. Who's that girl?
She's dancing with him! I'm so envy >.<..
They are a couple?"

The girl who wearing a ballerina dress,poke her friend.
"Nee.. I guess,they are so compitable ^^"
They are looking each other and smilling..
She just keep her head down and giggle.
"I'll remember about our prom nite when we were in Senior High School at Melbourne."
Nana smilling at him when,he talk about the sweet and bad memories in the Senior High School.
"Do you remember?" Nana asked to him.
“Should i feel sad when he remember about the events in the prom nite?
Or feel happy because,Kiseop remember?”

She said in her mind.
"I remember when you pulled me and you said that you wanna talked to me
but,suddenly Helena pulled my hand dance with me."


That night,you broke my heart Kiseop. That night,you leaved me alone.
And now you make me wanna cry when you make remember about our during
Senior High School. Especially,prom nite. The night that i want to say,i love you”


She said again in her mind.
She felt so a weak when,Helena pulled his hand.
Helena was a beautiful girl but,she was so arrogant. And she was Nana's enemy..
She would like to tell him that she loves Kiseop for along time but,
Helena came to front of Nana and took Kiseop from Nana.
“Now.. You didn't asked me like this
"Nana,what do you want to tell me that night?" huhh..”


She's feel so angry with Kiseop but,she can't showing that feel to him.
Because,she know that wasn't Kiseop fault.
"Hmm.. Wait a minute Nana..
Now,you wearing the dress that you have woar at the prom nite,right?"
“OMO!! Finally,he remember my mini dress.. Aaaaaaaaa”
Nana nod her head and smilling at Kiseop.
"Beautiful."
"Umma bought this to me when i told her that i would present to the prom nite at school."
"Hmm.. She has a good taste! Same like you. Are you pink addict?"
Nana nod her head again.
"Same like Hyuna.."
"She was love pink colour because of me..
I gave her some toxic to made her falling in love with a pink colour. You know what?"
"Mwo?"
"Symbol of pink colour is the sign of love." Nana explaining to him and he agree with Nana's opinion.
"I'm agree with you.
For me,pink is the best colour for the girls who always fill their heart with a romantic love."


{Kiseop's POV}
*In the Kiseop's car*

I watching her,she just leaning her head and sleeping with a peacefully. I guess,she's so tired..
The street is jammed and takes three hours for waiting the green lamp..
I notice her face when she is sleeping in my car.
Her long blondy hair,her sharp nose,her white skin,her mini dress,her skinny body,her long feet.
She is so gorgeous..
Her appareance when she still 18 years old it's so different with now!
Nana.. You more beautiful than i've never ever thought..
What happend with me?! Why did i notice her like this?
As if i want her. Hmmm... No way i like her.
But,suddenly her hands move and rub her arms.
Then,she wake up from her sleep..
"Kiseop Sunbei.."
"You're freezing?" I asked her.
"A little bit freezing.."
She keep to rub her arms and rub her shoulder.
I see her shoulder is .

Hmm.. I must close her shoulder with my coat if i'm not do that,she'll catch a cold.
I release my black coat from my body and i give to her.
"Here is.. You can wear my coat. Your shoulder and your back is ..
You can catch a cold if you didn't close your body."
"Nee,gamsahabnida.." She wear my coat and go back to sleep.
"Sunbei.." She called my name and i don't know i think,she's already sleeping.
"Nee?"
"Thanks.."
"For what?"
"Secret ^^" What did she talking about? Did she want try to be a funny? Hmm.. But,she is so cute.
"Sunbei.."
"Nee?"
"You're not freezing?"
"Ani.."
"If you feel freezing,i can give it back this coat to you."
"No,you don't have.. I know you need that."
"Sunbei.."
"Waeyo?"
"Do you ever think i'm beautiful?"
I don't know why.. But,her question make my heart beat so faster.
Between that i wanna say "Molla",or "No,you are not",or "Yes"..
But,what should i answering her with a lies? "Yes.. Why?"
She just keep silent for... Three second,i guess.
"The men who make me falling in love with him,he doesn't love me i guess."
"How long you have this feeling for him?"
"Five years.."
"Hmm.. Have you ever tell him?"
"Ani.."
"Wae?"
"Someone took him from me,in the special night for me."
"He have a dating with that girl?"
"No.."
"So?"
"She was having fun with him. Just having fun without noticed my present..
That i would to told him that i love him but,i couldn't control my self.
I felt so weak and i was crying in the night sky.. I guess,he didn't care about me."
"Poor you are.."
"Sunbei,you don't have to feel that you poor to me. You might be understand."
Understand about what?
But,i don't want to asking her so,i just nod my head.
The green light is turn it on.. So,i continue to ride my car.
And drop Nana to her home with a safe..



{Hyuna's POV}

I open my eyes then,i see Eli's face front of me.
He's sleeping beside of me with a peacefully.. What time is it?
I looking at my alarm clock. It's already to 8.00 pm.. I must waking him.
"Eli,wake up.. Chagiya,t's already 8.00 pm.."
He open his eyes and smilling at me.
"Chagi.. I'm sorry. I guess you are so tired because you accompany me for along time.."
He sheak his head and kiss my lips.
"Aish! Don't you ever say that.. I will do anything for you.. Hmm.. I must go home now."
I drop him until the front of my fence house.
"Be safe to ride your motorcycle chagi..
You are so tired and sleepy now."
"Ok,don't worry.."
I hug him and kiss his left cheeck.
"Annyeonghi jumuseyo chagi,saranghae.."
I said with a soft voice and he reply my words.
"Ne,annyeonghi jumuseyo chagiya.."
So,he leave me with his motorcycle.
Anyway,where is Nana Onni? She didn't have a reach to home..
Hmm.. I'm alone tonight. I go back to my bedroom and i hear my cell phone ringing.
It's Lizzy..
"Yoboseyo?"
"Yoboseyo Hyuna,i wanna tell you about E-Young.."
"What? E-Young?"
Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla...
"Oh... So,she want to apologize to me Lizzy-ah?"
"Nee.. But,she still afraid to showing her self front of you."
"Hmmm... But,i'm so proud of her.
Because,she was realized with her self that what she did it was same like a devil!
And,she will do anything for Kevin..
Until she broke her relationship with friends. Like Bekah,Joo Yeon and So Young (¬_¬͡) "


{Nana's POV}
It feels so warm can sleeping in his car and closing my body with his coat.
He treat me with a sweet and romantic tonight..
God,did he know that someone who make me falling in love for four years,it was him?
Lee Ki Seob,you must realize. I am the person who in love with you..
We were together during Senior High School although,we are not familiar friends.
But,now we are too close because we are working together in the same hospital.
We were together for took care of patient and together to treat my younger sister.
I'm pretend to sleep but,he think that i'm sleeping..
No.. If we have to reach to my home,i just want he wake me up from my sleep. With his cold voice like ice cubes..
15 minutes we have to reach to my home and...
Did he want to wake me up?
Suddenly,i feel he touch my hand.
"Nana.. Wake up,we have to reach to your home. Nana.."
I pretend to being like i am wake up from my sleep.
"Hmm.. Oh.. Nee.. Mian,i fell to sleep."
"Gwaenchanayo.."
Before release my sit bell,i release his coat from my body and i give him.
"Gamsahabnida. I'm feel better now.."
He took his coat from my hand and nod but,he keep to gaze me.
"Nee"
"Nana.."
"Waeyo?"
I see that he come closer to me..
He,touch my chin.. W.. W.. What did he want to do to me? I guess...
It was same like in my dream! ~(♥▿♥)~ ~(♥▿♥)~
"Hmm.. Don't forget to drink a water,before you go the bed.
Your lips it's too dry."
DEG!

I thought,that he want to kissed me..
"N.. Nee.. Gamsahabnida for your advice ^^.. Hmm,annyeonghi jumuseyo!"
I take a bow to him and he reply me.
"Nee.. Annyeonghi jumuseyo."
"Be safe,Sunbei.."
"Nee,gamsahabnida" I open the fence and lock it..
I open the door with my key
(just in case if Hyuna fall to sleep and she doesn't hear that i knocking the door.)
I'm yawning and sit on my couch.. It such a beautiful night with him.
If he give me that "Kiss good night"
i guess,i can't sleeping and then,i've got Insomnia attack!

"Onni,you are home! How's your date with him?"
"It was sweet and romantic.. Then,when i want to get out from his car,i thought..
That he want to kissed my lips but,i was wrong.
He just said that my lips was dry and advice me like this
“Don't forget to drink a water”
hmm.. If he really really kiss me,i swear! That was my first kiss.. (ʃ⌣ƪ)"
Hyuna giggle and pinch my arms.
"So much hope that you wanted Onni! Haha LOL xD ok..
Now change your clothes Onn,and we must go to sleep."
I nod my head but,i pinch her thight.
"Ok.. But,why you don't go to sleep? It's already 11.30 pm!
Tomorrow,you must go to school Hyuna >.<"
"Aish!! Nee.. Don't pinch me Onni!!"


{Author's POV}
Hyuna sitting on the bench at the park in her school.
And she just daydreaming,thinking about her with Kevin.
Will they still be friends? Or their friendship will be ruined because of this love?
“Kevin... I love you more than a best friend but,i love Eli first. And now,i'm his girlfriend.
As you know,we have a promised that we always and forever be a best friend.
But,we broke our promise that we had to made since four years ago.”
She said in her mind. She touch her necklace around her neck,
Eli gave it to her a few weeks ago. And Hyuna looking at the bracelet that she wearing today on her left hand..
This bracelet is a special bracelet for her.
Bracelet of their friendship that they've intertwine when they were
still in Junior High School.


*Flashback*
"Happy birthday Hyuna!! ^^"
Kevin broke the three balloons that was at front of Hyuna and Hyuna was shouting very loudly when the ballons broke,when she heard a balloons's voice was broke near her ears and right at front of her face.
"Kyaaaaa!!!!!! Kevin >.< I don't like the sound of ballon's burst!"
She was closed her ears with her hands.
"Haha mianhaeyo! I just want to make surprise for you ^^"
Kevin threw that balloons (already broke) and he was hugging Hyuna with tightly.
"Nee.. Gamsahabnida. I'm so deeply moved :')"
Hyuna saw that,Kevin was hidden his hands behind of his back and
she was very curious what was that stuff that Kevin hidden from her?
"What's that Kevin?"
Kevin being awkward when she asked like that.
"Just.. Just.. Close your eyes..." She was closing her eyes.
"And give me your left hand"
She was giving her hand to Kevin and Kevin put a bracelete on Hyuna's left hand.
"Now,open your eyes!" Slowly,her eyes was opened.
"Wow! It's beautiful,Kevin.."
She praised the beautiful necklacke the given by Kevin.
"You like it?" "Of course ^^"
"This is our bracelet's friendship.."
He was showing his hand with a same bracelete the he woar it.
"Really? Gamsahabnida!!!"
Hyuna was jumping to Kevin and she was hugging Kevin.
Then,Kevin carried her body and they were around like a ballerina.
"Love you my bestie!" He said and hugged her. "Nee.. Love you too!!"

*End of flashback*


She touch her necklace and her bracelet.
Suddenly,Kevin touch her shoulder and Hyuna turn around at him.
"Kevin?"
"What are you doing here Hyuna?"
She's so awkward when Kevin found her in this park.
Daydreaming about him and Eli..
Kevin sit beside of you and he gaze your face with many of question.
"Gwaenchanha?" She nod her head.
"Mianhae,if you doesn't like my present. I will leave."
He stand up from the bench but,Hyuna pull his hand.
"No.. Stay here!" Kevin back to sit on the bench and notice her.
"Are you sure? I think you're not good today."
She won't have an eye contact with Kevin but,she just nod her head again without speaking.
"Come here.." He pull this tiny girl to his chest and hugging her with tightly.
She close her eyes and feel enjoying with Kevin's hug..
She can feel his warm arms.
"Hyuna.." Kevin call her with his smooth voice.
"Nee?" She answer his call with his smooth voice too. And smilling.
"I love you.."
For the one second,he can feel Hyuna's heart beating so faster and her face
became a red like a Strawberry's doll.
She smilling with a little shy in her smile then,she hug him and leaning her head on
Kevin's left shoulder.
"I love you too.. But,"
Kevin cover with his finger.

"I know. You love Eli too.. He is your boyfriend.
I'm sorry for making you feel confusing and have to much thinking.
I don't.. I don't mean to broke our friendship.
I.. I.. I don't know why i'm falling in love with you!
And,i don't know when this love come to my heart.
But,i don't want broke our promise that we have made four years ago..
I.. I.. Really really in love with you Hyuna.
So,that was my reason. Why i want to have your lips?
Because,i want to say that i love you."

Her eyes became a big like a frog. And she throw her eyes from Kevin..
She didn't dare eye contact with Kevin.
"So,you.. Last.. Last night,you kissed me 'cause you.."
Kevin nod her head before Hyuna could finish her words.
"I just want.. To say that i love you Hyuna. But,i can't."
Someone who make her feel warm and comfort today,only Kevin.
That she believe Kevin love her so much..
"How much do you love me Kev?"
Kevin just giggle and pinch her left cheeck.
"I can't describing that how much i love you Hyuna.. I can't. But,i can feel it from my heart.
I love you."
Suddenly,Kevin see her tears flow from her eyes and Kevin remove her tears with her thumbs while smilling.
"What should i now? Break up with Eli? And be your girlfriend? I.."
"Ssst.. You don't have to be my girl. You don't have to break up with Eli.
I think,he's more better than me.
I believe him that he can treat you like a Princess and love you with all of his heart.
I'm sure you will be happy with him,Hyuna."
"I know Kevin but,i.. I don't wanna hurt you and Eli.
Really i can't choose between you and Eli."
She grab Kevin's hand and clutching it. Kevin embrace her shoulder and hug her..
More tightly that he didn't want to release her body from him.
"Mianhae.." He whisper that word near her right ear.
"Gwaenchanha.." Then,slowly Kevin touch Hyuna's chin and she close her eyes.
"Kiss me,Kevin" Kevin and Hyuna close their eyes them both.
When,Kevin's lips could touch Hyuna's lips..
Someone's come and then applause his/her hand.
Then.. Hyuna and Kevin open their eyes and see who's that someone?
He is Eli!
"E... E.. Eli?"

Hyuna stand up from the bench and Eli gaze her with his sharp eyes.
"Why are you guys won't continue that romantic scene huh?"
Hyuna looking at Kevin but,he keep his head down.
"Eli.. I.."
But,Eli cut her words
"Hyuna.. I heard that! I heard your conversation with Kevin.
Until you were want to kissing with him.
That was romantic scene that i've never seen. Romantic but,i hate it!"
She sheak her head and her tears flowing again.
"L.... Let.. Let me explain Eli! I.. I didn't mean to.."
He cut her words again.
"You didn't meant to cheating behind of me? Really? So,what was that? You said
“Kiss me,Kevin”.
Hey! Who the hell your boyfriend?! Me or Kevin?!"
Hyuna can't control her self then,she just crying but,he didn't care with her tears.
"Just save your tears Hyuna! Thanks for everything.."
Then,Eli leaving them.. He walking to the school's building.
Hyuna scream her name but,he ignore it
. "Eli! No.. Wait!"
"Go! Run.." Kevin told her and she nod her head.
She running with faster and hug Eli's back.
"Let me go Hyuna!" He release Hyuna's hand around on his back and his stomach with a rough.
"Mianhae,Eli.. I didn't meant to did that.
I.. I.. I'm sorry. I really really love him. But,i'm still loving you."
"How dare you said that you love me but,you love another guy. Hyuna..
Do you have a brain? Can you think about it?"

Hyuna can not believe that Eli issued his rough words to her self that she never hear from Eli.
"I guess,i'm finish now!"
"No! Eli! No..." He leaving Hyuna with her tears and she sitting on the grass while crying.
She cover her face while crying with her hands..
Crying with a loud voice. Kevin running with fast and pulling Hyuna's body to stand up..
He hug her with tightly and he remove her tears.
"Mianhae.. It's all because of me."
Hyuna sheak her head.
"Ani.. It's my fault. I shouldn't told you to kissed me. He was angry because of..."
Kevin cut her words
"Me.. Because of me.
If i didn't came to here and accompanied you,and told that i love you,maybe..
He would angry like this. And fighting with you."
KRING!!!!!!!!!

"The bell is ringing.. We must go back to the class.
But,you must washing your face.
You don't want to the teacher and our classmate know you have a crying?"
She sheak her head and following Kevin then,Kevin embrace her body.


{E-Young's POV}
I throw my drink's cane to the trash but,suddenly..
From the far away i see Kevin embrace Hyuna's shoulder.
I guess they have been to the park and they want to into the school's building..
I see that Hyuna crying,she covering her face with her hands.
What did Kevin done to her? Hmm.. I guess,it wasn't Kevin.
But,suddenly Kevin shows front of me!
"Ke.. Kevin.." I'm so awkward when we have eye contact then,i smile at him and also to Hyuna.
Hyuna remove her tears but,she didn't reply my smile she just looking toward her shoes.
"E-Young?"
"Hmm.. I must go back to the class! Annyeong ^^"
I'm running so fast 'til they can't find me.

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RainaSeoyounKo #1
Why is E-Young and Tia evil TT.TT
Can't wait to read it tho!! Hehe
music101
#2
Chapter 40: Omg, it was sooo sad and I really enjoy the story:)
Crystalic09
#3
Pordon me,what do you mean? Sequel of what?
MissUnderstand
#4
Chapter 36: Will there be a sequel?
Crystalic09
#5
Really? Wow i did it how to use the true of grammar ^^<br />
Thanks..<br />
I will continue if i have to finish to writing my story until the ending ☺
yeongyu #6
heyyo sist~ good job =3=<br />
nice story and good grammar, i thought<br />
continue your story, okay?<br />
ppyeong~<br />