Intro

High school fever

Jaehyo was getting ready for another day of school, he sighed and looked in the mirror another day in the hell hole they called High school. It was unfair, he loved learning and so when he finished middle school he was excited to go to High school. He couldn't have known then that his best friend was going to betray them and stand by as his friends made his life hell. To be honest he never actively contributed to the bullying, but standing by and laughing while they did hurt him so much more. 

He was putting his hair in a ponytail when he heard the doorbell ring. He smiled, at least he could always count on Ukwon. Excited he ran down stair to open the door. 

"Ready to go?" the blond asked him.

''Yeah''

The way to school was nice and calm, Ukwon wasn't a big talker so Jaehyo mostly talked about what he'd done is in his weekend while the other boy listened. His stomach filled with nerves when they neared the entrance of the school and for a moment he debated if he would just turn around and spent the day in bed, but unfortunately he had two test today so he mustering up every bit of courage he had he entered the school.

It was calm in the school, most students were still tired from the weekend and ignored them as they walked into the school. Knowing his luck though he knew this peaceful moment wouldn't last for long and so soon enough he heard: ''Hey face!'' followed by loud laughter. Jaehyo just sighed and Ukwon patted his back. He had always stayed by his side even though he had now also become the victim of the famous "'Block B'' gang. 

Ukwon had go to another class so with heavy feet Jaehyo walked to his first class: math. He loved math and the class was rather nice because he could sit next to his other friend Taeil. Only downside was that they would all be there too. Nervously he entered, they were already there of course loudly laughing while discussing wild stories from their weekends. Maybe if he was really quiet he could walk past them to the back of the class where Taeil was already waiting for him. 

Walking as silent as he could he walked past them while keeping his head down. He made it, they actually ignored him. Just when he was about to pass the last member he suddenly tripped and fell on the ground. Due to the loud laughing it didn't take him long to figure out that he had tripped over someone's food. Nervously but also a little angry he looked up. Looking up to the person who had tripped him tears formed in his eyes

''Minhyuk.''

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chewychoc-o
#1
KYAAAAH I LIKE IT
andreveronica #2
Chapter 1: This is so good asdfghjklñ I was waiting for one of those fics when the bad guy stayed with the principal character but no >u<
The end was so
ChocolateDragon #3
Chapter 11: Wahhh how can you leave me hanging like that TwT I look forward to the sequel!
sarahjang
#4
Chapter 11: Ahh I loved this story, sad that its over but I can't wait for the sequel♥♥
xScarlette #5
Chapter 10: YAS! Jihoon! :D
ChocolateDragon #6
Chapter 9: /facepalm right after I just commented too...
WOOOOOOO Jihoon is here!
ChocolateDragon #7
Chapter 8: Squee! This is really good! Bear with me as I try to critique your work~
There are a few plotholes, those which I hope you are aware of (like from other comments? Didn't check though sorry ><) so you may wanna check those out. Secondly, try to have a clear distinction of character of narration and the actual characters. Some descriptions sounds normal in narration, but a little awkward in character speech, unless you make that their personality. Like the "just let me in Minhyuk" which sounds a little awkward in actual speech as a metaphorical sort of thing, I mean it could sound more appropriate if you're talking about penetration (ahem). Some other language issues like in an earlier chapter, "make his homework" you mean do his homework? :P or maybe it escaped the filters of the proofread?
And uh, maybe this is just me, but I got the feeling that they're disgusted with Jaehyo being gay in the first few chapters. I begin to understand that its just Minhyuk being a little and perhaps even being the gay one, thus tryna combat his own unacceptance of himself by rejecting and estranging himself from Jaehyo. Correct? :P but my point is, you could be a /little/ more clear about the situation. Just a suggestion.
There is something interesting going on with Minhyuk though, other than perhaps liking Jaehyo part. I like that :D
also where is PO ;_; can't wait for him to appear, wonder what character is going to get with a quiet one like Taeil?
Sorry for such a long comment ._.
xScarlette #8
Chapter 8: oh my god! I'm gonna die xD how dare he! D:< well...I'm waiting for some taepyo :D the tags bruh
KrazyKowaiGG #9
Chapter 8: I love this so far ^_^
sarahjang
#10
Chapter 5: It was a bit sad but I'm glad they're talking again and hopefully sorting things out ^^