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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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[AN: Yes, it's a double update °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖° It's a miracle, I know. I'm currently waiting for a new poster for this story, and usually I'd update the story once I have it, but I couldn't wait for that long haha. If you haven't noticed, the Description and Foreword also changed~ Hope you'll enjoy the chapter! The next one will come as soon as possible ;) Feedback will be greatly appreciated!] 

Chapter 2

 

“It’s not every day you see someone giving Sehun a run for his money,” Baekhyun mused, an impressed smile hanging on his face.

“I think it’s long overdue,” Kyungsoo mumbled, earning a laugh from Jongin who was sitting down beside him.

“She’s been in this school for as long as we have, right? She could’ve popped out sooner,” Chanyeol chuckled.

“Sehun seems to have taken a liking to her, though. He usually hates it when somebody compares him to Jongin or any of us,” Suho mentioned, eyebrows drawn into a frown,  astonished nonetheless.

“Well, can’t help it if I’m the hotter and more talented brother, right?” Jongin smirked, earning a light punch on his shoulder from Kyungsoo.

“Whatever you say, Jongin,” Baekhyun responded wryly, his smile turning rigid.

“And he kept smiling like an idiot even though people were staring at him,” Kyungsoo added, throwing a glance at Suho.

“… Yeah, I think he’s smitten for her.” Chanyeol clicked his tongue, speaking in a finalizing tone.

 

The group showed mixed expressions, some having looks of agreement while the rest didn’t look convinced.

 

“Or maybe he’s just glad that he’s finally got a friend,” Jongin remarked. “I mean, all of us have friends outside of our circle, but Sehun doesn’t,”

“Well, the girl didn’t look like she’s looking forward to this friendship,” Baekhyun snorted. “With that poker face and his attitude, I’m not surprised that he hasn’t made any friends,”

“And the only ones that wants to chat with him aren’t even intending to be his friends,” Kyungsoo toted up, referring to the girls that always attempt to be Sehun’s paramour.

“He’s probably glad that this one looks like she’s gonna stay for a while,” Suho chuckled.

 

All of a sudden, the boys dropped their smiles and stilled. Upon hearing noises approaching, they turned their heads to the direction of the rooftop door, catching the sound of footsteps. They all groaned collectively, once again having their idle time disturbed.

 

“They found us again,” Jongin announced in a mutter.

“Didn’t you put the no entrance sign on the door?” Kyungsoo nudged Baekhyun who was lying down on the ground.

“I did,” Baekhyun exhaled. “But sometimes it doesn’t work on these girls,”

“We shouldn’t have accepted that offer for the school’s performance,” Chanyeol grumbled as he stood up from the ground along with the others.

“I don’t get why we shouldn’t scold these girls for stalking us,” Jongin blurted, showing his look of dislike to Suho. “They’re getting pretty annoying,”

“That’s because I’ve already scolded them in the past,” Suho sighed. “Those who had some sense of rationality listened, while the rest got even greedier for attention. That’s why it’s useless to scold them,”

“Humans are pretty funny,” Baekhyun chuckled dryly, finally removing himself from the cold ground.

“Besides, we have to be exceptionally nice towards humans, knowing how those higher ups think about us,” Kyungsoo muttered, his tone significantly dropping the mood. “If they catch any news about us being a nuisance or feared by humans for any reason, we might have to move out again,”

 

There was a short and somber silence. If it wasn’t for the sound of the girls trying to pry open the door, none of them probably would’ve made a move.

 

“Jongin, you know the drill.” Chanyeol nudged the younger.

“I know, I know,” he clicked his tongue, walking over to the door. “I’m the sacrificial lamb.” he joked dryly, trying to put the tension away.

“You talk as if you don’t enjoy it,” the taller sneered lightly at him.

“You know how to deal with girls best, Jongin,” Suho used a more encouraging tone, patting the younger on his back, sealing his lips into a tight smile in attempt to hide the bogus behind his words.

“You mean girls prefer him best,” Kyungsoo corrected him jokingly.

“Seriously, wherever he walks in, girls stick on him like gum.” Baekhyun jeered, gaining titters from the others.

 

Jongin rolled his eyes, opening the door to reveal himself to whoever it was who were trying to sneak into the rooftop. Just when he took two steps across the door, the rest of the boys could already hear surprised squeals and gasps from some first years, and the five of them jointly shook their heads.

 

“What do you girls think you’re doing here in the restricted area?” Jongin plastered on his signature smirk, complemented by the playful tone in his voice. “Come on, there’s nothing to see here.” he opened his arms wide and herded the girls away from the rooftop with little to no effort.

 

Baekhyun peered his head out a bit to see whether the coast was clear, and just when the sound of girly giggles disappeared, Baekhyun nodded at the others as a sign that it was safe for them to leave. Chanyeol sighed loudly as they walked down the stairs, wondering how long they have to sneak out like this every time they want some private time. In attempt to shake off the irritation he’s feeling, he parted ways with the boys who were approaching the halls to their respective classrooms.

 

“You guys go ahead. I’m going to get something to drink.”

 

 

“We only have a few minutes left until class starts,”

“Enough time to search for books as reference,”

“Alright, so where should we start?”

“You go search over there, while I—“

“Hold on, let’s just search for it together. We don’t have to split up,”

“Didn’t you say that we only had a few minutes left?”

“Yeah, so?”

“… Okay, just do whatever you think is necessary…”

 

You shook your head as you started with the section right in front of you, totally ignoring the beaming male beside you. You actually thought that he wouldn’t have wanted to do anything with you after your argument with him, or at least come back after a while, but he came back immediately and twice as happier.

 

Those girls got him all wrong. He’s not the icy member of the group, he’s the weird one in the group.

 

Just when you were about to approach another shelf, you felt a sudden ‘greeting’ from your monthly friend in a form of agonizing pain in your abdomen. You in some air, gritting your teeth to hold the pain. You threw a cautious glance at Sehun who seemed to be preoccupied with some books—not a sight you get to see every day—and you felt slightly calmed down upon seeing that he hasn’t noticed you slightly crouching your upper body.

 

“Hey, Alice,” you immediately straightened your body by reflex when you heard Sehun calling your name.

“Y-Yeah?”

“How about this one?” he showed you a few pages of the book in his hands, “It’s just about the visual features and specifications, but I think it’ll be useful for the introduction,”

“Okay, I think we’ll use that,” you nodded, trying your best to keep a stoic expression.

“Alright, I’ll go look for some more books over there,” he pointed at one of the aisles before leaving.

 

Just when he left, you could finally crouch your body again and heaved a sigh—partly due to relief and pain. You scanned the area in search for the closest chair, and before you could even spot one, Sehun came back to you. Cursing under your breath, you aligned your body once again, much to your painful dismay.

 

“I found a wolf encyclopedia,” Sehun stated in his usual flat tone, but you could tell that he’s fairly proud of himself just by looking at his face.

“Okay, that’s good.” you commented with your poker face on, pretending to be busy.

“How many have you found?”

“I haven’t found anything substantial yet,”

“At the rate you’re going, I’m going to end up getting full credits for this project,”

Shooting a glare at him, you muttered, “As if I’d let that happen,”

“… So, until when are you going to keep up this act?”

You whipped your head to him, eyebrows knit together. “What?”

He glanced at your stomach. “It hurts, right?”

“… How did you—“

“If the sighing and hissing weren’t obvious enough, you always have one hand on your stomach,”

 

You pursed your lips, unsure if you should feel embarrassed or amused that he found out.

 

“I wanted to see how long you’ll last, but you look so dead awful right now,”

“Thank you, Sehun,” you thanked him sarcastically with a flat expression, clutching to your stomach now that he knows.

Sehun stared at you for a moment befo

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.