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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 10

 

You don’t know what came over him, but Sehun has been acting increasingly annoying and clingy for the past few days. The world isn’t prepared for that, and neither are you.

 

“I’m bored, let’s do something together.”

“Let me group up with you,”

“Teach me this,”

“I want to study together,”

“Let’s eat lunch,”

“Let’s do our homework together,”

“Where are you going?”

“I’ll walk you to the restroom,”

“Let’s burn Jongin together,”

 

Just when you thought that nothing about Sehun would surprise you anymore, he comes flying back to prove you wrong. At first, you weren’t bothered by it, but your newly-budding friendship isn’t prepared for the constant and rapid, and somewhat intimate or close-knit requests that Sehun asked for. To sum it up, his pace is a little too quick for your slow little bum.

The thing is, when he started sitting beside you on little breaks in between classes, he would explain himself with ‘I just want to sit’ or ‘Jongin’s busy flirting’, so you’d let him. No harm done there. However, when he started asking where you wanted to go every time you stood up from your chair, tagging behind you even when he knew you wanted to go to the restroom, there’s just no explanation in the world that could make you rationalize this.

 

“Sehun, I said I’m going to the restroom,” you stressed to him one day, frowning at him when he stood up to follow you.

“I’m not deaf,” Sehun replied in his typical stoic voice.

“Then you must be retarded,” you quickly retorted with a flat tone. “You can’t join me to the lady’s room!”

“Who said anything about joining you? I’m just going to walk you there,”

“I don’t need to be escorted to the restroom!”

“I don’t think you heard me clearly. I said I was going to walk you there, not you,”

“And the difference is?”

“You don’t pets when they want to answer nature’s call. You walk them.”

 

Since that day, Jongin was proud to say that he can vouch as an eye witness of the historic event that is you whacking Sehun till the tall male was reduced to a little curled up ball on the floor to defend himself. The blonde’s been literally by your tail every second he gets, and you’re unsure if you’re enjoying his constant company or not. However, as the days went by, you came to realize your true feelings.

 

I need to get this idiot away from me before I go completely crazy.

 

So, of course, you tried to draw the line somewhere in there. Unfortunately, nobody ever said that peeling Sehun off you was going to be easy. You knew that quietly slipping away from him when he doesn’t notice wouldn’t work, because you’ve found out on your couple of first and pathetic tries, the male had great sense and reflex skills. You’d bet that he’d even notice if an ant was moving near his feet. Hence, you tried to ask him nicely, perhaps that would make him understand.

 

“Sehun,” you called him one time during the end of recess.

“If it’s about your pudding, I’m not giving it back,” the blonde quickly mentioned while devouring your chocolate pudding, enjoying the fruit of his daily theft. On a side note, you’ve discovered that Sehun loves to snatch food that aren’t his, even if he has the exact same thing on his plate.

“No, it’s not that,” you muttered, still a bit sour that he took your pudding away from you when you weren’t looking. “I just want to tell you something, but you have to promise me you won’t feel offended,”

Sehun literally stopped eating to stare at you. “What?” he said with flat anticipation.

“Well, you see…” you started to fidget with your fingers while darting your eyes everywhere but his face, a clear sign that you’re starting to get a little nervous, “You’ve been hanging around me really often lately, and you know, I’m glad that you feel comfortable with me and all, but—“

“Just cut to the chase,” Sehun cut you abruptly.

“I’d like you to stop tailing me everywhere,” you replied almost immediately, as if you’ve been waiting for him to say the words.

Sehun’s frown deepened considerably after listening. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,”

And it was your turn to frown at him. “You’ve literally been following me everywhere!”

“I’m sorry, but do you have low blood sugar?” Sehun suddenly sat up straight, his frown shifting into one that’s feigning concern. “Because Baekhyun—our senior, hallucinates when he has low blood sugar, and I think you’re having the same symptoms. Poor thing, let me give you your pudding back,” Sehun took your hands to wrap it around the chocolate pudding he stole from you, before scooping a spoon in front of you. “Come on, say ahh…”

Insert a straight expression right here, and it’ll be your exact reaction to him. But at least you got your dessert back, so it wasn’t all too much of a loss. 

 

It’s pretty apparent that Sehun wasn’t willing to cooperate, and he seemed to always avoid or try to quickly end the conversation every time you brought it up. You could’ve been more persistent, but you knew that it’d be a waste of energy to work on something when you know that the results won’t be in your favor, so you were in need of a new strategy that won’t require a lot of energy.

 

“Can you share me a bit of your rice?”

“Why?”

“Because I want some more,”

“No,”

“Oh, come on,”

“No, I’m not sharing,”

“I’ll share you my chicken,”

“Fine, but I want the big one,”

 

Apparently, Sehun’s clingy issue wasn’t the only thing on your plate. You have no idea how it started, but there you were, staring at Sehun and Jongin eating right in front of you in the cafeteria. For the past three days, they’ve been intruding your daily lunches at school, and you still don’t understand why they’re doing it. Even though he seems harmless so far, it is evident that Jongin’s been starting to tag along at times.

Don’t misunderstand, you enjoy having company no matter how annoying Sehun or how high pitched Jongin’s laugh could be. You’ve learned that boys will be boys. But there is just this bizarre atmosphere around whenever the three of you sit together for lunch, and you’re still not quite adapted to it.

You glanced over at the other students who seemed to be as equally confused as you were as they passed by your table, and you couldn’t help but to partially hide your face with your hand as you continued to eat awkwardly.

 

“Alice, are you going to eat your pudding?” Sehun asked you as he nudged on your leg under the table with his foot. “Because if you don’t want it, I want to eat it,”

“What I want is to know is why are you not sitting on your own table,” you muttered, still avoiding eye contact.

“But this is our table. We sat here together at the same time,” Jongin replied casually. “Is it wrong to sit with a classmate every now and then?”

“But you never sit with anyone other than your usual circle of friends,” you finally showed your face to them, eyes fixed in a confused frown. “I could ignore the unwanted attention you two are attracting, but I can’t help but to sense something fishy going on here,”

 

You swore that right after you said those words, the two of them froze. You were about to frown until the two of them reacted in two completely different ways.

 

Sehun faked a dramatic and joshing gasp. “How did you know we’ve never sat with anyone else before?”

“The only fishy thing I sense is the food on our tray…” Jongin mentioned offhandedly, eyeing weirdly at the suspicious looking fish in his tray as he poked it away from the rest of his food.

You lifted a brow at the two of them, unsure how to respond with how awkward the atmosphere became. “… Whatever,” you mumbled, putting your focus back to your food.

 “I knew it, you’ve always been a fan of mine,” Sehun ceremoniously slammed his chopsticks on the table in false victory, his flat tone somehow complimenting his antics. “Admit it, and I might just spare your pudding from me,”

Your eyes quickly lit up. “The pudding is mine!” you narrowed your eyes into slits, protecting your chocolate pudding with your hands.

Sehun let out a satisfied chuckle from your reaction.

“And you,” you turned to Jongin this time, your confidence slowly melting down as you were still not used to his presence near you. “Aren’t you going out with Lee Bona? I don’t think it’s nice to sit here with me instead of your girlfriend,”

“First of all, Bo Na and I aren’t dating,” Jongin mentioned with a smile. “Second of all, I like hanging out with you. It’s nice, there’s no pressure,”

“That’s because the pressure is all on my shoulders,” you muttered, but then you quiet down a little in thought.

 

No pressure?

 

“She has a point,” Sehun commented offhandedly. “Thank God she’s keeping this sweet girl façade.  Otherwise she’d try to act up in front of her like the others. She hasn’t been bothering you, right?” Sehun nudged you.  

“Who, Bo Na? No,” you shook your head, resuming back into your thoughts as Sehun and Jongin continued to chat. Although you hesitated, you managed to ask the dark haired boy, “So… you feel pressure when you try to flirt? Or whatever it is that you do when you’re with girls…”

“You mean make out,” Sehun blurted.

“Keep going, Sehun,” Jongin encouraged sarcastically, already lifting his foot to kick the guy’s chair down.

“I’m just saying,” Sehun shrugged indifferently.  

Jongin made a face at the blonde’s comment before pouring back his focus to your question. The boy pursed his lips in thought as he hummed, a trait of his that you’ve noticed. “Well… I don’t really use effort to flirt,” he smirked a little. “Bo Na knows that I’m not someone to commit with, so relax,” Jongin waved his wrist as he chuckled.

You tried to laugh along to cover your stiffness, but you couldn’t help but to frown a little in concern. You couldn’t buy it.

 

He’s lying through his teeth, but I don’t know about what.

 

Jongin’s laugh, however, died down when he caught your troubled expression. “Um, unless you really are bothered that I’m here, I don’t mind moving away—“ Jongin slowly started to stand up, and you immediately reacted to this.

“No, wait!“ you grabbed his hand, eyes wide at his sudden action.

Jongin stopped for a moment and gazed at you with equally widened eyes, surprised by your request. “I can stay?”

“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean it like that,” you explained in a small voice before nodding, “You can stay,”

Jongin eyed you for a good second, seemingly still uncertain, but he slowly sat back down. “Have you finally decided that you like me?” he stated quite innocently, but somehow those words didn’t sound right.

“Not exactly like that,” you chuckled awkwardly from how funny those words sounded.

“I’ll take that as a yes,” Jongin chuckled softly before continuing back with his meal.

 

You stared at Jongin for a short while before going back to your food. You’re not exactly familiar with Jongin apart from his usual behavior in class and especially girls in general, but something didn’t settle right with you after hearing those words from him. You weren’t sure what Jongin was trying to imply, but as someone who’s familiar with pressure and unease, you could definitely sense and recognize the undertones in his voice when he said that.

Actually, during that week, you’ve noticed that Sehun and Jongin weren’t the only ones acting a little out of character. You’ve noticed that none of their friends are sitting together anymore. You’ve even heard a couple of rumors of them having a feud left and right, but it was quickly debunked when you saw all six of them grouping together every time they had to go home.

You’re not exactly curious as to why they haven’t been sitting together, but you assumed that it’s only normal that they started sitting with their classmates instead or even other people for a breather. In spite of this, you’re still unsure as to why these two, out of all the tables dotted around the cafeteria, chose to sit in your spot. Maybe you’re exaggerating a bit, but knowing these two mischievous jokers, you can’t help but to wonder.

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.