Frenemy

Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 11

 

You don’t know if you’re just being overcautious or thin-skinned, but you have this strange feeling that Kang Seung Joon’s currently boring holes behind your head or something.

 

You’ve never really been somebody who paid a lot of attention to your surroundings, nor were you sensitive of it. However, ever since you started making friends with a certain someone (or two), you couldn’t help but to be more aware and touchy about it. It’s not necessarily a bad thing, since one could say that you’ve gained a new and useful ability from this, but it’s only now when you started to reconsider whether this was a bad or good thing.

 

This is uncomfortable.

 

The gym teacher had asked you and two other classmates—Park Do Hwi and Kang Seung Joon, to help him pack up some of the equipment that he left in the sports field from a previous class. Throughout the journey to said sports field, you could literally feel Seung Joon’s eyes on you as he walked behind you, like there was a legit tingle on the back of your neck.

You and Park Do Hwi were walking behind the gym teacher as you two followed him, but for some unknown reason, Seung Joon chose to walk a bit slower than everybody and was just sauntering behind the two of you. You were probably just feeling a bit overcautious since you’ve set alert as your default mode for the time being, but there was something off about Kang Seung Joon and it’s a feeling that’s particularly had to brush off.

You craned your head to the back to catch a glimpse of the male, and from the way he was glancing at you, you figured that he probably wasn’t staring at your back, but the smile that formed on his lips wasn’t much of a comforting sight either.

 

“Um…” you cracked an awkward smile, “Why don’t you just walk beside us, Seung Joon?” you offered rigidly, hoping that your effort to make yourself sound nice was enough to cover it.

“No, it’s alright,” his eyes even turned into crescents this time. “I like to walk at my own pace.”

“Oh… okay,” you chuckled awkwardly before turning your face back to the front, only to realize that Park Do Hwi and the coach were already speed-walking ahead.

“Alice, keep up,” Do Hwi told you, slowing down as he gestured at you to hurry.

“Oh—sorry,” you rushed over to his side.

Do Hwi made a fleeting look back over at Seung Joon before turning back to you. “Since when were you on good terms with him?” he murmured soft enough that only you could hear him.

You looked up at the guy with a confused frown. “What’s with everybody asking me when, how or why I’m speaking with somebody?”

“Alice, we might not be too close, but I’ve been your classmate since middle school, and I know for a fact that you don’t talk with just anyone, not even classmates. Anybody who knows you would probably be confused,”

“I don’t know. I’m just… more loose now, I guess? It’s not really a big deal,” you shrugged.

 

Does this mean people have been talking about me behind my back?

 

Do Hwi snorted at your statement. “Great, who’s the lucky bloke that broke your shell? Oh Sehun?”

 

What am I kidding, they probably did.

 

“You know, a lot of us tried to make you more easygoing, but you never responded,” he reminded you.

You frowned deeply at his words. “You mean you and your soccer club friends?” you nearly scoffed, reminded of the time when Do Hwi and his soccer club friends would crowd over you and other quiet kids and tease you all to no end in hopes to draw some kind of response from all of you. Although their intention came from a good place, wanting to make the quiet kids feel like they belonged and were acknowledged, their execution wasn’t the best.

“Hey, we worked hard, okay?” Do Hwi nudged you with his elbow before pursing his lips, “It’s ironic how an equally quiet person would end up being the one warming you up, though,”

Come to think of it, there’s some truth in that. “I’m not sure about him being quiet, but I guess you’re right,” you chuckled.

Do Hwi stared at you for a moment before a glint appears in his eyes as he slowly formed a sheepish smile, “So… does this mean you’ll take me up on that date I asked you back in—“

“No.”

 

The conversation ended with Kang Seung Joon’s subtle snort at the background.

 

 

The sports field was blazing hot, and the heat got you to understand a little as to why all the kids and even the coach rushed back to the school building after a strenuous work out from class and abandoned all the equipment tattered across the field. You’ve never been so grateful that the coach planned on an indoor court by chance this week.

 

“Gee, coach,” Do Hwi said a little lifelessly when he witnessed the scattered balls and equipment around the field. “You could’ve at least asked the last class to clean up if you were feeling lazy,”

“Hurry up and pack up the balls, we need to make sure that we didn’t lose any of them.” the teacher ordered before blowing on his whistle sharply, causing the three of you to wince.

 

You scanned the area and started to pick up the closest equipment near you, letting the boys pick up the balls. Your expression grew a little sour upon seeing the coach doing nothing but watch the three of you work, but you continued to pick up the plastic cones on the ground nonetheless. Do Hwi was more vocal about his complaint, so you let him do all the peeving.

 

“Can you stop complaining and just tidy up?” Seung Joon mentioned with a rather eerie and forced smile when Do Hwi complained once again.

Do Hwi, however, didn’t seem to appreciate the words coming out of his mouth. “What makes you think I’ll take orders from you?”

You glanced at the two males when you’ve noticed Do Hwi’s hostile voice, something quite rare for you to hear.

“I don’t like the heat just as much as you do, but you’re doing nothing but slowing us down,” Seung Joon replied coolly, but anybody could tell that there was something erosive from his tone. “I advise you to keep working,”

You pursed your lips, feeling the tension in the air thickening with speed as you picked up the balls on the ground. Even though you tried to ignore them, you found it hard to act deaf.

“Advise me?” Do Hwi scoffed. “You’re very funny, bloodsu—“

 

Instead of hearing Do Hwi finishing his sentence, you heard a loud thud. Your eyes fleeted to Do Hwi, widening your eyes when you saw a soccer ball rolling away from Do Hwi’s feet and an enraged looking Kang Seung Joon glaring at him. A split second before the two boys reacted, you managed to drop the props in your hands as you rushed towards the two boys, but it was too late.

 

“Do Hwi, Seung Joon—stop!” you yelled in panic when the two started charging towards one another. “Coach!” you shouted for help, and soon enough you could hear the coach running closer towards the three of you.

“Both of you, stop!” the coach ordered in a commanding voice, but his voice was almost ineffective as Do Hwi was able to throw one last punch at Seung Joon before they were forcefully separated by him. “What is going on here?!”

“Seung Joon—“ you widened your eyes when you noticed how busted Seung Joon’s lip was. Your hands roamed around your uniform to look if you held any napkin or tissue at hand, but you stopped midway when you realized that you were in your sports uniform instead of your usual uniform.

“Alice Park,” the coach suddenly called.  “Go back to the school building, ask Mr. Cho to substitute for me for a while. I’ll take care of these two first,”

“But their injuries—“

“Don’t make the others wait, class will start soon,” he said sternly. “Go.”

“You better hide your face before it heals,” Do Hwi said with more of a taunting than warning tone, so much so that you, Seung Joon and the coach scowled at him.

“Park Do Hwi!” the coach scolded him heatedly. “Alice, I won’t say it again. Go.”

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.