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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 4

 

“Are you sure it’s okay to sit here?”

“Of course, we’re in a library,”

“I’m not blind. I’m saying that those girls might come and terrorize you again,”

“Let them, I don’t care that much,”

“Aren’t you scared?”

“I’m much more scared of seeing my mother’s face when she sees a bad mark on my report card.”

 

This hell-hole called high school might have student bullies as their demons, but nothing beats the anxiety and fear bubbling inside of you when a mother’s wrath befalls you. Compared to a demanding parent, those girls are pretty much nothing, granted they are quite bothering.

 

Sehun snorted at your statement. “Says the girl who nearly cried when they bullied her last week,”

“I was in my period, give me a break,” you rolled your eyes at him. “I was having a particularly rough day, so I couldn’t help but to feel a little emotional,”

“Excuses.” Sehun teased you, kicking your foot under the table.

 

Hissing, you tried to kick back, only to miss and ended up kicking thin air. Sehun stifled a laugh, pretending to read when he caught the librarian staring at you two, which you picked up as well. Clearing your throat, you tried to put your focus back on your task, leaning in closer to your book. You looked up to glance at Sehun’s smug smile, not even trying to hide the joy he’s feeling. When you thought that working with Sehun would be a problem, you didn’t expect it would be this kind of problem.

 

“I prefer your cold-hearted persona compared to this moronic act of yours,” you whispered, muttering almost whilst glaring at the male sitting across you. “You’re just like a child,”

“A child?” Sehun suddenly sat straight as to fix his posture, an offended tone in his voice. “I’m not acting like a child,”

“I could put you in a first grader’s class, and I wouldn’t be able to tell a difference between you and the kids,” you told him heatedly, putting your book down to lean closer to him.

“Oh, yeah? Then what are you, my nanny?” he jeered, leaning closer as well as he started to get fired up along with you.

“You want me to be?” you taunted, eyes narrowed into slits.

Sehun scoffed, smirking at you. “You have no idea what kind of pup you’re dealing with,”

Mirroring his smirk, you taunted with a soft yet firm, “Try me.”

 

And with that, you stood up on your seat, picked up your book, and whacked it on Sehun’s head, causing a thud sound to emit upon contact. Sehun winced, a look of surprise on his face as he watched you gracefully yet haughtily walked out of the library. Clicking his tongue—although a grin was stuck on his face—Sehun tidied up his side of the desk and rushed out to catch up with you. After that whole ordeal at the hall, you and Sehun have agreed to meet up in less crowded places after school, for both your sakes, so it was a win-win situation on both parts. However, today was one of the odds, since you were cut on time and needed to go to the library for another subject anyway.

Whether it be alone or in the eyes of the public, you’ve discovered that Sehun is such a brat. A quite pleasant one, but nevertheless a brat. You’re not sure why he chose to show this side of him to you, although you feel quite grateful and appreciative of him being open to you, basically indirectly saying that he regards you as a closer friend, but there’s a very apparent downfall to this. If you had the option to pick which side you’d like to see from him, his bratty side wouldn’t be your first choice. However, since you two sort of match with each other in terms of chemistry, neither of you bother each other too much.

 

However, you surprisingly had the honor to discover another side of Oh Sehun today.

 

You were having Chemistry for the day, and right when you all were busy wearing your lab coats, your teacher announced, “Alright, class. I want you to make groups of three, and then proceed to go to the stations I’ve prepared for today’s experiment,” your chemistry teacher instructed, pointing at the tables with chemistry kits neatly lined up in each table.

 

The students quickly stormed to take the best seats whilst gathering group members. Some immediately got their group together, while some wandered around. Since you were standing close to one of your closer group of friends, you immediately asked them if they wanted to be in a group together.

 

“Wanna group?” you asked casually, pointing at the empty station at the back.

“Sure,” the girl agreed, and the other quickly nodded.

 

With that set, the three of you took your chosen table and waited for the others to finish grouping with each other, loud arguments and footsteps being heard. You can already the see the concerned look of the teacher as the kids move about close to the precious and fragile equipment lying around the room. As you looked around, your eyes suddenly caught a familiar pair of orbs.

 

… Is it just me, or does Sehun look upset at me.

 

Sehun was sitting a few tables away from you at the front, and you could tell that he looks unhappy, even with one eye closed. When you showed him you confused look, Sehun pointed at his table, either trying to invite you to join him, or saying that your should already be sitting on his table. Based on his sour expression, it’s probably the second guess. While keeping your gaze at him, you pointed at Jongin who’s sitting right beside him and the small crowd of student still trying to persuade both of them—mostly just Jongin—to join their group instead, implying that he has lots of options.

 

“Three,” you could read Sehun’s lips, pointing at himself, Jongin, and then the empty chair on his other side to show that the group still lacks one other member.

Coincidentally, you caught Jongin’s eyes as well—since the male was basically watching the two of you having a silent exchange—and the guy just shrugged at you with a seemingly tired smile. You’re guessing that he’s saying that he’s letting Sehun make the decision.

Well, it’s not like you’re going to leave your groupmates just for him. “Pick them!” you mouthed back at him, pointing at the boys that are still standing idly on several parts of the lab. If he’s reluctant to get the noisy girls, then he should be okay with the others.  

You could almost hear Sehun’s groan from afar. “You!” he pointed sternly at you with a heated scowl to match, saying that you’re the only one he wants to recruit.

While this might swoon a few people, you’re not particularly fond of the way he’s angrily inviting you. The fact that the ice prince wants to be in the same group is you lost its charm. “NO!” you responded with an equally heated glare, standing up to assert your point.

 

This whole scene is quite funny to watch since the both of you are fighting without using your voices, just silent and angry whispers with violent body language. Jongin is practically watching the best show he’s ever seen.

 

“Is everybody settled? You all better take your seats, because I’m going to list down all of you before we

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.