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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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[AN: It's finally here (ノД`) I hope this renewal will be accepted well! However, one thing will never change--please ignore all typos and errors lol. And comments are absolutely loved and appreciated!]

Chapter 1

 

It was Monday, the worst day of the week. Being a morning person is hard enough, but to wake up with a period cramp—that’s a major setback to start anybody’s day. Heaving a heavy sigh, you slid yourself out of your bed and start to prepare for school.

 

What a wonderful start for the day.

 

After taking a warm shower, you put on your uniform and packed last minute things into your bag before walking out of your room and into the living room. The house was empty as usual, and the coldness in the empty space started to become normal to you. Before leaving for school, you roamed around the house to check for notes left by your mom. Right when you entered the kitchen, you found the said note left on the fridge, saying that your mom had just left to work in her company’s US branch for a few weeks.

 

“Can’t she stay for more than a week at home at least?” you mumbled in disappointment as you crumpled the note and threw it in the rubbish bin.

 

With your mood made sour, you ditched the idea of making breakfast and just pulled out an apple from the fridge. Grabbing your blue cardigan sweater, your marched out of your house and walked to school, which was conveniently nearby. The morning air was cold enough to make you shiver a bit, but thankfully it wasn’t as polluted as usual, so much so that it lifted your spirit.

Occupying yourself with an online story in your phone, it didn’t take long until you’ve finally reached the school area and walked past the gates. Just when you enter the building, however, your mood dropped once again when you heard the all too familiar squeals and loud whispers from the schoolgirls.

 

“They’re coming!” a girl half-squealed, half-whispered to her friend standing close to you.

“Hurry up!” her friend replies in the same manner, rushing with her.

 

You turned your head with a frown, wondering what’s the commotion about. The big entrance door opened, and they came in.

 

Just seeing them, you immediately held your breath in displeasure. “It’s just them…” you muttered as you rolled your eyes. As if on cue, their entrance was welcomed with flirtatious and overly-excited greetings.

 

“Good morning, boys~”

“Looking good today!”

“Are you going to perform again today?”

“Can’t wait to see your gig later!”

 

You pretended to gag, hearing those girls fangirl over those six boys. You don’t really remember when their popularity started growing in school, but ever since the school chose them to create performances for this year’s grand opening ceremony for freshmen, the already popular boys became even more popular as the day comes and goes. The school’s theme for this year was Performing Arts, and so the school picked representatives from the three levels in the senior high school section. It wasn’t much of a surprise that those six boys were picked. Although you didn’t pay too much attention, you still remembered how well each of them performed on stage, and you sort of understand why their reputation immediately spiked up after the school’s opening act.

Being the new and trending clique in school, they attract people like magnet, and it wouldn’t be much of a problem for you if it wasn’t for all the noise pollution. They’re all attractive, you wouldn’t even dare to deny that fact, but you don’t necessarily think that they’re as attractive or great as how these girls made them sound. Although honestly, those boys aren’t the problem, it’s the people bustling around them.

 Being someone who prefers to stay in your own bubble, you felt greatly irritated at the students trying to pry into the boys’ space, but then again, looking at the smiles on their faces, it seems that they aren’t bothered in the least.

As the boys walked across hall, you shook your head and turned around, ignoring their stare when they caught your peeved expression just before you showed your back to them.

 

“Well,” Jongin snorted, passing a glance at the others, “Someone doesn’t look interested,”

“Who? The one in the blue cardigan?” Baekhyun stretched his neck to catch your disappearing figure, narrowing his eyes as you went farther away. “Don’t think I’ve seen her before. Is she a new student?”

“Not showing her face to us does not mean that they’re new, Baekhyun,” Suho sighed softly, plastering a polite smile to the students constantly greeting them.

“She’s from my class,” Sehun mentioned monotonously, eyes focused on his phone, not as interested as the others.

Kyungsoo frowned a bit as he scanned her figure, studying her. “There’s something about her that’s… different.”

“Is it her scent?” Suho lifted a brow, subtly nodding in agreement.

Sehun looked up from his phone, finding a bit of interest in the conversation when he finally noticed Kyungsoo’s notion. They all quiet down and focus, having their eyes set dead on you as if trying to solve a puzzle.

“… It’s blood,” Chanyeol blurted out, although his tone showed that he’s a little unsure. “Her scent is laced with blood,”

“No, it’s not blood,” Kyungsoo quickly opened his mouth to disagree, walking a bit faster to keep up with your pace, not wanting to lose sight of you as he continued to scrutinize you. “A lot of the students here have their scents laced with blood, but her scent is a bit—”

 

Before Kyungsoo could find the words to complete his sentence, the school bell interrupted him with a loud ring.

 

“Let’s just continue this later on.” Jongin shrugged, nodding his head at the bell’s direction, implying that they should go to class.  “It could just be a new perfume for all we care.”

“… I have a weird feeling about her,” Suho mumbled, but loud enough for the rest of them to hear. He nudges Sehun on his shoulder, encouraging him to lean down a bit for him to whisper, “Keep an eye on her for me.”

“Me?” Sehun retorts immediately, eyes nearly turned into a scowl. “Why should I?”

“I can volunteer—“ Jongin raised his hand, only to be interrupted by an already highly disapproving Kyungsoo.

“She’ll run away before you could even manage to talk to her, Jongin.” the shorter muttered.

“Don’t complain,” Suho clicked his tongue, patting his shoulders with a little mock in his smile. “Just do it.”

 

 

“For this semester, our project will be done in pairs instead of groups. The names that I call out will be partners, and your topic of assignment will follow right after, so listen carefully,”

 

The announcement from the teacher was followed by a series of mixed responses, some being whines, some being cheers, and the rest would be a collective heavy sigh from those who prefer to work alone, including yourself. You slouched in your seat as you glance at those disapproving the teacher’s project as well, giving each other virtual pats on the shoulders and little encouraging nods.

 

“Another project?” Sehun huffed, throwing a glance at a neutral looking Jongin. “She made us do one in the first semester, and now she wants another one?”

“I don’t think she’ll give us that announcement if that wasn’t the case, Sehun,” Jongin chuckled in response. “What’s the problem though? I remember you liking her project last semester,”

Sehun rubbed the back of his neck, resting his back on his chair. “I don’t know,” he shrugged, finding difficulty to word his own feelings. “Maybe I’m just bothered by this partner thing,”

“Why?”

“I just have a weird feeling about it.”

 

After the class settled down, the teacher took the attendance list in her hands, planting a stern stare on all of them like a scanning machine. After making a few scribbles in her list, she puts on her glasses and clears .

 

“I’ll call the first set of partners,” the teacher announced firmly. “Oh Sehun and Alice Park,”

 

You whipped your head up at the teacher, eyes wide open. The class was filled with soft whines and subtle complaints, meanwhile you’re just sitting there frozen in attempt to let the information sink in. You craned your head to the back to get a good glance of your partner, only to see him looking straight at you. Putting down your attempt to look away, you stare back at him, eyebrows drawn together to show your confusion and slight displeasure over the way he’s looking at you. Judging from Sehun’s unwavering stare, you could only guess on two things—he’s either unhappy being paired with you, or he has a resting face.

 

Then again, it could be both.

 

“This girl is staring at me like I have two heads,”

“Who?” Jongin asked, glancing away from the teacher.

“Alice,”

Jongin tossed a glance at you, snorting a laugh when he caught the intense eye contact battle going on. “It looks as if you were the one who offended her, though?”

“What did I do?” he frowned all the more, his eyes still not averted. “The teacher said we’re partners. Isn’t it natural for me to look for her right after?”

“Well, for one you could drop the unfriendly look and give her a smile. Maybe that’d stop her from giving you that look,”

“But what’s wrong with my face?”

“Just try it.” Jongin clicked his tongue, raising his hand when the teacher called his name to be partnered with one of the students in class.

Sighing, Sehun pursed his lips before stretching his lips into a small smile. You, however, didn’t seem to be affected by his sudden

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.