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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 7

 

“That’s wrong,”

“Which one?”

“This one,”

“No, I’m pretty sure it’s correct,”

“I’m telling you, it’s wrong,”

“Sehun, the source clearly states that alphas decide who gets to mate with who,”

“Betas and omegas can choose who they want too,”

 

You heaved a sigh as you let Sehun’s fifth complaint of the day roll through your ears. School was over half an hour ago, and you and Sehun have been busy working on your presentation together in the library. However, things weren’t going as smoothly as you thought it would be.

 

“See here?” you pushed your laptop closer to him. “Over six sources and probably more mentioned the same thing—alphas determine who gets to mate with who in the pack. Omegas and betas who try to get their way around the alpha would almost always get disciplined, if not they just fight over dominance to a bloody pulp,”

“I don’t care what it says, it’s rubbish,” Sehun pushed your laptop back to you, crossing his arms.

“Show me your resource then,”

“Here,” Sehun leaned down his head to you, implying that his brain is the only resource he has.

Hissing, you flicked his head. Sehun doesn’t wince, but the way he pursed his lips showed that he didn’t enjoy the treatment as he pulled his head back. “Nonsense,” you shook your head before continuing your part in the presentation.

“You never trust anything that I say,” Sehun murmured sulkily, propping his elbows on the table and placed the side of his cheek on his self-made pillow as he watched you work.

“I’m sure you know why,” you replied airily, eyes focused on your laptop screen.

“Enlighten me,” he nudged your arm.

“Not now, Sehun,” you shrugged him away, furrowing your eyebrows in concentration. “Besides, don’t you have extracurricular activities in a bit?”

“How did you know?” Sehun sat up straight with a sleepy smile on his face. “Stalker,”

Rolling your eyes, you ignored his joke. “Everybody knows you join the school’s dance club, Sehun,”

“Liar. You never paid attention to me before,” Sehun poked you playfully. “Sly girl, I knew you were a fan,”

“What are you even talking about?” you chuckled at him, throwing a glance at the blonde. “Don’t tell me you want to bail?”

Sehun’s smile shifted into a sluggish sigh. “I don’t feel like going,” he put his head back on the table.

“Why not?” you elbowed him lightly to encourage him to sit up, to which of course he ignored. “Jongin’s going, right?”

“He never skips a day for dance class,”

“Then why aren’t you going?”

“Messing with you is my preferred pastime now,” he answered as he played with the ends of your hair before flicking it to your face, causing you to wince.

You turned your head to scowl at his grinning face. “You—“ you reached your hand out to flick his forehead, but Sehun swiftly dodged away, chuckling sheepishly in amusement.

 

Honestly, at this point, nothing about Sehun surprises you anymore. You’re getting used to his antics—which increases day by day—and to be frank, you prefer this type of Sehun compared to his cold, stoic disposition that sometimes makes you want to punch his face for—sorry not sorry. But also, the fact that this Sehun is much more comfortable to be with, you don’t mind him hanging around you even if you two aren’t working on your project together.

You don’t feel like avoiding him anymore, although the bickering doesn’t exactly stop, but somehow, hanging out with Sehun boosted your confidence. It’s not only him that you’ve stopped avoiding, but you’re letting other people approach you and vice versa much more often now—although let’s not include the bullies, because God knows you always run to the opposite direction every time you see their faces, but hey, one problem at a time, please. Socializing wasn’t that much of a big burden anymore, albeit the occasional anxiety and antisocial moments, but Sehun seemed to have made you more loose and relaxed in a rather healthy way.

 

However, you’ve noticed one little problem with Sehun in this friendship.

 

“Alice,” you turned your head to see your classmate approach you and Sehun with his laptop in his hands with a look of anticipation on his face. Sehun looked up and watched as he walked up to the both of you.

“Seung Joon?” you call out his name out of surprise more than confusion. “What’s wrong?” you immediately pull the chair beside you for him to sit on, seeing his laptop in hand.

“I need your opinion about this,” he settled himself beside you and quickly opened the file he wanted to show you. “Since our last experiment didn’t work, I’ve been thinking that we need to keep things simpler for our physics project, so maybe this experiment would work,”

You furrowed your eyebrows and leaned closer to his laptop screen, pushing yours away from you at the same time to create more space. “Hmm… Don’t you think this is a bit too easy, though?”

“But that’s the charm of it. We could show that calculating the speed of light isn’t that hard when using this method, because—“

“Excuse me,”

 

You and Seung Joon turned your heads to see Sehun staring at the both of you, now the male sitting straight on his chair, and the glint in his eyes are back to its default coldness. He was leaning back on his chair, his arms folded across his chest, and after you traced his eyes, you found them laid on your physics partner. You know what those eyes meant. Gulping, your body stiffened without you realizing.

 

“Is this going to take long? Because I’m also working on a project with Alice,” Sehun managed to say politely, although his body language was anything but courteous.

Turning to Sehun, you tried to put him to ease. “Sorry, it’s not going to take long—“

Sehun put his hand on the back of your palm, wordlessly telling you to stay out of it. “You could’ve at least waited for us to finish, or just text her if you’re in a rush,” he continued, his eyes glued onto the male. “This is like the second time you’ve interrupted us this week,”

“Sehun, this isn’t my only group project—“

“Shh,” Sehun squeezed your hand, hushing you gently.

You glanced at Seung Joon, hoping that he isn’t annoyed by Sehun’s displeased tone.

Seung Joon, however, doesn’t seem too bothered by his disposition. “I just happened to find her here, so I came up to her,” he explained casually. “Are you also in a deadline, Sehun?”

That’s when you saw Sehun’s cold expression shift a bit. “It’s due next week,” he said, removing his hand off you.

“Oh, well, ours is due in two days,” Seung Joon formed a thin smile, and you swear you could catch a hint of mock on that smile.  “So,” he turned back to you, nudging on your arm to gain your attention. “If you’re not happy with this option, maybe this one would do?”

“Um…” you tried to focus on the screen, but you couldn’t help but to throw a glance at Sehun from time to time, seeing a seemingly upset, yet unreadable look on his face. “Maybe… this one? Measuring the speed of light with a microwave oven seems fun and doable, I think it would catch Mr. Lee’s attention,”

“Great,” he nodded in agreement. “I’ll prepare the things we need. Can you come over to my place today?”

“Sure,”

“Wait—“ Sehun’s hand was suddenly wrapped around your arm.

You whipped your head to him, seeing that Sehun looked just as surprised as you were. “Is… something wrong?”

Sehun seemed to have his mouth open, attempting to say something. But after that awkward pregnant pause, Sehun finally broke out of his trance. “Nothing,” he mutters, letting go of you. He pulled your laptop over to his side rather harshly, sighing as he angrily typed loudly on the keyboard. “If you’re done here, then leave us.”

 

Holding the urge to kick him under the table, you turned to shoot Seung Joon an apologetic look. Seung Joon immediately got your message and flashed you an understanding smile.

 

Standing up from his seat, he patted your back. “Careful, Alice. The claws are sinking in.” he told you, tossing a glance at Sehun before leaving.

“What did he just say?” Seh

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.