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Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 6

 

Jongin had always thought that Alice Park is an interesting girl, but he was never actually interested about you until that glorious day during Chemistry. Jongin would never forget the look on your face when you saw him coming back to the lab yesterday, blushing beet red, but instead of a shocked or embarrassed look on your face, you had the tightest smile you’ve ever mustered on your face.

 

Jongin might’ve been amused, but you certainly did not feel the same way.

 

“What’s wrong, Alice?” he asked you as he tilted his head.

You scoffed so hard, Sehun nearly flinched. “You knew I was in the restroom,” you hissed at him, a dangerously sarcastic smile hanging on your lips. “And you still had the audacity to do that,”

Jongin immediately had a glint in his eyes. “What are you talking about, Alice?” Jongin displayed a coy smile, feigning innocence and curiosity.

Sehun rolled his eyes at the sight, faking a little puke. He knows that look on Jongin’s eyes, he could even spot it miles away. “Here we go again…”

“You know exactly what I’m talking about,” you shot him a look, squinting your eyes. “At least try to cover up or something, your shirt is all scrunched up,” you comment bitterly, glancing at how lower his shirt is ed.

“Yeah, she was holding onto me like crazy,” Jongin remarked casually.

Your bitter expression contorted into a scowl at how calmly he waved it off, and your expression became all the more exaggerated when you see the girl Jongin lip-locked with coming back inside the class, her face red and eyes hazy. “And I can see your partners are very much the same,”

“He’s used to walking around with swollen lips too. He never checks after the deed,” Sehun mentioned offhandedly, adding more fuel to the fire.

You got even more riled up and embarrassed, and Jongin chuckled at your reaction of disbelief. “What if it was one of the teachers inside the stall instead of me? You’d get in so much trouble!”

“Don’t ask him that,” Sehun put a hand on your shoulder. “It’s even more fun for him if a teacher was in the restroom,”

“Dude,” Jongin protested, but he laughed nonetheless. He turned his attention back to you, a mischievous grin slowly growing. “Sorry if you were startled, Alice. I didn’t mean to scare you,”

 

Taking in a deep breath, you tried to calm down. You felt slightly embarrassed that you’re worked up for something that’s none of your business, but you couldn’t help the drive to reprimand him. It felt like you’re discovering a new side to yourself, you’re not usually ticked off by people’s antics. Perhaps this is just where you the line for PDA. The boy needs a freaking leash. They weren’t kidding when they said Jongin has a reputation with the girls. The girl he was with immediately knew what he wanted, like it wasn’t their first time.

 

Just when I thought there wouldn’t be anybody as brazen as Oh Sehun.

 

“You really should be more careful next time,” you cleared your throat, passing him a glance stiffly. “You might not care, but there are others who would feel very disturbed by it,”

“I’ve never seen anybody disturbed by my lips,” Jongin commented smoothly, grinning confidently in a cheeky manner.

“Then you haven’t met everybody,” you muttered, unfazed.

“Yeah, and you’re one of them,” he leaned in closer, his voice suspiciously getting deeper. “Want me to convince you?”

You instinctively inched back, frowning at him. “Congratulations,” you heard Sehun say near her ear when you moved back. “You brought this upon yourself.”

“Move even closer, and I’ll hurt you,” you immediately went to defense mode, a threat jumping out of your throat the instant Jongin moves closer to you.

Jongin merely snickers at your little intimidation. “Don’t be scared, Alice,” he murmurs almost sensually, leaning in closer to show his boldness. “I don’t bite.”

Before you could even retort and move back, somebody’s already pulled you away. “I’ll be the judge of that,” Sehun suddenly stood up, moving his chair away. You tore your eyes away from Jongin and watch as Sehun push you and your chair to the side, moving you away from the wolf on your right.

Jongin finally leaned back, lifting a brow as he stares at the blonde with discontent. “Excuse me, but I was having a conversation with Alice,” the shift in Jongin’s voice is very apparent. Jongin actually sounded a bit annoyed.

Hiding behind Sehun’s back, you stretched your body a bit to lock eyes with Jongin. “There’s nothing to talk about.” you told him sternly before withdrawing your body, holding the urge to glare at him.

 

Apart from that, something else comes into your mind. Your focus moves to Sehun. It felt weird that now you’re thankful of his presence, while a few moments ago, you wanted to be away from him as much as possible.

 

“You heard the woman,” Sehun nodded to the direction of the door. “Scram,”

“Ouch,” Jongin faked a pained expression with a flimsy smile, clutching on his chest dramatically. “You hurt me, Alice,”

“My ears could say the same,” you replied airily.

“I told you he’s worse than I am,” Sehun sighed, showing you something akin to a sulky look. “You never listen to me,”

Okay, Oh Sehun and sulkiness is an unusual combination, but you have to say that it kind of suits him. “That’s because you usually spout nonsense,” you half joked.

“Oh, come on, Alice,” a playful grin graced Jongin’s features once again the moment you gave him your attention. “It’s not fun to sit beside Se

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.