Flower Bud

Alice Turns Into Little Red Riding Hood [REVAMPED]
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Chapter 15

 

School wasn’t as tense as you thought. A lot of the students were calmer and even cheerier than you thought they’d be, albeit there were still a few that you noticed looking a bit more apprehensive and jumpy, probably shaken after seeing the added security around town. All in all, nothing much has changed.

 

Well, except for two particular fellows that you know.

 

“Oh my God,” you widened your eyes when you saw Jongin and Sehun walking in, looking like they just got into a fight. The classroom became obviously quiet, everybody inside staring at the two as they moved to their seats. You couldn’t help but to stare too.

 

Did those two get into a fight?

 

A few students immediately went to Jongin, asking him multiple questions about the cuts and bruises on his face. Jongin seemed pretty cool about it, still offering a smile and shook his head as he told the others to not worry. Sehun, on the other hand, looked just as normal as he would on a regular day—except without the very apparent wounds on his face. The blond threw his bag in his seat and sat down promptly, his face turning sour from how noisy it became.

 

“Jongin! What happened to you?”

“Are you okay?”

“Sehun, what happened to your face?”

 

Sehun visibly contorted his face in discomfort after hearing more and more people holler towards their direction, the blond not even bothering to hide how annoyed he looked. Meanwhile, Jongin was already cracking a comforting and rather bright smile to everyone, already busy trying to calm them down before he could even take a seat.

 

“Seriously, guys. I’m alright!” Jongin laughed as the group of students surrounding him continue to show their worries. “We just got into a little accident, that’s all. Isn’t that right, Sehun?”

Heaving a sigh, Sehun turned his eyes to the small crowd. He stared at their cautious, yet expectant eyes, staring back at him with vigilance. “If I say yes, would you leave us alone?” he muttered.

A few of them narrowed their eyes at him. “Um… that wasn’t funny,” one of them mentioned flatly.

“I wasn’t trying to be funny.” the blond replied, visibly unfazed by her tone.

“Yeah, sure.” she snorted before turning back to Jongin, earning low chuckles from the others.

 

You couldn’t help but to scowl after hearing them. It was obvious that they weren’t taking him seriously, going as far as subtly mocking him. You took notice on how the people who used to fear him due to his cold disposition start to stare at him with resentment.

 

It was a disturbing sight.

 

You could also notice a few dirty looks being tossed to the ones who mocked him, and soon enough the tension was rising. Jongin visibly tried to distract them by striking up a conversation, but it wasn’t really helping. The other students who didn’t seem to share the same sense of humor jokingly tried to lighten the atmosphere, giving their kind attention to the blond as well, which Sehun lightly responded to.

 

“For the last time, we’re fine.” Sehun sighed.

A few of the students chatting with Jongin stopped when they heard him, narrowing their eyes at him in distaste, especially Kang Hye Ra who was standing closest to Jongin. “Hey, did you do this?” she asked in an accusing tone.

Hearing the absurdity behind the question, Sehun scoffed in disbelief, “What?” he turned to her, holding back a laugh.

“It’s disgusting how you act all stupid when you know what you did,” she spat, earning surprised looks from a few of the students, including Jongin himself.

“What are you doing?” Jongin frowned, his voice serious as he pulled the girl back.

“What was that supposed to mean?” one of the girls in class asked her with an obvious frown on her face.

“What do you mean?” the girl who spoke to Sehun asked her back with a lifted brow, arms crossed.

“Don’t act like you didn’t just clown,” the latter scoffed.

“Excuse me?” the girl lifted a brow.

“You just tried to blame the bruises he has on Sehun!”

“Isn’t it obvious that he’s the one behind them?”

 

Oh my God, they’re going to fight.

 

As the tension escalated, you couldn’t help but to look around the classroom in anxiety. Seung Joon wasn’t anywhere in sight, and the class was barely full since it was still early in the morning. You turned your attention back to them when you heard someone slam the table.

 

“What did you just say?” another girl popped up behind Sehun, seemingly standing in the blond’s defense. “You can’t just talk to him like that,”

Sehun turned his head back to shake his head at them, “Don’t.” he told them in a low voice, not wanting them to get involved.

“God, I can’t believe my ears,” the first girl chuckled before shifting her face into something of menace, “I can’t believe you’re defending this guy,”

“Hye Ra, stop,” Jongin finally stood up from his seat, pulling on her wrist once again with more force. “I’m serious.”

However, the girl quickly pulled her hand out of his hold, showing him an upset look instead of a guilty one. “And you,” she turned to look at Jongin, “Why are you still friends with this douchebag?”

“Kang Hye Ra!” Jongin scowled at her, his voice clearly showing how upset he was.

 

Right around the same time, your patience thinned out. Her tone could be described with one word—venomous. Your ears became hot as you heard more and more from the fight, so much so that you stood up abruptly from your seat, glaring at the girl as your temper started b over its limit.

 

“Hey,” you hollered sharply. Everybody turned their eyes to you, and for the first time, you weren’t afraid of it. “Do you know who’s more disgusting than someone who tries to act stupid? The idiot who thinks she’s smarter than everyone else.”

 

The class widened their eyes upon hearing your daring words.

 

Hye Ra paused for a moment before scoffing, “Say that again? I’d like to hear it up close. Why don’t you come here and say it in front of my face?” she dared you.

 

You didn’t know what came over you, but all the adrenaline in your body just kept pushing you to take her challenge. You moved away from your seat and pushed it hard against your desk before strutting towards her.

 

However, Sehun blocked you before you could even reach her. With speed, the blond removed himself from his seat as soon as he saw you approaching them and stood in the middle of your path. “Don’t be stupid,” he spoke in a quiet voice.

“That’s exactly what I’m doing,” you replied with confidence, yet still keeping your voice low enough for him to hear. 

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Sorry for the LONG and tumultuous delay of an update. I got really sick these past few months, and I still haven't really fully recovered since the cause of my illness is still unknown. I promise to come back with an update though!

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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wise💖 as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❤️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude ♡ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his 😅). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.