Heaven's Angel ((hiatus))

Description

The first part of this story is based on you and Jaejoong. Jaejoong was involved in an accident that has given him to ability to travel back and forth between the real world and heaven. Jaejoong becomes a postman who delivers letters to the dead from their grieving loved ones and meets you by chance one day, as she was trying to send her late boyfriend a letter. We find out that only she can see Jaejoong.

 

As the story progresses you must go through a series of events that will change your life. Its life or death and I mean that. This story is filled with  comedy, action, romance, drama and you know, more drama. And a few good looking guys with some kick vampiric superpowers.

You must complete a mission before time runs out. The time is tickin'

 

 

Foreword

Jaejoong is your angel well he actually is an angel, he is heaven's postman not really thinking about what will happen.

 if, if.

If someone who you don't know asks you, "have we met before?"
Or "you're the heroine of my never-ending dream", 
on the streets it may not be for a lip service.
He may be your destiny.
 
Now you are just a wondering girl, who is lost, lonely and sad about her late boyfriend dying. Everything changes when she randomly meets Jaejoong.
 
........It will be based on Jaejoong and yourself.............
 
NOTE:The first part is based mostly on the MOVIE... As I write it will change

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bloom12 #1
Chapter 13: Please tell us who is the Schuler at least please I want to now so badly if you are not going to finish the storie but if you are then don't tell us thank you though it was a nices a story so far
LalaLucky #2
Wow, I'm a character in this story?
bloom12 #3
Chapter 12: Don't stop continue please its so good poor jae :( who is this schuler I want to know? It's very goodi love it <3
lovechocolate
#4
my username is lovechocolate XD
hellokitty120
#5
Pls update soon.....I can't waiting for next chapter....
nefertina
#6
Honest opinion:- I think it's good that you are writing based on a movie. Which means JJ fans don't need much introduction. However, right now your story reads like a book version of the movie. What would make it intriguing if you were to write scenarios that is NOT in the movie. Get the readers imagination going. The storyline can be the same but subtle twists in the plot will make it so much more interesting.<br />
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Also, I think you should just stick to normal font for better readability. Honestly, I kinda skimmed through the chapters only as the fonts were distracting.<br />
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But there's plenty of potential in this story and I hope you continue to write
daydreamergirl11
#7
I like your story! Please keep writing it!!!!
mareta #8
Because I like Jaejoong very much I feel so happy to see there my name written.. Haha The story make my feel so sad, because it's like I involved in it...
Puddie-
#9
OMGAH THE LAST PART MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD<br />
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'What’s your name by the way?<br />
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Why should I tell you? I said still upset.<br />
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Just tell me, he said getting closer.<br />
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Its… it’s  Puddie88'<br />
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my name omg, hahahahahaha ;"D