Chapter 11

Heaven's Angel ((hiatus))

Chapter 11-  Meeting the family


 

Whispers and gasps filled the room and the now peaceful room was tense.  The eyes of the other schedulers were now turned to Jake.

“You can’t be serious?”  The elder girl said, the once brown in her eyes faded and turned in to a dark red.  Jake turned to her and nodded giving her the signal that he was indeed telling the truth to her. My elder sister Wang Ji Hye was always the smart one, she was full of wisdom but at some times she was a bit rude or mean. 

“This can’t be possible, SLAVE!” a younger man came running from across the room, trying to run as fast as possible. This younger man was all in white and his eyes were a violent colour.

“Annyeong” he bowed to Jake and the Scheduler and they did the same. “ Miss I have a name” Jake was my younger brother, in fact we never really talked much since now. We have just been keeping our distance. But he was always the Mr. Know it all with an attitude problem.

“Hush” the elder girl replied. “Now tell me how this is possible”

“Hiring an angel to do your dirty work Elena” Jake said to the elder girl.

“They are very loyal, now you tell me why this happened”

The angel slave went through his paper work and looked through many, many pages until they reached the floor and became a scroll of gold and white. He followed the scoll down to the middle till he found you“ By the looks of it, a Kim Jaejoong has been involved with this girl”

“ Wait a second” Jake hushed the slave boy. He walked back and forth until.

“That Kim Jaejoong is one of our postmen right? I’ve heard this name”

“Yes sir, you are correct indeed”

More heads looked down to try and listen to the conversation happening down stairs. Jake looked at the classical piano, they needed to talk without everyone’s attention. He teleported from downstairs to up, he landed onto of the piano in a gush of wind and white smoke.

“Boo” the man on the piano jumped. “Excuse me” Jake flicked his two fingers in front of the piano in the air and it started to play by itself. He teleported back down stairs, “Now shall we go outside” they all nodded out into the garden.

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The scheduler took the bottle of alcohol with him and sat down on the edge of the water feature.

“So an angel is involved with this, he should of seen something like this, can't angels see the future?” Jake asked.

“no, no my dear only our breeds can see the future, someone like Jaejoong only delivers letters. ”

“What happens if she remembers?” The scheduler looked up….. waiting for an answers but the faces of his sister and elder brother had no faith in something like this happening.

“She won’t remember, she can’t her memory was erased brother” Jake snapped at his elder brother.

“Calm down both of you, Jake your brother will do what he normally does .He will send her off to heaven right?" she looked at the Scheduler.

“You are going to make her a deal aren’t you brother” the furry in Jakes eyes lit up and he was over the idea of getting her memory back and just the mere mention of you annoyed him.

“Yes, and if this bothers you do something about it. She wasn’t meant to get caught in that accident, no one foresaw this event Jake”

“Fine do whatever you want with her, but so help me if you get caught” Jake teleported back in side and went over to the bar.

“Make the deal” the elder sister told the scheduler, she then bowed and disappeared into the night, leaving the Scheduler alone outside, leaving him to his wondering thoughts, apart of him just couldn't let this girl go.

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bloom12 #1
Chapter 13: Please tell us who is the Schuler at least please I want to now so badly if you are not going to finish the storie but if you are then don't tell us thank you though it was a nices a story so far
LalaLucky #2
Wow, I'm a character in this story?
bloom12 #3
Chapter 12: Don't stop continue please its so good poor jae :( who is this schuler I want to know? It's very goodi love it <3
lovechocolate
#4
my username is lovechocolate XD
hellokitty120
#5
Pls update soon.....I can't waiting for next chapter....
nefertina
#6
Honest opinion:- I think it's good that you are writing based on a movie. Which means JJ fans don't need much introduction. However, right now your story reads like a book version of the movie. What would make it intriguing if you were to write scenarios that is NOT in the movie. Get the readers imagination going. The storyline can be the same but subtle twists in the plot will make it so much more interesting.<br />
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Also, I think you should just stick to normal font for better readability. Honestly, I kinda skimmed through the chapters only as the fonts were distracting.<br />
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But there's plenty of potential in this story and I hope you continue to write
daydreamergirl11
#7
I like your story! Please keep writing it!!!!
mareta #8
Because I like Jaejoong very much I feel so happy to see there my name written.. Haha The story make my feel so sad, because it's like I involved in it...
Puddie-
#9
OMGAH THE LAST PART MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD<br />
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'What’s your name by the way?<br />
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Why should I tell you? I said still upset.<br />
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Just tell me, he said getting closer.<br />
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Its… it’s  Puddie88'<br />
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my name omg, hahahahahaha ;"D