Beautiful Wolf by, Thanhxyuan

Title: Beautiful Wolf [3/5]

Simple, easy to remember, yet, common. The readers might find it difficult to search for your story if they haven’t subscribed yet.

Foreword/ Description: [4/5]

The description caught my eye, and it made me want to read more—the fact that I rarely read non-exo/snsd stories makes it positive. Kekekeke. Although, it would probably be much better if you’d put the quote/description in the poster on the description field itself. But nevertheless, your foreword is good!

Development of characters through dialog and actions: 17-20

It was slightly slow, to be frank. Which makes it boring. You used words that are somewhat too deep and some characterization from someone’s POV wasn’t clear enough.

Plot: 13/15

It was good. Wolfaus are slightly common but yours… it simply stands out. It’s fresh and you made your fic’s idea somewhat original (since I do not believe that there are ‘original’ and ‘like no other’ stories) and all I could say is keep it up!

Realism: 25/30

It was not much of a realistic story since we all know that werewolves/humans blah blah is unreal but I was sort of, captivated. There were some scenes which I wasn’t able to understand and the readers probably haven’t either, so I guess, you could explore more on details.

Grammar/Spelling: 14-15

Your  grammar was almost flawless except for some errors here and there.

Overall enjoyment of story: 12/20

Your story was good. All of it. From the development of the characters down to the grammar but I got bored halfway. Maybe I’m not just into Super Junior. Nevertheless. It’s good!

Review by: Baeksooshi / baesjj618. Please don't forget to credit us! ^^