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Ai (DailyDoseOfExo)

 
Hello~ I'm Ai. I'm fifteen years old and I'm having my life completely ruined by the twelve fabulous boys known as EXO. I spend most of my life writing and lazing around my house while listening to K-Pop. Unlike most K-Pop fans, I'm in no way, form, or fashion Asian; which I think makes me rather unique. 
 
 
I'm very big on details. Without all the little details, what is the use of writing a story? If the author does not use details, the readers are stuck reading boring text with no meaning behind it no matter how good the plot of the story may have been. There is also no character development without details. If there is no character development, the readers cannot feel emotionally attached to the story. So, I guess I would say I am very big on well written details, nice character development, and for the author to contribute an emotional connection throughout the story through the words and actions of his or her character(s). Of course, good grammar, correct punctuation, etc. is a must for a story to even begin to have any of what I just talked about in it.
 

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Whitestallion:
 
I'm Dani, and I come from Singapore. I'll try not to give a description that can be found on my profile page, haha. (but i tend to ramble alot, so the About Me there is already quite sufficient, actually) I got introduced to kpop in 2009/2010, but iI've only started liking it since 2012. I tend to like rookie groups alot, for some reason, but the newer ones i've really started following are B.A.P, EXO, and CClown.
(Was that boring? I'm sorry, lol)
For my writing, i like to write about issues/problems/stuff (in general, for want of a better word) that i myself think are quite relevant to my own life. I won't ramble further about that, haha.
I'm a bit of a stickler about grammar and repetitive words in a paragraph. It sort of jumps out at me. I don't know if this is strange but I also take note of paragraph length and format, like text colour and type. I don't/can't really read fics with endless, long paragraphs or font with bright colours like green or yellow (in fact, I'd rather you just stick to plain black). It doesn't have to be fantastically designed but at least comfortable for one to read.
 
 
Baeksooshi:
 
Hello, I'm Bae and I'm from the Philippines. AYO WASSUP PINOYS?! 
Anyways, I'm an EXOStan and SONE and I would be happy if you guys would request EXO and SNSD reviews from me. :) I have my own review shop, so, I can say that I'm an INTERMIDIATE reviewer. I won't say that I'm a professional reviewer 'coz I'm not. 
English is my second language but I can speak it quite well since I grew up watching English movies and stuff like that. I became a SONE in November 2011 and an EXOStan in mid-2012. I have my own stories and my aim as a reviewer is to help you improve and help myself as well since I gain ideas and inspiration through reading others' works. It's like hitting two birds in one stone.
I can process SNSD and EXO requests within 2days-1wk but when it comes to other groups, it might take a bit longer, a few days or so, but! Surely, you will get your request. So please, send requests! ^^
 

Joytotheworld16: 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/623802

Hi! I'm Joy, and I love Kpop. (Who doesn't here? haha) My ultimate bias group is SHINee, but I also like EXO, 2NE1, and a bunch of other groups.

I'm 100% Chinese, but English is my first language. I love writing, and I'm a huge bookworm; my favorite series of all time is Harry Potter (any other Potterheads out there?). I also love reading other people's work, so don't hesitate to leave me a request!

I'm new to reviewing, so I haven't really established a style yet...but something I always notice about a story is its grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc. I'm a huge grammar nazi; if a story is littered with errors, it really distracts me from the plot. So I'll probably place a particularly large emphasis on mechanics and syntax in my reviews.

Anyways, thanks for taking the time to read my bio! And once again, please don't hesitate to leave me requests; I'd love to read your stories! :)
 

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TheDarkLordInHiding
#1
Do you review oneshots?
yoongis-cupcake
#2
1. Title: Broken Crayons Still Colour
2. Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/934102/broken-crayons-still-colour-angst-depression-eatingdisorder-jackson-mark-got7-markson
3. Description: Mark has an eating disorder. Jackson has his suspicions. Jackson is sworn to secrecy, but what he doesn't realise is that the decision he makes could potentially threaten Mark's life.
4. Reason: This is my first "successful" story and I would really like to gain readers by improving it! I'm asking for a review to see what I can change to improve it and gain more readers, since I want people to know they aren't alone <3
[[note: its a work im progress/incomplete, is that okay? haha <3 thank you so much!]]
dyodyopie
#3
1. Story Title: Broken Guitar String

2. Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/765552/broken-guitar-string-angst-drama-romance-tragedy-kaisoo-chanbaek

3. Mini description of story: Baekhyun and Chanyeol are happily married and their love seems so strong that it is seems indestructible. Chanyeol then got a promotion in his company and hence, he got busier. Unknowingly, he stopped giving the love and attention Baekhyun wanted hence, Baekhyun turned to someone else for love. The love Baekhyun had turned to made his marriage life with Chanyeol unspeakable.

4. Reason why you would like a review: Furslt because it is my first time writing a story and I want to recieve different thoughts on how the story is. I need to also improve on my charaterization, many reviewers told me I need to be clear. I want to improve in everything overall. LOL
bts_kimtaehyung
#4
1. Story Title : Blind Heirs

2. Link to story : https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin

3. Mini description of story : I'm bad at this otl sorry

4. Reason why you would like a review : I would like to improve:3



idek why im recommending my own story but okay:p

The author's name : bts_kimtaehyung
Story title:blind heirs
Link to the story:https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/750795/blind-heirs-angst-romance-tragedy-you-exo-baekhyun-kimwoobin
Why you would want us to read it. : this story will be awesome:3
overdosagexo #5
1. Story Title
包子 (Baozi)

2. Link to story
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/656260/baozi-anorexia-depression-exo-xiumin-bulimia

3. Mini description of story
It's about how Xiumin deals with anorexia and eating disorders

4. Reason why you would like a review
I would like to know what others think about my writing. I really like to write and my ideas come at random times, but I honestly do not really think I portray my ideas well. That's why I would like a review :)
eunhyuksgal
#6
1. Story Title : What Exactly Am I to You?

2. Link to story : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/673172/what-exactly-am-i-to-you-angst-donghae-eunhae-eunhyuk-hyukjae--superjunior

3. Mini description of story : A story analyzing Eunhyuk's love life of ups and downs; with mostly downs. Donghae has been there for him since day 1, as a brother, as a best friend and unfortunately as a buddy. When Eunhyuk finally realizes Donghae's true feelings for him, he is unable to reciprocate it. This story is definitely going to be full of angst and since that's the foundation of their relationship in this story. Timeline is close to current reality.

4. Reason why you would like a review : This is my first ever proper chaptered fanfic and a pairing of the popular Eunhae. Currently still in the midst of firming up the rest of the story so reviews and feedback would be extremely useful for my story development.

Thanks a lot!
love_me_love_kpop
#7
Chapter 6: I just realized I recommended your story! Haha! I see you've been keeping shop. If it were still in mine, it would start collecting internet dust. orz
ArmyExoticBaby
#8
1. Story Title - My Heroine, My First Love

2. Link to story - http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/610765/my-heroine-my-first-love-fluff-krystal-romance-exo-luhan-tao-lay

3. Mini description of story - Ever since you saved Lay from some crooks in an alley, he starts to fall in love with you. Luhan is also your lost childhood friend, and also your forgotten lover. What will happen when you get knotted in a love triangle and also fall in love with one -- or both of them?

4. Reason why you would like a review - I would like to know if I should continue writing or not since this is my first fanfic ^^ Thank you for all the effort too, it means alot to me :)
P.s- english isnt my first language
ThanhXuan
#9
Chapter 19: Thank you for the review! I'll credit you ASAP!