Calling Baeksooshi
Yifan's Honest Reviews and Recommendations [Closed. Sorry]Baeksooshi Review:
Profile:
https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/537934
Story:
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/652579/the-storm-and-the-sun-angst-snsd-taeny-sunri-sunyeon-sunsic
Title: 5-5
It's quite unique and I've never read a story with the same title.
Foreword/ Description: 3-5
Description was beautiful. It left me questioning more.
With my personal preference, the foreword seemed too long and I got bored.
Development of characters through dialog and actions: 16-20
At first the character changes with Sunny had previously confused me but after taking time to read deeper into the story I had a better understanding.
Her character development and Taeyeon's weak one seemed a bit ... Rushed?
Plot: 14-15
The plot was interesting and definitely unique. The people and their alter-ego's made them more than just typical characters.
Realism: 27-30
I think i'm being a bit too lenient but since it is a kind of fantasy fic with different types of personalities which were all possibly existing in the real world, you did well.
As I read through it, I haven't discovered any quirks or habits. This would make your story quite plain.
Deduction of 3 points! /bangs mallet like a judge/
Grammar/Spelling: 13-15
Your grammar and spelling is very good except for some small mistakes. I copied the story onto word and there were SOME grammar and spelling mistakes but overall it was very hard to find. Btw, I deleted the story from my word once I checked on grammar and spellings.
Overall enjoyment of story: 10-20
It's well written with a small amount of mistakes but I personally don't prefer Yuri or something along the lines of same gender pairings. I'm more into a OC girl fic.
It was very interesting but not interesting enough ... For me. Don't take this to heart because if I was into Yuri, i would've enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: KirbyK
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