Perfect Night

Princess In The Making.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=68MvXo0d5gI

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Narrator (you):

You grabbed you stuff and headed out to Dae Hyun’s house. As soon as you got there Dae Hyun was acting different.

He just sat there at his room listening to music. Usually he would greet you and play, but today was… Different. You walked slowly towards him and stopped when he lifted his hand.

“I don’t want you to come near me.” Those words came out and pierced your heart. Your best friend from the beginning of your life gone like that.

You grabbed Changjo and took your stuff. He helped you out of the house back to yours. Your tears kept falling and you heart kept aching from Dae Hyun’s words.

You got your clothes and stuffed all of it in your suitcases. You couldn’t stop crying you kept on tripping then Changjo hugged you from behind.

“Don’t cry, tell me what happened.” He whispered. You turned so you could cry in his chest.

“Dae doesn’t want to see me he doesn’t want me near him he’s like a whole different person.” You buried you face deeper as Changjo held you tighter.

“Don’t worry about him just remember our date tonight.” You quickly stopped sobbing and left with Changjo and your stuff.

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UBER short sorry about that i'm tired. Sorry for all of the grammer mistakes and ALICE!!! Wae? i should add more minsoo next time. Ariso? 

~Panda_Muffins

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x3Maple #1
HAHA the ending was so abrupt! I just LOLed when I read it. But overall it was sweet and cute :) not much ing and whatever. Good job on yout first fanfic!:)
Panda_Muffins #2
@aznshandow i know i don't feel confident with that chapter i might remake it later today. plus i didn't know where i was going LOL so yeah
NillaBerryMymy #3
Oh no wonder when I read it, it felt like you were rushing. I think I can tell if a person is rushing or not. Not 100% sure
LJoesAngel
#4
@ chapter 9. WOW there would be a 'No More Perfume On U' time. LOL
alicxander #5
yayyyyyyyyyyyy <3 I giggled through out the whole thing. hehehehe
alicxander #6
BIJJ YESS YOU BETTER. kekekekeke, make it longer on the next chapter.
alicxander #7
WRITE SOMETHING ABOUT CAP. I REQUEST!!! TAKE MY REQUEST!!!!!!! make him have a girlfriend who's name is alice. hehehehehe
alicxander #8
the dna test in chapter 3 reminds me of maury. lololololol
alicxander #9
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SPAM SPAM UPDATE. <br />
사랑해 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ ^ ㅁ ^
beyondinfinite
#10
update more! fighting! ^^