Chapter 13: that's it? WHAT, NOOO I NEED MORE!! I thought I finally found an Iljae fic where they would be happy and but- *wails* MY ILJAE ASCSHXUQKDI. No way, this can't be it! It's rtill unresolved, Ilsik is improving (still for iljae though), I think there's something up with Peniel, and I want to know if Sungjae's feelings change after coming back from his parents. CLIFFHANGER! ㅠㅠ Waaaah~!! I admit it's freaking good, but the deep words though... plus the cliffhanger... I'm probably a year too late, but still doesn't hurt to try. (FOR ILJAE!!!)

What is this? All fart, no ? I was primed for something to go down in the computer room at least. I feel cheated. I still liked the story though.

Chapter 13: No way,? I was just getting excited knowing that ilhoon will get everyone but you ended it!!! Waaeee???? TT.TT

Chapter 13: is it really end here ??????
pls it can't be :/
i'm curious what'll happen next..what sungjae do... woaaaaah i think i can't sleep tonight ><

Chapter 13: sequel!!!
It can't be the end T~T

There has to be a sequel! It feels like something else is going to happen even though it isn't. Love the story though!!!!

Chapter 10: Mehhhhh :/

Chapter 12: This story's nice, but it would be even better if you cut back on the Victorean Era like talk. Things like "derrière" and "scarce". I can't eve imagine Btob talking like that. I doubt anyone reading knows what "subterfuge" is man.
Your dialogue doesn't really match the descriptive parts of the story.
Nice try though.