Chapter Twelve

Pi Li MIT: Revenge (english)

Chapter Eleven recap:

‘Please remember me…I’m Tian Mo Xing…please don‘t forget me.’ said the girl with brown hair with tears coming down from her checks, ‘Please.’

Once all of them ran away from the room and down to the second floor and stop.

“Did she said her name was Tian Mo Xing?” Xiu-mei ask

“That can’t be our Tian Mo Xing right?” Xio Lengfeng ask

“That can’t be. She’s at the hospital in a coma. If her soul is…nah. That’s impossible.” Miss Cherry said

Suddenly Miss Cherry’s cell phone rang, “Hello?”

‘Tao Mei Ren…where’s Tian Mo Xing?’ Teacher Angel ask

“Mom…what are you saying?” Miss Cherry ask

‘Where’s Tian Mo Xing!? Lu Ke Ying has been acting strange yesterday. Talking about Tian Mo Xing in danger. Where is she?’ Teacher Angel ask

“Sh-she’s at the hospital. She’s in a coma right now and Zhan She Di is taking care of her.” Miss Cherry said

‘Co-coma? What happen?’

“Mom. We’ll talk about this later. Someone else on the other line is calling me.” Miss Cherry said and hung up and answered the other line, “Hello?”

‘Miss Cherry…Tian Mo Xing-she’s in the emergency room.’ 007 said

“Hold on we’re coming right now!” Miss Cherry shouted and hang up the phone, “Tian Mo Xing is in a bad condition right now. Let’s go to the hospital quick.”

All of them ran out of the old building and hurried to the hospital as possible as they can. Once they arrive they went to where the emergency room of where Tian Mo Xing was being operated.

“Zhan She Di/007!” all of them shouted

“What happen?” 747 ask

“Her breathing was abnormal so they took her in the emergency room.” 007 said

Suddenly Miss Cherry’s cell rang again, “Hello mom.”

‘What’s happening to Tian Mo Xing? Lu Ke Ying is at the hospital saying she’s in danger. What’s happening?’ Teacher Angel ask with worried voice

“She’s at the emergency room right now being operated. We don’t know what’s happening.” Miss Cherry said

‘Please…take care of your sister no matter what. Never let get your eyes out of her for even a second. Please…I-I never want it to happen again. Never.’ Teacher Angel said crying

“I will. I promise.” Miss Cherry said and hung up.

~1 hour later~

All six of them were sitting at the seats waiting for a doctor to come out.

[‘Please remember me…I’m Tian Mo Xing…please don‘t forget me.’ said the girl with brown hair with tears coming down from her checks, ‘Please.’ ]

Miss Cherry was reoccurring what happen at the room of the old building just a few hours ago when they we’re surrounded by student’s soul.

Suddenly a doctor and a nurse came out of the emergency room and all of them ran up.

“Is she okay?” 187 ask

The nurse looked at the doctor and the doctor nodded letting the nurse tell them.

“Actually…Tian Mo Xing is…”the nurse pause for awhile having a hard time to let it out.

The other’s were worried and starting crying (Xiu-mei, Xio Lengfeng, and Miss Cherry) even though the results wasn’t out yet.

“She’s…….


Chapter Twelve

 

“She’s…will she only have one month left not three. If she doesn’t wake up till then she has to be put to sleep. I’m sorry.” the nurse said with a sad voice

Miss Cherry shook her head back and forth in disbelief on what the nurse is trying to say.

“No…It can’t be. YOU SAID SHE HAS 3 MONTHS AND NOW 1!” Miss Cherry shouted with tears trickling down of her cheeks and Xio Lengfeng was holding back Miss Cherry from choking anyone.

“Miss Cherry…please calm down. She wants you to be happy for her while the condition she’s in. I’m sure that’s what she wants.” Xiu-mei said also with tears.

“Please…Tian Mo Xing wake up!” Miss Cherry shouted, “you we’re there helping us! Please wake up!”

Miss Cherry collapsed unto the floor crying her heart out for her only sister to wake up.

“Miss Cherry!” all of them shouted

The nurse and doctor left them before leaving they said, “when your ready you may see her in room 1215.”

187 helped Miss Cherry stand up and all of them headed to room 1215. Once arriving they sat down and Miss Cherry sat down next to Tian Mo Xing’s bed holding unto her tightly as she could like holding unto a little child while crossing the street.

“Tian Mo Xing.” Miss Cherry said in a whisper.

The room was filled with silence and sadness. No one wants to speak or make a single noise.

[‘Please remember me…I’m Tian Mo Xing…please don‘t forget me.’ said the girl with brown hair with tears coming down from her checks, ‘Please.’]

The scene of the brown haired girl keep repeating in Miss Cherry’s head as if it was telling her something. Recalling the scene the girl resembles as Tian Mo Xing but why was she telling her to remember her and why was her name the same as Tian Mo Xing? This was puzzling Miss Cherry even more.

25 minutes has pass and everyone had fallen asleep.

(Miss Cherry’s dream would be in italic)

‘Miss Cherry!’ a brown haired girl shouted from a distance, ‘Please. Don’t forget me’

‘Tian Mo Xing?’ Miss Cherry ask with a confusing look on her face

‘I see your happy. That’s great! Tell mother for me that I’m sorry and to Lu Ke Ying also and also to 007. And I’m sorry to you also. I must be just a burden to everyone aren’t I?’ Tian Mo Xing said

‘Your not a burden. It’s part of your personality.’ Miss Cherry said holding unto Tian Mo Xing’s hand

‘Thanks. But if I don’t make it in time. I’m very sorry.’ Tian Mo Xing said disappearing little by little

‘Tian Mo Xing! Don’t leave! TIAN MO XING!’ Miss Cherry shouted

‘Please solve the case for me it might help me but do it before 1 month and please don’t forget me…..I love you. Sister.’ a soft wind of voice said it pass her ears…the voice of her sister…Tian Mo Xing.

“TIAN MO XING!” Miss Cherry shouted and shoot up beside Tian Mo Xing and still holding unto her hand.

Miss Cherry look beside her and Tian Mo Xing was still there.

“Miss Cherry? What’s wrong?” Xiu-mei ask

Everyone had woken up from their sleep.

“Sorry if I disturbed your sleep.” Miss Cherry said

“Why were you shouting Tian Mo Xing’s name a second ago?” 747 ask

“I-It was just a dream.” Miss Cherry said.

“Could you please tell us? She might be saying something to you.” Xio Lengfeng said

Miss Cherry looked at everyone and nodded and told them her dreams.

“She wants us to solve the case before 1 month?” 187 ask

Miss Cherry nodded, “she said it might help her wake up. But I’m not sure if we can do it before 1 month.”

“Be positive Miss Cherry. She wants all of us to help her and we also want to help her. We can do it.” Xio Lengfeng said

“I agree with her.” Xiu-mei and 747 said

“Alright. Will try our best.” Miss Cherry said

“This time I’ll be part of the case this time.” 007 said

“What about Tian Mo Xing?” Xiu-mei ask

“Don’t worry. Her mother is coming today.” 007 said

“Alright.” Miss Cherry said, “Let’s go.”

All of them headed out of Tian Mo Xing’s room.

[‘Good luck. Everyone.’ Tian Mo Xing’s voice said to everyone of them in their head]

All of them had arrived back at Sheng Ying University and headed at the clubroom. Once arriving…Miss Cherry’s cell phone rang which was an unknown caller so Miss Cherry put it on speaker.

‘All but one I see is returning but I think all of you made a big mistake in your entire life. Here’s a clue: Precious to all of you easily to be pluck of it’s roots. Now all most half way pluck but never all the way. With one little pull your precious ones are gone from your life. I’ll give you 15 minutes. Good-luck or regret it.’ said the caller

“Something precious to all of us?” Xio Lengfeng ask, “that would be our families.”

“But it’s considering one person who’s precious to all of us.” Xiu-mei said

“half way pluck, half way pluck.” Miss Cherry said pacing back and forth

Then something hit all of them at the same time and look at each other in horror as if something had just gone wrong…and something has gone wrong. The one who’s precious to all of them is no other than…

“Tian Mo Xing!” all of them shouted and ran out of the MIT clubroom.

All of them regretted of leaving Tian Mo Xing behind before making sure that her mother was coming. They all regretted it.

‘Hang in there Tian Mo Xing!’ all of them thought in there head.

Can they make it in time? Is this person the mastermind or the player? Is it the end of Tian Mo Xing or will someone save her?

 

To be continue…


 

Thanks everyone for reading! Hopefully you enjoyed this chapter even though it’s short.

@CupcakesPrincess

Sorry for making you a little bit scared but it wasn’t on intention it just came to mind so I just had to adjust it into this story. Sorry. But…wait I’m not spoiling the part about Tian Mo Xing…heehawed you’ll just have to wait! ^O^

@Bubble

Sorry if I give you an heart attack on this chapter but I just can’t help myself putting cliffhangers on every chapter. Sorry! ^O^

 

This story is almost at it's end...so sad. I had a great time writing this story. But I'm thinking of writing a continual of this. Hmmm...may be I should!

 

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FifiLuvs2pm
#1
Chapter 13: OMGGGG .. She diedddd .. HUHU !!
xiumintss
#2
ohemgee i though you're gonna kill~ whew~
fantasyfanfic
#3
you scared me alot there...especially the teacher and student souls part that was creepy o.o
you got me screaming when you let Tian Mo Xing died
but good thing u wrote a happy ending *sob sob* this is a great story!!
lynnieeboo #4
Omg you you almost had me for a sec, then I was like NOOOOOOOO she can't die!!!
Then I was like Thank god.
_fairytale--
#5
Wait~ So Tian mo xing didn't die right..? This was an awesome story by the way ^^
dramaddict
#6
nice~
dramaddict
#7
nice~
-HaeFany-Forever- #8
Such a scare for me O.O I thought TMX died ! Don't scare me liddat! -holds chest- I might have a heart attacck! :D
Humble-Goody2shoes
#9
Omo!! i almost wanted to slap my entire being when i read the chapter 15 when you killed tian mo xing!!! i was really teary! thank God! you made another special chap!!! congrats! you did very awesome!! love lots! xoxo
sweetghost #10
woowwwwwww...!!<br />
At first I thought it was really a sad<br />
ending but in the end it is a happy one..<br />
I hope you will continue writing Guilun fanics.<br />
I am going to wait for that,:)<br />
congratulations..:)