Five Days of Winter

Description

  Daehyun pretended to be a mute for the first half of his life, but when an unfortunate event occured, losing his parents, his voice started to fade away. People believed he was traumatized and thought it would pass on. Truthfully, Daehyun refused to talk. He didn't see the need for it since the ones he loved were gone. However, that all changed when he met him.

  Youngjae had an almost normal life due to his fear of his strict father. Although he seems like the happy-go-lucky type to everyone around him, in actuality, Youngjae is the opposite. Inside his house, he doesn’t feel like the same person that he shows everyone else. Sometimes, he wonders if there’s two of him. He never thought that he would meet someone so different from him, but yet similar. He never thought of actually becoming someone’s happiness.

Foreword

Daehyun

  I used to think if I pretended to be a mute then people will start listening to me more, but in fact, it had the opposite effect. I thought that people would be able to hear me better if I said nothing at all. I thought people will actually care more about me rather than fakes who only friend me because I’m handsome and talented.

  But I was wrong.

  Ever since I had lost my parents, it felt as if I didn’t have a voice at all. It felt as if I was really mute, unable to talk to anyone. I could still hear others speak and they all say the same thing, “He’s traumatized. It’ll take time for him to heal.”

  I used that to my advantage and haven't spoken to people ever since; not even to my own aunt who has been taking care of me for years. I’m glad she’s patient because I don’t know when I’ll actually speak. I even learned how to do sign language, so what’s the whole point of speaking now? Having at least one language is enough to communicate, even if barely anyone knows what I’m saying.

  That’s okay. I’d rather be the only one who hears me.

  At least, that’s what I thought until I met him.

 

Youngjae

    I love the attention everyone gives me at school, especially from my friends. I love how they listen to me and laugh at my jokes. I love hearing the sound of laughter. I guess that’s why I love talking so much.

  I mean, I never thought how many people I got to know just by a simple, “Hello.”

  Everything sparks right there.

  Just by that simple greeting, things pick up from there. I usually continue the conversation no matter how awkward it was for that other person. I could still see them around, right? However, when I’m home it’s a completely different story.

  At home, it was hard to smile, laugh, or talk with my dad around. He was so strict on me to where I fear I would make a wrong move with everything I do. I don’t even know if he smiles at me either. It was hard to handle him, but my mom could, which is another thing I don’t understand. How does she do it? How does she manage to make my cold-hearted dad become such a warm, smiley person?

  I never understood that until I met my greatest challenge of all: Jung Daehyun.

Yes! Another fanfic from me this time featuring DaeJae! And this is also part of the Seasons one-shots~

Five Days of Spring ft. Himchan and Yong Guk

Five Days of Summer ft. Zelo

Five Days of Autumn ft. Jongup

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mi_elf
#1
Chapter 12: It has been a while since i have been moved this much by a story, i really loved it sooo much that i didn't hesitate to give it an upvote ^^, the story was really sweet and heart warming but the ending totally killed me.
Will you believe i didn't actually notice the last line at all till i started reading the comments XD, I was like what are they talking about, then i moved up and i noticed it :(, thanks for this heart warming story ^^.
seerat_osan #2
Also if u let me know how have u added the song without actually any link that can be seen ?
I mean I cant see the video link and it automatically plays as i open this page
seerat_osan #3
I read this a few days ago and didnt even realise u have not made subscription mandatory.
This was so good and the story progressed so beautiful i read this in one go <3
Loved it through and through.
All the conversations
I am dying here
<3
seerat_osan #4
Chapter 12: This was so good, its three in the morning and now i am shipping DaeJae hehehe <3
sozomu
#5
Chapter 12: Usually, I hate these kind of stories, you know, switching POV all the time. It makes me kind of bored really quickly. However, when I was at Chapter 4, I think, I was getting really interested in this story's further development as there was always something that hit me quite unexpected. I like unexpected stuff. You think it's oh so obvious and then, it's all really different from your expectation.
Now, I liked the idea. The plot way nice, the problems and all. I'm not a fan of quickly developing stories, so this was a little weird for me. On the other hand, I'm a very slow reader, so it felt way longer than five days since so much happened. I think, the conflict was well portrayed, or, well, I like how all the conflicts are somehow linked. It's interesting. :3
But, uhm... I have to criticize that you often changed tenses, it was confusing and in the beginning quite hard to get into the story. I mean, later on, I forgot about it, but I'm a little sensitive when it comes to keeping one tense and all, haha.
Over all, though, I liked that story. I don't even mind that they're brothers (damn, I think I habor some kind of a brother kink). It was full of surprises. :3
ausername_
#6
Chapter 12: a kind of unrequited love. ahh this is killing me, really!
I really like your writing style, anyway.
I should have found this story earlier.
angelyana
#7
Chapter 12: O.o Okaaayyyyyy
Pretty weird ending........
so.....they are brothers?
It was sweet kind of but........I seriously don't know how to react to this ending really
But it was still a good story :)
TeeyaNeox
#8
Chapter 12: Sweet....*sobs*
i'm crying....
Best fanfic
seung-gwan
#9
Chapter 12: oMG at first i misread the last lines and thought they werent brothers and i was all happy but then i re read it aND NOW IM SITTING HERE SAD oh gosh daejae makes me so emotional
forheart
#10
Chapter 12: WHY?
Why did you make them brothers??
this was so so isfjddkl agsnmjfa,l;''