I'm Going to Korea!

It's complicated!

 

YB's POV
 
Arghhhh i can't help it.. I wanna confess to her... She's just my type... She makes me fall for her everytime i meet her.. She always has this thing that makes me overwhelmed....i think it's her adorable smile... Gahhhhhhh i hope she felt the same as me...
 
As we walked down to the cafe for breakfast i saw mimi.. i went straight to her and surprised her... Yep she was surprises as she almost threw the plate at me.. i can see she was exicted for something.. then the others joined us... 
 
TOP: what's with the happy face? 
Mimi: guys, good news! Im so going for the YG audition
Everyone:  WHAT?! SERIOUS?!
Mimi: yes my parents gave me permission...
 
Everyone gave mimi a hug except for me... As everyone continues to get their breakfast i walked with mimi 
 
YB: woahhhh congrats mimi... *hugs mimi*
Mimi: thanks but.. it's not going to be that easy to get there... My parents doesnt have enough money so maybe we'll meet again next year.. 
YB: what?? Why so late? I'm gonna -- i mean We're going to miss you..
Mimi: Yeah me too but It's no like i can plant a tree that grows money..
YB: yeah... Sadly..
Mimi: hey no worries i'm still gonna see you guys again next year^^
YB: soo you have any plans today?
Mimi: nahhh...
YB: then wanna hang out? I totally need a tour guide 
Mimi: umm i gotto check my schedule first.. HAHA sure
 
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DYBismine
Honestly it's not completed yet.. I'm kinda new to this stuffs so im not sure how too :)
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DYBismine #1
Park_HyeSun thanks for the advice. I'm kinda new to this thing so can you tell me how can i make it uncomplete like on going?
Park_HyeSun #2
Well, well...

First things first. I usually only read completed stories, regardless of charcters used as long as it is not M-rated or /yuri. As this story of yours is marked as completed, I have read it. But to my surprise, it doesn't seem to have ended properly! :o

If you're looking for some constructive advice for your writing, I'm only going to point out two. (: I'd suggest that you refrain from using your smiley emoticons in the story as it appears to be both distracting and unprofessional. Secondly, usually people don't write in dialogue form. ^^

Keep on writing! If I have offended you in any way, I am truly sorry.
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