Barely Here

Description

 

Daesung was never the type to hold a grudge against those whom have hurt him the most. Never once had he believed that his family or friends were at wrong for treating him the way they do. Through the malicious rumors, that began since his first day at high school Daesung has come to believe that they were true. He, himself, has further deepen his own wounds.

Seunghyun had recently moved to this small town for a two weeks now. He has the popularity, looks, and brains to reach the tip of the social ladder since day two. He enters Daesung's life and becomes the catalyst of events simply by chance.

 

 

 

Characters :

 

KANG DAESUNG

Age: 17

: male

Personality: Introvert, sensitive, humble, caring

 

CHO SEUNGHYUN

Age: 17

: Male

Personality: Awkward, knows martial arts, jokester,  easily excited, loyal

CREDITS: to those who edited and uploaded this pic xD (wasn't me... I wished though keke they did a great job). Also I do not own any of the characters mentioned only the plot line... sadly *sigh* hehe

 

Foreword

DAESUNG'S POV

 

Darkness embraced me. I had no choice but to let it enfold me. It swallows anything around me yet I continue to draw it nearer since I knew it would be the only thing that would keep me going... but why now... why do I want to be selfish. In the past I would simply ignore you just like everyone else but since that day all I want to is be near you... Is it okay to drag you down with me? ... I shouldn't. I can't. I won't but I want to. It's better to stay away.

 

 

 

 

 

NOTE: please give me any critiques you may have since I am still a noob keke and i'd like to improve my writing for future stories~ enjoy!

Also this will have slow updates since its not my prioity :o but i will complete it and i won't give up on it ^^ 

it might be a short fan fic since this was intended to be a one-shot but i changed my mind lol

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ddeecullen #1
Chapter 11: ohmaigadd ! this is too cute >< i can't even handle it :))
hanalovebigbang #2
Chapter 11: Is this the end????noooo......... please.I'm begging for more
cottenstuff #3
Chapter 11: *coos over Todae fluffiness* They are too cute (>^_^<) btw excuse me while I die from that last line. I dunno If my theory is true or if you are just trolling me XD Anyway, this is the part where I paitently wait for more (which I am totally willing to do 'cause this fic is awesome. One of my favs actually***----*** So glad I clicked on it oh and sorry for flooding your feed with sleep deprived rambly comments but I can't help myself I am tired. I have never commented this much on a story before which is probably for the best. Wow my sleepy reading is hella slow okay that is the end of my ranting for sure now okay byyeeeyeeye (i have to wake up in an hour :'( It was so worth it)
cottenstuff #4
Chapter 10: SPOILERS SPOILERS GOOD LORD SPOILERS SPOILERS well not really unless you read into it but better safe than sorry SPOILERSSS SPOILERS DON'T READ ANY OF MY COMMENTS NEW COMERS FOR I FEAR THEY MAY POSSIBLY CONTAIN SPOILERS??!
NOOOOOOO was I right about the theory I made before? I hope not 'cause I want happy tutor times not sad mean ones ;;;;;;;;;-------------;;;;;;;;;;; feeling like a beached whale of sadness. That is how you tell a fic is good XD The sadness. P.S: The pictures you put in are so pretty that my heart has a spazzm every time I change a chapter *-* my heart can't take the pretty people XD
cottenstuff #5
Chapter 9: OHHH LOOK WHO FINALLY GETS MENTIONED IN THE STORY XD *such excite for the tutor student to be introduced to the gang* -possible but not really spoiler mostly just a crackpot theory- ...Do you think maybe Jiyong is the head of the nasty violent school group thing? That would be a twist >_< Sorry for commenting so often but I am getting super enthused over this fic it has so much cute but also angst like WOOOAAHHHAH Ok rant over for now
cottenstuff #6
Chapter 7: I have to wake up in two hours but reading this fic is worth the tiredness *-* Seunghyun's betting jeaaalllooouuusss. You master troll, author you XD
cottenstuff #7
Chapter 6: I'm reading this at 4:31 and I haven't had any sleep yet 'cause the feels are to much to handle. First I'd be like "Why you do dis to yourself Daesunggie" and the I'd be like ooooh dat BaexDae tho. Then all of a sudden Bae is feeling guilty about something, and I just can't imagine what he's done. This whole time I have been wondering why the town was so dang ruuuude. This is getting really rambly but I am tired so whatever. I am soooo glad you didn't leave it as 2(ish) chapters! I kinda called what Daesung's secret was during this chapter. ;-; Poor Dae. TIME TO READ THE REST OF THE FIIIICCCC K BYE xoxoxoxo
xtavista #8
Chapter 11: todae is tooo cutee..dae is too innocent^^
todaelovers #9
Chapter 11: OMG TODAE so cute :3
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