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✏Originality: 25/30 (how original your story is)

Your story does differs from other fanfics I have read, but in terms of anime and manga, this is a very common story plot. This is a little different as I never seen anyone do it in a fanfic form.

✏IdeA: 28/30 (how interesting your ideas are) -

 I gave you a really high mark as you deserved it:) On just reading the foreword you have put a lot of interesting information that establishes the setting and other aspect of the story. Your ideas are very well thought out; everything goes together really well. 

✏The Idea Presentation: 25/30 (how you present the idea itself) -

You stick to your main idea, which is really good. The only problem I have is that you have little contribution to other characters, I like to know them more, but I understand since you only have chapter 1-4. I also want to know more about Eun Gul and  Kim Ta Jong's relation to each other. There are a lot of questions unanswered, but again, you only have chapter 1-4. On the other hand, I like the atmosphere of mystery and suspense you put throughout the fanfic; is Ho Won posses? What the heck is happening to him and Eun Gul? Though, the phase of the story is a little fast for my liking but overall, you doing pretty good:)

✏Bonus: 9/10 (determines whether the reviewers would want to read till the end) -

I will surely read your story! I have a special love on magic related stories:) (I think I'm being a bias here...^^). 

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