Bae Suzy, Lee Jieun, and Park Jiyeon are the three best friends. They each have a boyfriend, but they are not finding what they are looking for. And then a silly idea comes across their mind.

"We got bored," the girls began simultaneously. The boys raised their eyebrows in confusion.

A mischievous smirk appeared on the girls' faces as they went on, "So, let's exchange lovers," Myungsoo and Taemin were plainly shocked. Their eyes were almost popping out of their head, unlike Baekhyun, who had a pleasant smile on his face.

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✏Originality: 19/30 (how original your story is)

-I believe that this story is not that original. Well, but you tried to make it your own version. So, let's see!

✏IdeA: 19/30 (how interesting your ideas are) -

In my POV, your idea are kind of interesting if you developed it really well. Adding some twists here and there would make it much more interesting. I would prefer if this story would continue in them exchanging partners with each other, falling with other than their girlfriends, but at the same time denying it. It should be interesting if you know how to develop those characters well. But it depends on your own plot, it's  you own story afterall. 

✏The Idea Presentation: 20/30 (how you present the idea itself) -

Your writing is okay. I can understand what you're trying to convey. But you could make it more interesting if you actually written in POV since I kinda feel no connection with the characters. Developing character's POV makes people would feel what the character is feeling. That's just my opinion though. Your flow of telling the story are not that smooth, but it's okay~ I want to praise for actually written good writing eventhough your English is not that good. Uh,  I would love if there is suspense in your stories too, like a cliffhanger on each chapter.

✏Bonus: 5/10 (determines whether the reviewers would want to read till the end) -

I would want to read it to know who end up with who.

sCORE: 63%

NOTES:

People out there, please do check this story, we've got three girls, Bae Suzy, Lee Jieun and Park Jiyeon which are best friends. They all had boyfriends, Bae Suzy got Taemin, Lee Jieun got Baekhyun, and Park Jiyeon got Myungsoo. What more could they ask? But, as crazy as this may sound, they, the girls, think that they are not finding what they are looking for. And guess what they do? They come with a silly idea, a silly idea: Changing Lovers. Read as they struggle to search for their true love, perhaps? READ IT! It's really cute~-

reviews by cheesydizzy