It's about two people, the killer and the cop. Somehow, their paths crossed without realizing who other was. The killer fell in love with her hunter, the cop. She was a monster in everyone's eyes but she tried to stay human for him. Unfortunately, it didn't go as she planned. 

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✏Originality: 26/30 (how original your story is)

-It's different than the usual story I find here. 

✏IdeA: 25/30 (how interesting your ideas are) -

I love it! Those three words basically said it. I mean it's different because it was not focusing on the love, it was focusing on the inner view of a serial killer and we get to feel how she really feels and how monstrous she had becomes. And I love the addition of her lover, a guy who was a police which is like a contradiction. Because the guy was looking for the killers yet it was in front of him. Very contradicting! 

✏The Idea Presentation: 24/30 (how you present the idea itself) -

Your writing is short. I mean it's not detailed. But it's really conveys the message and it was easy to read. The words you used are so wise, it was very clever! And I like that the girl has her back story of what she's becomes. I mean I don't really have anything to comment. The plot was also arranged neatly!

Congratulations! I like how she actually had her human side instead of being just monster-wholly. :) It was so psychological and bloody~

But sometimes, I do want to know? What made her so invicible? I mean, how could she, an untrained killer had it so smart! Unless I did not read it through.... But yeah, there's no like critical point where she was nearly getting caught or something besides the interviewing by the Dong Youngbae, making her so super invicible. I don't know.... Just what I think. Her character is also too sadistic for me.

TEHEE!

✏Bonus: 8/10 (determines whether the reviewers would want to read till the end) -

 I would want to watch whether she would get caught or not. And watch the minute the guys realize about it. 

sCORE: 85%

NOTES:

People out there, please do check this story, we've got a serial killer that is a girl, that finds pleasure in killing. Then, we got a cop, Choi Seunghyun, who is haunting the serial killers that've been killing people using same technics. What happens, when the girl and the guy meet and fall in love without the guy knowing who she was truly was? --READ IT! PLEASE!

reviews by cheesydizzy