ten; air versus fire

Guild Wars ( ♔ ) — It's More Than Just a War
Rain came in with 2 girls beside him. Haeun looked to see who they were and her eyes almost popped.
"2 new members? And they're female!?"
When the other members heard the word "female" they almost jumped out of their seats.
"Calm down and get your butts back on those seats." Rain scolded the members. "This is Rinko"
He gestured to the shorter girl. Her hair was pretty long and her outfit was a bit girly.... well, compared to Haeun's. (Haeun's will be revealed like waaaaaaaaaaaaay later in the story.)
"And this is Jihae."
The other girl was a bit taller and her style was still girly compared to Haeun's.
"WAOH WOAAAHHH. HOLD UP." Jongmin spoke. "Do any of you girls have piercings?"
The two girls narrowed their eyes are him. Jihae lifted her eyebrow which had a piercing. Rinko clutched her stomach because she has a piercing too.
"Just never get Haeun angry and you're good!" He smiled and made a thumbs up. Haeun looked up from the mention of her name.
"What?"
"Nothing."
Haeun shrugged and listened because Rain started talking.
"I want 2 of you to train them because they will be in our team for Guild Wars." And with that, Rain literally disappeared like a ninja.
"What the heck? In team Stormlight already? Do they even have our sign yet?" Jongmin freaked out.
"Yes, we do." Rinko spoke up and everyone looked at her. It was the first time they heard her speak and they were looking forward for more words. "Can someone just train us already?"
"Alright, you want training? You're gonna get training." Haeun stood up straight with a serious face. "Jongmin! You're helping me train these 2 and there's nothing you can do about it."
"But normally you train people with Kai..."
"Well do you really think Kai is in a state where he can train people?" Haeun rolled her eyes at Jongmin's stupidity.
"Fine..." Jongmin went outside and the 3 girls followed. He lead them to the place where Haeun and Jay last trained. Haeun looked at her scar on her shoulder. She wasn't going to lose again. And especially not to a newbie.
"I'll take Jihae, and you take Rinko. Got it?" Haeun told Jongmin and he nodded.
Haeun got out her sword instead of her gun-sword. Rinko got out her needles, but that was all. Jongmin and Jihae didn't take anything out. All they had was their magic.
Rinko threw one of her needles at Jongmin, but a magic circle surrounded him and a shield of air was there. Another magic circle surrounded Rinko and suddenly, she couldn't breathe as well as before.
"What are you doing to me?!" She shouted at Jongmin.
"I'm taking away some of your oxygen. You better use magic."
A red magic circle surrounded Rinko and then fire bursted the air, her oxygen came back to her and she ran to Jongmin. She threw one of her needles without Jongmin noticing and it hit him. His left arm was now paralyzed.
Haeun dashed at Jihae with her sword. She sliced and Jihae jumped back. She kind of stumbled but regained her balance and set her hands on fire.
"A fire mage, huh?" Haeun smirked and blew really hard, aiming at her hands. It surprised Jihae to see that she just blew the fire and it disappeared like blowing on a candle.
"You can't use fire on me. I'll just blow it out." A magic circle appeared around Haeun's hand and her wind glove was there. She ditched her sword and decided to use magic.
She clawed at Jihae and she dodged. Jihae couldn't use fire because she knew that Haeun would just blow it out. and grabbed the nearest rock beside her and threw it. Haeun dodged it, of course.
Suddenly, they heard a scream and they instantly looked at Rinko. She was on the ground, crawling away from a spider.
Jongmin was dumb founded. He walked up to the spider and put an air barrier around it so it would just die from lose of oxygen. But suddenly, the spider got bigger and bigger then the barrier eventually broke. Jongmin jumped back in horror.
"I'll just burn it." Jihae finally spoke and she jumped to the spider. Both her hands got filled with fire and she slashed both of them at the same time. 2 fire blades came running down the spider and it shrieked.
Haeun had to cover her ears. "Who knew spiders can shriek?"
After a while, the spider was ashes.
"Well.... that spider was unexpected..." Jongmin spoke and Haeun just laughed. Jongmin joined her and the two newbies had no idea why they were laughing. Rinko looked at them and couldn't help but join.
Jihae thought these three were crazy, but a little smile formed on her face.
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Rain sensed the magic power that being released from the four. But then he looked outside and two little girls running outside caught his attention.
"Is that Mei and Kei? What are they doing in Yui..." Rain thought to himself.
 
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Congratulations to Beastbabie and POPPIN_KPOP!!!~~~~ Sorry if I didn't really portray your characters good. :\.... They were kind of difficult to portray since they were just meeting the guild and all... And the fight scene . Admit it. I'm still holding back all the intense ones for Guild Wars. I can't make them try to kill each other because this is just training. [Message to Kamiru] I used your back-up ulzzan instead, hope that's okay with you.
Anyway, tell me what you think about this. :) I left you guys with suspense right? Right? Right? No?..... okay..
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_shelly
#1
Chapter 20: You can use mine, I don't mind I love this story. I'll send you the link in a little bit
jokerkkhe22
#2
Chapter 20: Oh my god I just saw your update! Ah its sad that you're not going to continue it here anymore, but turning it into a comic series! Oh my god oh my god! If you still want my character, you're free to morph my character to your liking! http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/285468
aniyababo
#3
Chapter 20: hi there! and aw, it's sad that you won't be updating this here anymore-- but it's down right cool of you to want to turn it into a comics/graphic novel! anyway, i'm alright with you using my character! if you still want him, that is OTL
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/279464
Table_cookiE
#4
Chapter 20: You're alive!! ^-^ I don't mind if you use my character if you're going to pick it to keep.
Here's the link again bellow:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/276171
yodaismystyle
#5
Chapter 20: oh gosh! you're alive! haha. i don't mind if you'll use my character--if i'm going to be picked.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/275418
yodaismystyle
#6
I miss this...
-xmunstrr
#7
Chapter 18: omg two updates~!omg. i'm dying at hara and danyoung. that was hilarious. tbh, i'd be pretty scared too if someone threatened me as badly as hara did to danyoung. lol. an angry, pregnant hara is someone i do not want to deal with. and minam. aw. the cute little moment he had with the mystery girl. don't fight it minam, don't fight the feeling ( omg, what am i even writing? ).

poor daehyun. he's spent all his time worrying about jino. ( where in the world is jino sandiego? ) aw, he shouldn't be so hard on himself, the poor bby. jino's gunna come back safe and sound...( well i hope. for daehyun's sake ). i wonder what mist is planning...hm. omg, yass. more hara and danyoung. lol at the group's reaction to the pregnancy news (especially youngjae omfg.) youngjae's a bit too eager to replace hara, lol and maeum's "that's cray, qrl." i'm cry.

anyways, thanks for the updates. they were fab. <3
yodaismystyle
#8
tao and luhan, first thing i saw. poor daehyun if i were you i kicked those two of out the room but i pity daehyun and mist, i know it's hard for them. i hope they could see him asap so daehyun could get his rest and stop from worrying. it is hard to keep a promise and once you broke it, guilt will eat you alive. Danyong and Hara, i just can't help but fret about those two. Oops the guild master just came in hahaha tsk! they were loud -.-

i did not actually expect you to have an update and I was so impatient to read the next chapter this past few days but thankfully you updated. I really don't mind you having a slow update as long as you still think of updating it but it is still nice seeing a frequent update from you since the story is already starting and everyone cannot wait for the guild war. so it is up to you. i know it bothers alot when you handles other stories but you can combine the two - short/mid but fast update and slow update :D
Transparent
#9
Chapter 18: Yay this story updated again! :D
Thanks for updating twice too. It was awesome to be able to read both of them at once. xD
Mmmm... I think short/med updates would be good. Then the readers won't be overwhelmed with all the new stuff at once? I'm not sure. Haha. xD
_shelly
#10
Chapter 18: Poor, Jino wonder why they took him? I hope they find him alive and well