Title: The Goukon
Author: Lee_Sulli_18
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Title: 4/5
Appearance: 4/5
Description & Foreword: 13/15
Plot: 26/30
Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation: 26/30
Flow: 8/10
Interest: 4/5
Total: 85/100
Grade: B

Title:
Keke at first I didn't know the meaning of the title! But you stated the meaning, so 4! :)

Appearance:
Picture matches with characters.

Description & Foreword:
Good description! It doesn't ! Have confidence in yourself! :)

Plot:
CUTEEE! Who would have ever thought of meeting through a group date(aka Goukon)? Haha Taemin as Takumi xD

Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation:
Good. Not many spotted.

Flow:
Not too fast, not too slow :) 

Other Comments:

Personally, I actually ship Taelli! <3 I mean they are so cute together, who wouldn't ship them? :) The storyline is cutee. The idea of a goukon is great! FERRIS WHEEL! Omg I love them ^-^ I loved the part "ending the story with a kiss~" Continue writing! Your writing is good! :)

How To Improve:

1. Colour-Coded Dialogs - I kind of got confused at some dialogs as I get mixed up with the colour. I suggest in the Foreword or Description, you put something like this:
Words in Purple is Sulli.
Words in Purple Italic are Sulli's thoughts.
So people would remember that and not get confused. 

Done^^ :)