Title: School, Friends, Love
Author: candycane96
[STORY LINK]

Title: 4/5
Appearance: 5/5
Description & Foreword: 13/15
Plot: 26/30
Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation: 26/30
Flow: 8/10
Interest: 4/5
Total: 86/100
Grade: B

Title:
Good title C:

Appearance:
Has poster and character pictures.

Description & Foreword:
Good description!

Plot:
Not that common! 

Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation:
Not many spotted.

Flow:
Good flow of the story.

Interest:
Quite interested, it's a good plot C:

Other Comments:

It's a nice idea! My L.Joe baby is in it too! <3

How To Improve:

1. Location of the scene - a bit confusing
►Chapter 1:
Orig. Starts off at café. (Tea Leaves)
Should Be: Starts off at café Tea Leaves.

2. NAME! - Quite important!
►Most of the chapters you put Byunghun(L.Joe) as Byunghyun! Don't confuse the readers! :)

Done^^