Two Hearts by _Cieca_

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Title: Two Hearts
Author: _Cieca_
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Title: 5/5
Appearance: 3/5
Description & Foreword: 14/15
Plot: 27/30
Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation: 29/30
Flow: 7/10
Interest: 4/5
Total: 89/100
Grade: B

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Title:
Good title C:

Appearance:
No poster but since it's a oneshot, it's okay C:

Description & Foreword:
Good description!

Plot:
I've never read a story like yours before!It's a nice story but poor Siwon haha.

Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation:
Omg, English is your third language? But I hardly spotted any mistakes!! Or even close to none!

Flow:
Good :)

Interest:
Nice story, the description made me want to read this!

 

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mimikkyu
#1
Thank you for your review OuO <3
Forevertogether
#2
Thank you. I love the review and I'll try harder next time.
:D
mimikkyu
#3
Wow your reviews are quite helpful, mind helping me a bit? :)

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/246841/the-answer-that-will-change-you-you-kai-exo12


Hope you will like it :)
_Cieca_
#5
i've read your review, thank you.. :D
i'm glad there's no significant grammatical mistake and the story interests you well. :)
baboracoon
#6
Wow! Thanks a lot for the review ~
Will post it soon :D
Thankss again!!
Well, yeah there's a lot of grammatical mistake I've done :(
_Cieca_
#7
Please give me a review~
story link: http://
www.asianfanfics.com/
story/view/234853

umm English is my third language and i tried to stick to the prompt so some things were deliberately left in vague. but please be honest, i'm open to suggestion and positive criticism. :)
baboracoon
#8
Please read mine! :D
I'm curious why ppl subscribed but no comment ~
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/197251/welcome-home-hoya-angst-hoya-infinite-romance-woohyun
gure321 #9
Thank You So Much!! I will fix the errors later on :)
and, about the guess u made, ... I can not say anything :P Well, I can say your almost right! :)

Again, thank you for reading my story and fixing some mistakes I made! :D