dOes hE nOT lOvE mE?! by Forevertogether

Title: dOes hE nOT lOvE mE?!
Author: Forevertogether
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Title: 4/5
Appearance: 4/5
Description & Foreword: 12/15
Plot: 26/30
Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation: 29/30
Flow: 8/10
Interest: 4/5
Total: 87/100
Grade: B

Title:
Unnecessary capitals. Can just be: Does He Not Love Me?

Appearance:
Has a poster :)

Description & Foreword:
Good description. But the bold gave me a headache...

Plot:
Not that common plot! Great originality! :D

Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation:
Not many mistakes spotted! Good vocabulary used!

Flow:
Good Flow <:

Interest:
Jaejoong :D

Sorry I took so long with your review! -bows- AFF was down recently and I couldn't access it on my mobile.

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mimikkyu #1 Aug 17, 2012 17:19:02

Thank you for your review OuO <3

Forevertogether #2 Aug 7, 2012 13:26:37

Thank you. I love the review and I'll try harder next time.
:D

mimikkyu #3 Aug 7, 2012 04:26:15

Wow your reviews are quite helpful, mind helping me a bit? :)

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/246841/the-answer-that-will-change-you-you-kai-exo12

Hope you will like it :)

Forevertogether #4 Jul 23, 2012 00:20:39

Cab you please read my fanfic..
Here it is: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/109363/does-he-not-love-me-abuse-dbsk-drama-jaejoong-taeyang-marriage-dennisoneil

Btw it's rated..

_Cieca_ #5 Jul 21, 2012 21:57:45

i've read your review, thank you.. :D
i'm glad there's no significant grammatical mistake and the story interests you well. :)

baboracoon #6 Jul 20, 2012 22:41:37

Wow! Thanks a lot for the review ~
Will post it soon :D
Thankss again!!
Well, yeah there's a lot of grammatical mistake I've done :(

_Cieca_ #7 Jul 17, 2012 07:57:02

Please give me a review~
story link: http://
www.asianfanfics.com/
story/view/234853

umm English is my third language and i tried to stick to the prompt so some things were deliberately left in vague. but please be honest, i'm open to suggestion and positive criticism. :)

baboracoon #8 Jul 16, 2012 07:28:50

Please read mine! :D
I'm curious why ppl subscribed but no comment ~
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/197251/welcome-home-hoya-angst-hoya-infinite-romance-woohyun

gure321 #9 Jul 4, 2012 09:42:48

Thank You So Much!! I will fix the errors later on :)
and, about the guess u made, ... I can not say anything :P Well, I can say your almost right! :)

Again, thank you for reading my story and fixing some mistakes I made! :D