Title: Welcome Home, Hoya
Author: baboracoon
[STORY LINK]

Title: 4/5
Appearance: 5/5
Description & Foreword: 13/15
Plot: 27/30
Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation: 26/30
Flow: 7/10
Interest: 4/5
Total: 86/100
Grade: B

Title:
Good title C:

Appearance:
Nice layout and poster.

Description & Foreword:
Good description, nice idea of having an inspiration song.

Plot:
Not a common plot, original :D

Grammar, Vocabulary & Punctuation:
Not that many spotted.

Flow:
Good flow.

Interest:
Hoya and Woohyun <3 Keke

Other Comments:

I wonder who will get Jae In in the end! I hope it's Woohyun, though. It's actually not a common plot, which gets the reader's attention. However, you might have to add in more drama to make your story interesting.

How To Improve:

1. Your Author's Note at the top of every chapter - Wrong tense! ><
►Orig. Ignore all the mistakes I might made.
Should Be: Ignore all the mistakes I might make.
OR: Ignore all the mistakes I have made.

2. Grammatical/Vocabulary/Spelling Errors:
►Chapter 1:
Orig: Every one stepped out from the plane, included someone that just came home from his long flight.
Should Be: Everyone stepped out of the plane, including someone that just came home from a long flight.

Done!! ^^ If I spot more mistakes I will include them! :)