Words With a Hidden Meaning...?

Description

"Let's break up", she said with sad eyes...

It was a warm spring day in Los Angeles, California. They were sitting near their tree in the park, where they usually hangout. It was like every other day since they started to date. Go to school, hangout for a bit, and go home. But today was different

"What?" the man with brown hair said in confusion. 

"Eunhyuk, let's breakup," she said again as her beautiful blonde hair blew in the wind.

There was a silence. 

"After all we been through...?"

She didn't answer. All she could do but cry quietly.

Was it........ really over......................? 

 

Main Characters: 

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Name: Park Gyuri

Title: The Goddess, Queenka

Ethicity: French, Korean, and American

Language: English, Korean, and a little French

Personality: Shy, Caring, Like a mother, Opposite of Eunhyuk 

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Name: Lee Eunhyuk

Ethicity: French, Korean, and American

Language: Korean and English 

Nickname: The Player, Kingka

Personality: Talkitive, Caring towards the one's he love, Opposite of Gyuri

Foreword

This is a side story for my other fanfic called ,"A Dancer's Secret". If you are interested please check it! 

I'm sorry if my fanfic will . Tell me if it sounds like a similar story, I don't want it to seem like I'm copying anyone. So please tell me and I'll remove this story right away. >.< This idea just came up into my mind so yeah.

Comments

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Min_RaaYoung
#1
Chapter 8: I give this fanfic 10/10 stars
*this fanfic was perfect with all the sweet moment between gyuri and eunhyuk
*Even they breakout but they still love each other
* I hope you will write more good fanfics next time
* I hope this fanfic will help me to understand 'A Dancer's Secret' better
joelleste
#2
Chapter 8: such a nice story...
you should make a sequel tho..
Promi53ToB3li3v3 #3
Chapter 1: SEQUAL!!!!:)
Ichigatsu #4
I wish I commented earlier. I really adore Hyukri, I found the trial-date cute and that their real date was really sweet. Its cute how Gyuri got jealous of Hyoyeon and Eunhyuk when Hyoyeon was only his cousin~ but in misunderstanding was bad too it hurt Eunhyuk. I liked that Gyuri found him and that it ended off good. I just love how during the tree part it said Eunhyuk+Gyuri=forever ^o^ but they broke up :[ I hope you could bring them together somehow a squeal? Anyways I liked it!
NicoriLove
#5
Ow the end? didn't see that coming huhuhu but I love the unspoken mutual understanding between them. & the engraving words on the tree gives me a longing feeling.
absentis #6
Aigoo I love it!!
sskahino
#7
this is good. hopefully you'll make more hyukri stories in the future :)
Catalina390 #8
wow the end.. omg miss this the most
omgcake
#9
@ASZCOLE haha thanks, and yes kevin and nicole are siblings but not blood related. by the way thank you for commenting. :D
@Calina390 I hoped you like it ^^ Thanks for commenting
@MI12rotic hehe i know right, lets hope they stay together :)
@_ranikf thanks i hope you keep reading it too the end ^^. Thank you for commenting.
@rion_01 thanks for commenting ^^