Calling Yonglulu "Unexpected Love"

Title: “Unexpected Love”
Author: Yonglulu
Title, Description/ Foreword: 10 /10 
Plot: 20/20
Originality: 10/10
Enticement: 10/10
Clarity: 9/10
Functionality: 9/10- (Chances to formulate and make ideas)
Grammar/Spelling: 14/15
Characters: 40/40
Development: 9/10
Uniqueness: 8/10
Description: 8/10
Structure: 29/30
Organization: 9/10
Topic Standings: 10/10
Flow: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment : 20/20
Total: 208/225 (A-) 92.4 %
Ending Comments: Your story is really good so far! All you need is to work on your grammar in some places, use spell-check, and re-read! Otherwise, this story is amazing!