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Review VietzxDuy "Friends Or More?"

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Title: “Friends Or More?”
Author: VietzxDuy
Title, Description/ Foreword: 7/10 
Plot: 20/20
Originality: 10/10
Enticement: 10/10
Clarity: 19/10
Functionality: 10/10- (Chances to formulate and make ideas)
Grammar/Spelling: 13/15
Characters: 40/40
Development: 10/10
Uniqueness: 10/10
Description: 10/10
Structure: 30/30
Organization: 10/10
Topic Standings: 10/10
Flow: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment : 20/20
Total: 219/225 (A+) 97.3%

Ending Comments: It would have been better if you took your Description and Forward for the story, and switched them. And there was a few spelling errors here and there but that’s a very minor detail. Overall so far, that was the highest score earned from me by anyone yet. So great job~! Be sure to keep writing and remember, everyone has room to improve.

 

 

 

 

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slyferris
#1
I requested for a review, thanks :D
AllRiseChoikang #2
Hi! I'm going to ask for a graphic! :)) thanks in advance!
Shyvana
#3
Requested for a review~ Thanks in advance ^^
VietzxDuy
#4
Thanks for the review chingu! Much appreciated! ^_^
VietzxDuy
#5
I requested :P waiting for it to be reviewed ^^
eemsme
#6
i just filled in the form. i hope i did it the right way.. :D
eemsme
#7
is it possible for me to request a poster for a story off mine.
Yonglulu
#8
OMG thanks for the review ^^;; I'll try to be more careful when writing cuz my biggest fault is spelling
I already put a link back to the shop btw~
& thanks again for the review :D
inspirit_04
#9
where's the form?