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Review VietzxDuy "Friends Or More?"
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Title: “Friends Or More?”
Author: VietzxDuy
Title, Description/ Foreword: 7/10
Plot: 20/20
Originality: 10/10
Enticement: 10/10
Clarity: 19/10
Functionality: 10/10- (Chances to formulate and make ideas)
Grammar/Spelling: 13/15
Characters: 40/40
Development: 10/10
Uniqueness: 10/10
Description: 10/10
Structure: 30/30
Organization: 10/10
Topic Standings: 10/10
Flow: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment : 20/20
Total: 219/225 (A+) 97.3%
Ending Comments: It would have been better if you took your Description and Forward for the story, and switched them. And there was a few spelling errors here and there but that’s a very minor detail. Overall so far, that was the highest score earned from me by anyone yet. So great job~! Be sure to keep writing and remember, everyone has room to improve.
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