Review for karexkono "Black Butterfly"

Title: "Black Butterfly"
Author: karexkono
Title, Description/ Foreword: 10/10 
Plot: 18/20
Originality: 9/10
Enticement: 5/10
Functionality: 8/10- (Chances to formulate and make ideas)
Grammar/Spelling: 13/15
Characters: 37/40
Development: 6/10
Uniqueness: 10/10
Realistic: 8/10
Functionality: 8/10
Structure: 22/30
Organization: 6/10
Topic Standings: 9/10
Flow: 4/10
Overall Enjoyment: 19/20
Total: 192/225 (B) 85%
Ending Comments: With just a little more work, you will have a perfect score!
 

I have read your story so far and I think it is amazing! There are a few suggestions I have though!
1.) Usually using two quotation marks shows a character's speaking. While single quotaion marks show a sentence or quote inside another sentence or qoute.
2.) Slightly larger text will help the readers ALOT! The text is kinda small and hard to read! Bigger text may increase readers believe it or not!
3.) There are some parts where you can use italics to emphasise certain words to leave a mysterious feeling if you wanted!

Now comes the commentary! Nothing bad of course!
There are a few parts where the character names got mixed up or misplaced in the text causing slight confusion! And a few spelling errors as well!

Always remember to use spell check! Re-read before posting! And keep writing!
These are small mistakes that can be fixed easily and will end up giving you even more subscribers!
Good luck! And thank you for coming to Celestial Graphic & Review Shop with your story!

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