River, Me and You

Granting Requests [CLOSED]
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OTP: Wheesa

Characters: Jung Wheein, Ahn Hyejin

Context: River scene, poem like story telling, Hyejin is feeling through her feelings without realizing she likes Wheein and thought Wheein needed comforting. Wheein was thinking through her feelings and realized she really likes Hyejin so she tries to be direct this time (after a few failed attempts). (idk how to mark this is idk what this is guys its TRASH TO ME)

A/N to requestor: So I said the original got deleted by my stupidity right? Yeah and I was like ok so lets do 'em differently and boom I ed myself over by saying I'll make it into a poem-esque story only for me to realize how horrible I am at ENGLISH POEMS. I thought I wouldn't do this horribly since I have written several Balagtasan works but wow man this is garbage and I got nothing else honestly... sorry... to the one who requested this...

A/N: Balagtasan is a debate style poem recital by the way. I wrote one about English vs Filipino (in both languages) and independent women (Gabriela Silang) vs nurturing women (Maria Clara). SO WITH THAT IN MIND I THOUGHT I COULD MAKE THIS WORK. I was VERY INCORRECT. So you guys get today my bad y'alls the chef is not cheffing.

 

 

Hey, you

She would start

I’d look at her

She had those eyes again

 

We walk hand-in-hand

Just by the river

 

Hey, you

I would say, thinking of questions

Indirect solutions, to get her to tell me

How I can help her

 

We talk, looking ahead, as we walk

Just by the river

 

If you would have someone to go home to and cry to, who would it be?

She asks, always with hypotheticals in her head

I would hum in thought, playing with might’ve and maybe

I’d steal a glance again, smile presenting feelings- all unsaid

 

Then I look forward again, as we follow the flow

Of the river

 

Do you think it’d be necessary?

She retorts, always answering me with a question

I look at

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inamoka
I am not a patient person. I'm trying to be respectful but it isn't easy to be if you aren't being respected in the first place. As much as I love seeing giddy comments, I'm disabling it. This last fic was scheduled for tomorrow but I'm uploading it now and closing this. I'm done. Bye.

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inamoka
#1
Apologies for my tone in the author's notes. I just wanted to finally set my foot down. I was willing to do stories and grant wishes but before being willing to do those, I'm a human person with dignity. That means, like you, I have the need to be respected. All I asked was a simple subscribe, read my terms, and check the status of the fic. I was even really worried about people subscribing at first but only few were suggesting. I did not force people to suggest, I respected them and was grateful that they returned it.

However, I cannot say the same for everyone. I have no tolerance for blatant disrespect towards me or anyone else within my vicinity. I do not need any apologies, this matter is not personal to me and it isn't that deep. But that does not make the disrespect I was slapped with less harmful or real.

Do better and respect authors that do these for free by reading their terms. Be mindful next time. I'm not one to block people here since they just might have done an oopsie or was just really down that day and that's fine. It's okay to be sad. It's okay to need something. What isn't okay is to act like people owe it to you. What's not okay is acting like your support will put anyone you support in a position to owe it to you. What is blatantly disrespecting is demanding for something that you don't even give others.

Please, from the sincerest part of my arteries, just do better. Not for me but for yourself and everyone else around you.
Frozen_J #2
Chapter 11: No angsty hwabyul pwease 🥺
Sksapphire #3
Can you please accept my request on a story in which yong is the teacher and byul is the student with not too much age difference?
hancrone
#4
Chapter 9: i hope we can have more Moonsun lovey dovey :) lovely authornim <3
_moomoo_nim #5
Chapter 9: awww🥰
wheesun1721 #6
Chapter 6: OH DAMN
acixvi
#7
I've got an idea for some spicy moonsun on and off camera at the same time,
you know that Netflix's show "Single inferno" ?
i leave you the choice eather the show didn't plan as it ahould and they just fall for each other or omegaverse version alpha and omega
get the idea ?
devyl22
#8
I want to request long distance relationship moonsun. One day they meet each other and byul propose. Happy ending pls 😀
grimlock10
#9
Chapter 8: love this! thank you 😊
moon__trash
#10
Chapter 8: I love your writing!! It's very original <3

Can I request a Moonsun hurt-comfort type fic?