Wake up

Tainted Poems

You should wake up and realize

Realize I love you

I’m waiting for the moment you awaken

And face that crushing truth

 

Go ahead

Say what you feel

Reject me, embrace me

But don’t ignore me

Don’t keep me at arms length yet still give me that sliver of hope

 

I’m patient

But I’m not sure how much longer I can wait

I’m hopeful

But you intimidate me, so I become discouraged

I’m in love and brave

But I’m not sure you are, so I become hesitant

I know I love you

But you don’t know this do you?

 

Wake up

It’s obvious

All you have to do is actually look at me

Turn away from those girls that would break you

And look at me

I’m patient, I’m hopeful, I’m brave…I’m in love

 

You see now don’t you?

I love you

What’s your next move?

Walk closer, step back

Make a choice

But remember…

I love you

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hehe :) soooo? What'd you think? Be honest!

Sorry it didn't rhyme for all you rhyme lovers out there~

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Nova_crystallis #1
Chapter 3: Cool,i cant make a poem this long...i'm lack of idea...
Peachddu
#2
These are amazing ;A;
I can't even imagine writing poems as well as you do(can't write poems at all D;)
BunnifiedTMGN
#3
Your poems are really lovely, and I find my self singing them in a tune *U*
kpopartory
#4
I wish, more people would read these, and enjoy your poems
watermelon
#5
Hello(: !
Your poems are really cool, especially " My Dream Sanctuary" ^^ ~
Hwaiting ! :D
alleruse #6
These are lovely! :-)
lovly39
#7
Awwww Thanks!!! :D
PurpleMidLuv
#8
Ikr? it's so beautiful and amazing!!!!<br />
I love all your poems xD<br />
PopCandii33
#9
Just Beautifull!~ =D These could easily make a song!!~ =D GOSH~~!! If I tried making a poem I would die!!!~ BUT YOU JUST DO IT SO EASILY!~ xDD Sorry for not commenting for a long time but my computer died...Thanks to my daddy! But HE bought me a new one so all good! xD HWAITINGG!!~♥
lovly39
#10
@imsosofia <br />
Hello ^.^<br />
Obviously you're a poem writter yourself! :D <br />
That way of saying patient was rather explicit and really did give a mental picture and the words were beautiful :3 <br />
And I just write poems to write them, your advice is appriciated :3 and maybe I'll try the mental picture think<br />
Thanks for caring enough to give advice! :D <br />
And I can't hate you lol I love advice