My Dream Sanctuary

Tainted Poems

I want to escape

I want to escape from reality

To a world entirely made up by me

A world were there is no scorn or hurt

A place where your sentences aren't short and curt

 

 

Yes I shall escape I shall enter that place

Where I can feel my heart race

Where I can love you in the open

 

 

My place where my love flows freely

That place where you love me

You stare only at me

Say I'm all you need

I'll let you take the lead

I'll embrace only you

I'll forever only speak words that are true

For you I would do all that

In hope of calling you 'Mine'

 

 

Please hold me captive in this blissful illusion

I'll annihilate those remaining feelings that cause you confusion

So keep me here

Don't let me fall victim to my fear

 

 

Forever lie to me

Tell me the words I've always longed to hear

I can't stand the thought of you not being near

So continue to be my beautiful illusion

Don't say I'm an intrusion

 

 

"You're not the one I love...she is."

I won't open my eyes if it means losing this

Losing you

I don't want my dream to be through

 

 

Why couldn't I be born blind?

Then I wouldn't have seen you

Then I might not have fallen for you

 

 

Sometimes I wish I was blind...

So I wouldn't have to see how you love her and not me

Please make it so I can't see

I no longer wish to see

 

 

I open my eyes to reality

I'm not blind

You're still my beloved

And I'm still loveless

And it will remain that way...

Until my next dream

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Nova_crystallis #1
Chapter 3: Cool,i cant make a poem this long...i'm lack of idea...
Peachddu
#2
These are amazing ;A;
I can't even imagine writing poems as well as you do(can't write poems at all D;)
BunnifiedTMGN
#3
Your poems are really lovely, and I find my self singing them in a tune *U*
kpopartory
#4
I wish, more people would read these, and enjoy your poems
watermelon
#5
Hello(: !
Your poems are really cool, especially " My Dream Sanctuary" ^^ ~
Hwaiting ! :D
alleruse #6
These are lovely! :-)
lovly39
#7
Awwww Thanks!!! :D
PurpleMidLuv
#8
Ikr? it's so beautiful and amazing!!!!<br />
I love all your poems xD<br />
PopCandii33
#9
Just Beautifull!~ =D These could easily make a song!!~ =D GOSH~~!! If I tried making a poem I would die!!!~ BUT YOU JUST DO IT SO EASILY!~ xDD Sorry for not commenting for a long time but my computer died...Thanks to my daddy! But HE bought me a new one so all good! xD HWAITINGG!!~♥
lovly39
#10
@imsosofia <br />
Hello ^.^<br />
Obviously you're a poem writter yourself! :D <br />
That way of saying patient was rather explicit and really did give a mental picture and the words were beautiful :3 <br />
And I just write poems to write them, your advice is appriciated :3 and maybe I'll try the mental picture think<br />
Thanks for caring enough to give advice! :D <br />
And I can't hate you lol I love advice