Love

Tainted Poems

love is like a car crash...you never see it coming

you never hear the tires humming

suddenly feeling all dizzy

love not caring if you were busy

there was this strange ringing in your ears

love casting aside your fears

you feel as if you're completely detached from the rest of the world

your emotions unfurled

 

it's almost as if you're taken under a spell

you looked while your emotions fell

then comes the time when the desire to "truly know" a person evolves into "true love"

you feel your heart soar like a dove

suddenly you couldn't take your eyes off him

your willpower growing dim

you're overcome with desire

your heart burns like fire

loves mysterious like a myth

you never know who you might fall in love with 

 

This one isn't my favorite but it's still there ;)

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Nova_crystallis #1
Chapter 3: Cool,i cant make a poem this long...i'm lack of idea...
Peachddu
#2
These are amazing ;A;
I can't even imagine writing poems as well as you do(can't write poems at all D;)
BunnifiedTMGN
#3
Your poems are really lovely, and I find my self singing them in a tune *U*
kpopartory
#4
I wish, more people would read these, and enjoy your poems
watermelon
#5
Hello(: !
Your poems are really cool, especially " My Dream Sanctuary" ^^ ~
Hwaiting ! :D
alleruse #6
These are lovely! :-)
lovly39
#7
Awwww Thanks!!! :D
PurpleMidLuv
#8
Ikr? it's so beautiful and amazing!!!!<br />
I love all your poems xD<br />
PopCandii33
#9
Just Beautifull!~ =D These could easily make a song!!~ =D GOSH~~!! If I tried making a poem I would die!!!~ BUT YOU JUST DO IT SO EASILY!~ xDD Sorry for not commenting for a long time but my computer died...Thanks to my daddy! But HE bought me a new one so all good! xD HWAITINGG!!~♥
lovly39
#10
@imsosofia <br />
Hello ^.^<br />
Obviously you're a poem writter yourself! :D <br />
That way of saying patient was rather explicit and really did give a mental picture and the words were beautiful :3 <br />
And I just write poems to write them, your advice is appriciated :3 and maybe I'll try the mental picture think<br />
Thanks for caring enough to give advice! :D <br />
And I can't hate you lol I love advice