Your Love

Tainted Poems

I honestly thought we’d be together forever

But your love

It hurts my heart

Your love

It leaves me weak

I thought I needed love

 

But I can’t live like this

Everyday

You’re the only one for me

I look only at you

You’re beautiful, you’re lovely, you’re sad

You scurry around

You hide from me

Is my love nothing?

 

When we started you were joyful

You looked only at me

You were beautiful

You still are

But now it’s not just me that you see, is it?

No. You hide from me

You go to her

That other person

Why?

Is my love nothing?

 

Those words I should have said

Can I say them now?

Those words that hang from my lips

Like a rope around my neck

 

I honestly thought we would be forever

But your love

Your love hurts my heart

 

In the end you left me for good

I was left by you

Your words really hurt

But what hurt more was me

I never said what I should have

Will you still hear me?

Can I still say those words?

I love you 

 

 

Sorry that this doesn't rhyme but I thought I would try a non-rhyming poem...this came from the heart. Sorry if it's not good but this time I wrote it because I felt like I had to. I hope you're not too disappointed :) My beloved readers

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Nova_crystallis #1
Chapter 3: Cool,i cant make a poem this long...i'm lack of idea...
Peachddu
#2
These are amazing ;A;
I can't even imagine writing poems as well as you do(can't write poems at all D;)
BunnifiedTMGN
#3
Your poems are really lovely, and I find my self singing them in a tune *U*
kpopartory
#4
I wish, more people would read these, and enjoy your poems
watermelon
#5
Hello(: !
Your poems are really cool, especially " My Dream Sanctuary" ^^ ~
Hwaiting ! :D
alleruse #6
These are lovely! :-)
lovly39
#7
Awwww Thanks!!! :D
PurpleMidLuv
#8
Ikr? it's so beautiful and amazing!!!!<br />
I love all your poems xD<br />
PopCandii33
#9
Just Beautifull!~ =D These could easily make a song!!~ =D GOSH~~!! If I tried making a poem I would die!!!~ BUT YOU JUST DO IT SO EASILY!~ xDD Sorry for not commenting for a long time but my computer died...Thanks to my daddy! But HE bought me a new one so all good! xD HWAITINGG!!~♥
lovly39
#10
@imsosofia <br />
Hello ^.^<br />
Obviously you're a poem writter yourself! :D <br />
That way of saying patient was rather explicit and really did give a mental picture and the words were beautiful :3 <br />
And I just write poems to write them, your advice is appriciated :3 and maybe I'll try the mental picture think<br />
Thanks for caring enough to give advice! :D <br />
And I can't hate you lol I love advice