tainted

Tainted Poems

tainted by our own deception

forsaken by our own lack of perception

lies and sins we all know and do

impurities engulfing you

half a mind to tell a lie

half a mind to jump off a cliff knowing you can't fly

webs of fate entangle you

nothing you say can be true

you can't hold it in anymore

you've become tainted and impure 

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Nova_crystallis #1
Chapter 3: Cool,i cant make a poem this long...i'm lack of idea...
Peachddu
#2
These are amazing ;A;
I can't even imagine writing poems as well as you do(can't write poems at all D;)
BunnifiedTMGN
#3
Your poems are really lovely, and I find my self singing them in a tune *U*
kpopartory
#4
I wish, more people would read these, and enjoy your poems
watermelon
#5
Hello(: !
Your poems are really cool, especially " My Dream Sanctuary" ^^ ~
Hwaiting ! :D
alleruse #6
These are lovely! :-)
lovly39
#7
Awwww Thanks!!! :D
PurpleMidLuv
#8
Ikr? it's so beautiful and amazing!!!!<br />
I love all your poems xD<br />
PopCandii33
#9
Just Beautifull!~ =D These could easily make a song!!~ =D GOSH~~!! If I tried making a poem I would die!!!~ BUT YOU JUST DO IT SO EASILY!~ xDD Sorry for not commenting for a long time but my computer died...Thanks to my daddy! But HE bought me a new one so all good! xD HWAITINGG!!~♥
lovly39
#10
@imsosofia <br />
Hello ^.^<br />
Obviously you're a poem writter yourself! :D <br />
That way of saying patient was rather explicit and really did give a mental picture and the words were beautiful :3 <br />
And I just write poems to write them, your advice is appriciated :3 and maybe I'll try the mental picture think<br />
Thanks for caring enough to give advice! :D <br />
And I can't hate you lol I love advice