FIVE: Monster

Pureblood
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The sun is up and people are now out of their houses to do their morning walk, some with the elderlies, some with their pets. It was then I knew that it’s safe to leave Bomi’s apartment for me to prepare as another day started. 

The sunlight on my skin is my daily reminder of the love I have for Bomi, pins that I wouldn’t mind hurting. But this also made me realise such tragic reality of a vampire dead in love with a human.

 

 

The three of us, Eunji, Bomi and I were walking in the corridor towards our first class. And as I enter the room I was called by a guy who I’m having a hard time recalling who, “Chorong-ah!” The nerve of this weirdo to casually call me as if we’re friends. “Can we start on the project tonight? I mean, it’ll be nice if we get to finally do it since it’s due next week.” He said, right that group project which I’m paired with this dude.

“Can’t we have it tomorrow? I have something to do tonight.” I told him. Hoping that he’ll drop this project meeting as I really wanted to give Bomi that tteokbokki dinner.

“You have something planned for tonight?” Bomi asked with a defeated voice. “Maybe I’ll ask her some other time.” She thought and I’m here dying to know what that is all about.

“Well I have nothing other than my usual dinner with you.” I honestly said not thinking about the weirdo feeling that this girl is far more important than his grades.

“Dinner. Eat with her or just eat her?” Okay I’m sure my words doesn’t sound that dirty. What a ert.

“It’s fine, this project is more important. You work with him, I’ll work with Meung.” She told me and I know I have no say on this as she continued, “And if you miss me you can always come even if it’s late midnight. My door is always open for you.”

“Someone’s getting laid tonight.” His mind has spoken dirty words again and I don’t know why but I don’t like it coming from him. If I close my eyes to see better of his head I’m sure I’ll see Bomi and I.. doing it and that’s-

“You shut up!” I told him and he looks scared, he better be.

“I didn’t say anything?!”

“Just- 6pm, I’ll see you at the gate. If you’re not there, I’m going. And once we’re done with this project, I will leave.”

He just nod and let me be with Bomi alone in our seats. I should’ve worked on that project ahead of time then this wouldn’t have happened. Now I’m letting my Bomi-time suffer.

“You don’t have to be so hard on him.” Bomi told me quietly afraid that the guy would hear as he’s just 2 seats away.

“He’s making me uncomfortable.” I honestly told her but left the part that I’m hearing his dirty mind. “Bomi, if I happen to get everything done early.. I was wondering if we could have tteokbokki for dinner.” 

“Heol.” Bomi said but her mind says more, “Holy I was craving for tteokbokki!”

“I will be taking that ‘heol’ as a yes. I’ll pick you up tonight.” 

 

 

Right after the class I asked Eunji to keep an eye on Bomi while they work on the project and she gladly accepts as she understood the situation we’re in right now. With that at least I’m more at ease leaving Bomi out of my sight.

I went to the school gate as planned and waited for this weirdo to arrive. It’s still early but I swear, I’ll go once the clock drops at 6:01pm.

“Chorong-ah!” Damn. He’s earlier that I thought (or hoped for) he’ll be.

“Can you please not call me as if we’re friends? Park Chorong is fine.” I told him as I walk away for him to follow me to this cafe near our school.

I hate the idea that I’m out with this guy as people have been looking at us as a couple. Ew. If there’s anyone that I wanted to be seen out on a cafe it’s just Bomi. Wow. It’s amazing how I can’t get my mind off her.

This project is as easy as nut. Easy that I finished all the research in about.. 4 hours! Now that tteokbokki place is closed. Damnit. 

I check my phone and now I’m sure we’re in deep trouble as I saw 3 missed calls from Eunji and a message from Naeun.

From: Naeun

Bomi and Eunji are missing. I missed her calls but I’m positive that the Pyo clan is behind all this.

“Since I did all the work, the least you could do is compile these researches. I need to go.” I told him and before he even had the chance to hold me back, I rushed out of the place and a very familiar scent conquered my senses. 

It’s Bomi’s blood. HOW DARE THEY TOUCHED HER.

 

Following Bomi’s scent I found myself in front of this abandoned factory building. Now that she’s too close I’m having a hard time controlling myself. I’m gonna lose it. This monster inside me is taking over my body, my senses.

“Chorong unnie!” 

“Naeun?” I asked as I’m down the ground fighting my inner self. I overlooked the fact that I haven’t had

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pandanonymous
Oh how delighted I am with the amount of Chobom contents we had. My heart is full <3 It’s great to see the same people in the comment section, I am as always = forever grateful. Also sorry for dragging the chapters T.T Next one would be the battle between the Lone vamp/s and Rong! Stay a lil longer.

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Panda0619
#1
Chapter 23: Pandanonymous, I hope you would finish this story, as it's seriously a masterpiece.. it'll be a waste to keep it hanging..

and I probably speak for the many subscribers who are dying to know how it'll develop from here.. =)
AegyoPRASH
#2
Chapter 23: Pls tell me you’ll be able to finish this story author, I really need updates after today’s news that rongie is innocent! Yours is one of my favorites.
ckaz99
#3
Chapter 23: uweehee!! Having them together in this eases my worries greatly too HEHEHE it's fluff!! our couple!! before going into battle~ I have to say all that jumping off the cliff is really a heart attack from Yoon Bomi but well.. what other way is there to practice Chorong's death-defying stunt abilities? It's the right tension and yet there's the hilarity of the situation xD The little jealousy to begin with too! And ending it off with full sleep cuddles, the greasiness gone so abruptly pfftthahaha, but oooo "the one and only heir that I adore" - not even subtle!&@! My heart's been filled up again. I didn't realise they would reunite going into this battle, thinking it was Chorong's mission to prove, but now that they are, I'm treasuring that strength in togetherness even more.. T.T It's about fighting alongside each other in battle! And being with loved ones is strong, not weak at all. Thank you for the updateee<3
EarlySpring
#4
Chapter 23: The chapter begins with Chorong being very confident in her plan of attack: how many people she needs and what their role is going to be. Chorong has spent decades hunting ghouls and was very good at it, so of course she should be confident about her plan. Yet, just a few lines later, Chorong has that little moment where she starts feeling a bit anxious about her plan and questionning her decision to bring a small number of people with her... It's the simple things like this that always get me. The little moments that make the characters feel real. :D

When Chorong and her group started setting up their camp, I started thinking... Bomi has been keeping an eye on Chorong for so many years now, watching over her when she was doing commissions for the government, there's no way she's going to let Chorong go on her first leading battle without checking in on her. Surely enough, Bomi did not disappoint! She came back early, as Chorong pointed out, but no one is going to complain about it when it means getting sweet chobom moments. <3

That thought about people knowing Bomi as the next President, but Chorong knowing the real Yoon Bomi. <3 <3 <3

I'm happy Chorong is finally mastering her power. The fact that she was training with Bomi made it perfect.

In life, we usually associate comfort with warmth. But here, in this vampire story, Chorong compared Bomi's kiss and the comfort it brought her to a cold night. That was genius!

At the end of the chapter, when Chorong goes to talk with her people and Bomi slows down her steps... That moment was so perfect! This is Chorong's moment to showcase her leadership and Bomi knows that. With Bomi's high position in the vampire world, walking side by side with Chorong while she addresses her people could bring some confusion as to who is really calling the shots here (Chorong or the government). By walking behind Chorong, Bomi shows her support to "the great heir" without overshadowing her. This was such a key element for me, I never would've thought about it myself and I applaud you for including it.

And yes! Every Chobom update we had felt like a small victory. A step in the right direction on the path to get back our Chorong and Apink!
Panda0619
#5
Chapter 23: Wow this is becoming that relationship that many can only yearn for but only those blessed would encounter.. to fall in love and stay in love with someone who not only understands you quite well, but helps you grow and takes on the world with you..
phouse
#6
Chapter 23: can a vampire get a heart attack? I think chorong almost got one in this chapter

That being said, i like how on previous chapters her friends use bomi image to wake chorong's power while here bomi herself help chorong to master her power. bomi's crazy btw.
most of chobom moments are happy and serene, they really are water to the fire for each other :') anyway it's calm before the storm, and I really can't wait to see them kicking on their first mission together

Ps. Just like when she boldly held chorong waist in front of soeun, ofc she make sure everyone on the mission know chorong is hers. Bomi can act indifferent all she wants with chorong but I know a jealousy is when I see it :p
AegyoPRASH
#7
Chapter 23: Yoon Bomi knows how to not be discreet. Love their moments on this chap. Can’t wait for the battle
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 22: I'm finally here!! HAHAHA ah the chapter I've been looking forward to between my studies~ Chorong's becoming a leader woowoo! but there are many more things to question and be suspicious about. I wonder how every detail Chorong latches onto will play out? Things she's not being told, Hyungdon's unavailability in that time... Hmm! I'm so glad to see the conversation with Seungwoo after all this being resolved :) That lesson Chorong has to remember about her loved ones is echoing around with that. And 5 more days, how will that be~
Thank you for the chapter and on chobom day!! Right the photo ackkk not only Chorong but it's chobom and the first we've seen Chorong in forever! T.T I was already missing Bomi in this chapter too HAHA Chorong's feelings with being apart I just hold onto so easily :')
EarlySpring
#9
Chapter 22: Chorong has been having so many questions for so long and people have been rather evasive in their answers most of the time. Now that her ascension day is imminent, with all the responsibilities coming with it, plus the impending war, it makes sense that she wants answers now more than ever. Also, I find it fitting that Seungwoo ends up being the one to finally give her a little bit of information, giving the history between the two and the fact that he wasn't even supposed to know what he knows to begin with.

Chorong missing Bomi and the way you described it was such a sweet moment. <3
While on the subject... When Chobom were together, Chorong was able to put her negative thoughts aside. She was simply happy. But once she spends time away from Bomi and misses her, her insecurities about Bomi's position and the weight of their responsibilities all come bubbling back up to the surface. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. It's one of many examples that illustrates just how much the Chorong from this story is a well rounded and believable character. Her emotions are relatable and help us connect with her more.

"My conversation with Seungwoo after that council meeting hits me like that boulder thrown by Namjoo."
OMG, that metaphor! XD
And it's another great example of how you're able to make this world believable by inserting little moments or thoughts that are specific to it.

Thank you for the update, I'm looking forward to see what happens next! :)

And yes, Bomi's instagram post with Chorong... I think a lot of people got emotional over these pictures. I know I did! I've been missing Apink, Chorong and Chobom so much. When my sister and I saw the pictures, we literally hugged each other with teary eyes. :')
phouse
#10
Chapter 22: chorong already missing bomi on her way home(awww)and it reminds me of the times she waited bomi lifetimes to circle again.
she really went through a lot TT, and after bomi knows everything too no wonder they really can't keep their hand off each other now lol. the way they have four lifetimes of memory (especially chorong) but still act like they're on the first date always made me giddy ><

finally the siblings meet. good thing chorong and seungwoo meet now, the situation will be a whole lot different if they meet a few chapters back. so seungwoo come back home for her ascension day right? in five days and there's the mission too. i hope no unwanted happenings happened on those 5 days but hey the baton is on your hand ;)

i just like to pick up patterns and whatever information that intrigues me. i hope you wouldn't mind, and just ignore the question when it's necessary :))
just one more thing. all chorong questions and president's weird shenanigans will be explained when we know his power, isn't it?