THIRTEEN: Red Coat

Pureblood
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“This .” I’ve been scanning the whole commission board for a while now and there’s only one ghoul hunting job left available. It’s indicated that this is a commission ideal for a group of vampires to do but that’s not the reason why I have been avoiding this specific job. I have no doubts when it comes to my abilities. What’s been bothering me is its location, it’s way too far. 
 

It took me 3 days of traveling just to reach the said village. And to see a similar bar like what Namjoo and Hayoung introduced me to is such a bliss. “Guess I know where to stay for a while.” as I plan to start the job when the moon is high up.

Upon entering the bar, given that the night is young, there are only a few vampires around. The moment I sat down in the corner, I started planning my attack for tonight.

“As long as I stick to eliminating them and not having myself killed, I guess I’ll be fine.” I told myself as I folded the map after studying the best location to where I should come from. Then suddenly the confidence I have in myself is slowly starting to crumble at the thought of how things would end up if I die in the field. The village is too far from the city, I went solo in a job that’s meant for a party of 3 at least. Well, the only person to blame when I vanish is myself. 

“I can’t die when there are so many people waiting for me at home.” This sudden realization hit me hard when I thought of what my father kept on telling me, we’re family. 

“You should stop being a downer. You’ll make it, whatever that is you’re planning to do.” A lady joined me at the table but I didn’t bother to look at her as I’m not here to mingle or find my better half like what Hayoung said about this place. “I haven’t seen you around, not a local?”

“No, I’m not. I’m only here to finish a job.” I said trying not to move forward on our little chat.

“Not much of a talker are you? I’m Park Soeun by the way.” She said extending her hand and I took it. Then memories of how Bomi and I usually meet during the first day of school flash right before my eyes. 

“Park Chorong.”

“Holy sh- you’re Park- You really are!” Soeun exclaimed as she takes a good look at my face. But seriously? What’s with the excitement and jolly personality? It’s uncomfortable how I’m starting to see Yoon Bomi in her.

The way those eyes curve as she smiles, the positivity she radiates, her being this carefree and friendly stranger. It all reminds me of Bomi.

“I sure am.”

“You don’t look pleased. If you’re ashamed of what happened, don’t be.” Soeun said as she made herself comfortable at the seat in front of me sipping blood. “But losing someone so precious.. jeez I understand why you’re so pessimistic in life.”

“Seems like you’ve heard about us.”

“What do you mean ‘seems like’? Of course I’ve heard about you and Yoon Bomi!” hearing again the name of the woman I love.. mortifies me to my very soul. When will I learn to move on from this? “You’ve been the talk of the town ever since that controversial council meeting. Also, most of our kind in this village supports the president and his choice.” 

“Okay..” I honestly have no idea how to respond given that the president’s choice, whether the vampires support him or not.. has nothing to do with me. Where is Soeun leading me in this conversation? 

“More importantly, I’d like to say that I look up to you and the chosen one! I still believe that the two of you are destined for each other!” Now that’s interesting. I’m starting to get invested in knowing her thoughts about all this. It’s time for me to see everything from another person’s perspective. 

“Even after the rumors of Bomi and the President dating?”

“Call me crazy but that’s bull. I’ve read news about the whole meeting and I believe that Bomi risking her life just for you to be saved? It’s more than enough for me to stay on board to this ship!” 

“You’re funny.” She really is, “Thank you, for lifting my mood up.” I tried to listen to her thoughts but she seems to be really just saying everything out loud, and that’s when I started to let go of my guard. 

“If you two end up together, you owe me a drink! So stop being so sulky and get your together! I prefer the better version of you.”

“I’m sorry to disappoint you. You know what they say, never meet your heroes.” And with that, I ordered another pitcher of blood for us to share.

 

It’s crazy how I was able to keep a conversation going with a random stranger, Soeun really did make it easy for me to share how I honestly feel about everything. How I’ve been running away all these years, how I’ve been so hard on myself even though it really isn’t solely my fault.  

Seeing the whole story in someone else’s eyes sure helps and I’m glad that I’ve met this girl

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pandanonymous
Oh how delighted I am with the amount of Chobom contents we had. My heart is full <3 It’s great to see the same people in the comment section, I am as always = forever grateful. Also sorry for dragging the chapters T.T Next one would be the battle between the Lone vamp/s and Rong! Stay a lil longer.

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Panda0619
#1
Chapter 23: Pandanonymous, I hope you would finish this story, as it's seriously a masterpiece.. it'll be a waste to keep it hanging..

and I probably speak for the many subscribers who are dying to know how it'll develop from here.. =)
AegyoPRASH
#2
Chapter 23: Pls tell me you’ll be able to finish this story author, I really need updates after today’s news that rongie is innocent! Yours is one of my favorites.
ckaz99
#3
Chapter 23: uweehee!! Having them together in this eases my worries greatly too HEHEHE it's fluff!! our couple!! before going into battle~ I have to say all that jumping off the cliff is really a heart attack from Yoon Bomi but well.. what other way is there to practice Chorong's death-defying stunt abilities? It's the right tension and yet there's the hilarity of the situation xD The little jealousy to begin with too! And ending it off with full sleep cuddles, the greasiness gone so abruptly pfftthahaha, but oooo "the one and only heir that I adore" - not even subtle!&@! My heart's been filled up again. I didn't realise they would reunite going into this battle, thinking it was Chorong's mission to prove, but now that they are, I'm treasuring that strength in togetherness even more.. T.T It's about fighting alongside each other in battle! And being with loved ones is strong, not weak at all. Thank you for the updateee<3
EarlySpring
#4
Chapter 23: The chapter begins with Chorong being very confident in her plan of attack: how many people she needs and what their role is going to be. Chorong has spent decades hunting ghouls and was very good at it, so of course she should be confident about her plan. Yet, just a few lines later, Chorong has that little moment where she starts feeling a bit anxious about her plan and questionning her decision to bring a small number of people with her... It's the simple things like this that always get me. The little moments that make the characters feel real. :D

When Chorong and her group started setting up their camp, I started thinking... Bomi has been keeping an eye on Chorong for so many years now, watching over her when she was doing commissions for the government, there's no way she's going to let Chorong go on her first leading battle without checking in on her. Surely enough, Bomi did not disappoint! She came back early, as Chorong pointed out, but no one is going to complain about it when it means getting sweet chobom moments. <3

That thought about people knowing Bomi as the next President, but Chorong knowing the real Yoon Bomi. <3 <3 <3

I'm happy Chorong is finally mastering her power. The fact that she was training with Bomi made it perfect.

In life, we usually associate comfort with warmth. But here, in this vampire story, Chorong compared Bomi's kiss and the comfort it brought her to a cold night. That was genius!

At the end of the chapter, when Chorong goes to talk with her people and Bomi slows down her steps... That moment was so perfect! This is Chorong's moment to showcase her leadership and Bomi knows that. With Bomi's high position in the vampire world, walking side by side with Chorong while she addresses her people could bring some confusion as to who is really calling the shots here (Chorong or the government). By walking behind Chorong, Bomi shows her support to "the great heir" without overshadowing her. This was such a key element for me, I never would've thought about it myself and I applaud you for including it.

And yes! Every Chobom update we had felt like a small victory. A step in the right direction on the path to get back our Chorong and Apink!
Panda0619
#5
Chapter 23: Wow this is becoming that relationship that many can only yearn for but only those blessed would encounter.. to fall in love and stay in love with someone who not only understands you quite well, but helps you grow and takes on the world with you..
phouse
#6
Chapter 23: can a vampire get a heart attack? I think chorong almost got one in this chapter

That being said, i like how on previous chapters her friends use bomi image to wake chorong's power while here bomi herself help chorong to master her power. bomi's crazy btw.
most of chobom moments are happy and serene, they really are water to the fire for each other :') anyway it's calm before the storm, and I really can't wait to see them kicking on their first mission together

Ps. Just like when she boldly held chorong waist in front of soeun, ofc she make sure everyone on the mission know chorong is hers. Bomi can act indifferent all she wants with chorong but I know a jealousy is when I see it :p
AegyoPRASH
#7
Chapter 23: Yoon Bomi knows how to not be discreet. Love their moments on this chap. Can’t wait for the battle
ckaz99
#8
Chapter 22: I'm finally here!! HAHAHA ah the chapter I've been looking forward to between my studies~ Chorong's becoming a leader woowoo! but there are many more things to question and be suspicious about. I wonder how every detail Chorong latches onto will play out? Things she's not being told, Hyungdon's unavailability in that time... Hmm! I'm so glad to see the conversation with Seungwoo after all this being resolved :) That lesson Chorong has to remember about her loved ones is echoing around with that. And 5 more days, how will that be~
Thank you for the chapter and on chobom day!! Right the photo ackkk not only Chorong but it's chobom and the first we've seen Chorong in forever! T.T I was already missing Bomi in this chapter too HAHA Chorong's feelings with being apart I just hold onto so easily :')
EarlySpring
#9
Chapter 22: Chorong has been having so many questions for so long and people have been rather evasive in their answers most of the time. Now that her ascension day is imminent, with all the responsibilities coming with it, plus the impending war, it makes sense that she wants answers now more than ever. Also, I find it fitting that Seungwoo ends up being the one to finally give her a little bit of information, giving the history between the two and the fact that he wasn't even supposed to know what he knows to begin with.

Chorong missing Bomi and the way you described it was such a sweet moment. <3
While on the subject... When Chobom were together, Chorong was able to put her negative thoughts aside. She was simply happy. But once she spends time away from Bomi and misses her, her insecurities about Bomi's position and the weight of their responsibilities all come bubbling back up to the surface. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. It's one of many examples that illustrates just how much the Chorong from this story is a well rounded and believable character. Her emotions are relatable and help us connect with her more.

"My conversation with Seungwoo after that council meeting hits me like that boulder thrown by Namjoo."
OMG, that metaphor! XD
And it's another great example of how you're able to make this world believable by inserting little moments or thoughts that are specific to it.

Thank you for the update, I'm looking forward to see what happens next! :)

And yes, Bomi's instagram post with Chorong... I think a lot of people got emotional over these pictures. I know I did! I've been missing Apink, Chorong and Chobom so much. When my sister and I saw the pictures, we literally hugged each other with teary eyes. :')
phouse
#10
Chapter 22: chorong already missing bomi on her way home(awww)and it reminds me of the times she waited bomi lifetimes to circle again.
she really went through a lot TT, and after bomi knows everything too no wonder they really can't keep their hand off each other now lol. the way they have four lifetimes of memory (especially chorong) but still act like they're on the first date always made me giddy ><

finally the siblings meet. good thing chorong and seungwoo meet now, the situation will be a whole lot different if they meet a few chapters back. so seungwoo come back home for her ascension day right? in five days and there's the mission too. i hope no unwanted happenings happened on those 5 days but hey the baton is on your hand ;)

i just like to pick up patterns and whatever information that intrigues me. i hope you wouldn't mind, and just ignore the question when it's necessary :))
just one more thing. all chorong questions and president's weird shenanigans will be explained when we know his power, isn't it?